Deep poems

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xD. nice hobo. yeah i think i;ve heard that.

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that’s the only one that i feel comfortable sharing....

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heres a poem i had to write for my english class... sorry if its not very good...

I wish to be a thing of passion.
To sing the song which is composed,
By ceaseless mind and hungry soul.
To stand by man, my heart exposed.

To sing the song which is composed,
By human hand and sense unknown.
To stand by man, my heart exposed,
A thing that’s thought but rarely shown.

By human hand and sense unknown,
I reach for dreams that wait in sleep.
A thing that’s thought but rarely shown,
An unmasked voice, their meaning deep.

I reach for dreams that wait in sleep.
By ceaseless mind and hungry soul.
An unmasked voice, their meaning deep.
I wish to be a thing of passion.

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iv read so meany poems and writen so meany but none of them get to the point they alway talk about death love sadness and what ever elts i like short and to the point the one i liked was tim168 that was shor and to the point some poems i read are so differnt then what eney one can no i wrote one its called when i look out side well thaxs for reading god bless

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^^*nods* most poems are....

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umm... this is a poem for english also its more of a haiku

love is like a rose
it maybe sharp and painful
but its also sweet

i know it isnt that good... but just looking for something to do when i found this thread

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She’s confused
And emotionally abused
While he’s amused
She sits there in her puddle of tears
She had just experienced her biggest fear
Yelling at her friends to pass her another beer
He created a disaster
It was his heart she was after
Only if she knew that he was the grandmaster…
Of this game
Called love and pain
She sits there in shame
For he was the one to blame!
She takes a puff as she forgets his name.

Last edited 02 Mar 2009 01:20 am by lastdancewmaryjane

Long lost dreamer....

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I see your tears
As your feet touch
the cold that is..
rock bottom
I feel your fears
I didn’t even
try so for your
pain you can blame
me, I didn’t even cry
Not one single tear
I tried to keep it all
in here. You were
right know I’m exploding
I don’t know how much longer
I can contain this
beast.
Now for you I cry every day
and night it was my fault
and I can’t deal.
You praised me and I let you
down. Ashamed and only now
am I aware. Of what I have done
I’d kill myself but then I’d
just be letting you down again
I’m sorry and even though
your not here to hear it
I will say it again
I’m sorry forever I will
hold in me this guilt of
your goodbyes I never got
to hear. And the thankyou’s
I never said. And now your
words echo... I can still see
your beatiful faces..
forever haunting in my dreams
I close my eyes your there I’m
here to stay now if
your willing to give me another
chance.

caitlin

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moonlight tears

i walk on outside
with tears i confide
to my only light flys
its the moon in the sky

ive always wandered at night
not caring about dark fright
i look up at the darkness
wanting to confess

bad poem i wrote in only 2 minutes lol

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a before b, d after c, e after d, f before g, h and then i, k after j, l before m, n o and then p, q and r s, t u then v, w and x, end with y and then z.

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cheese on my noob, smelly and yellow, flaking like pastry, all tangy and tasty. dew drop on head, sticky and clear, a hard stick of candy, when pussy is near. lips sucking hard, around my big stick, while balls bang her chin, as she give a good lick. legs open wide and spread far apart, i go deep inside as she rips a mean fart.

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There once was a guy named Dave,
Who dug up a whore from a grave.
She was moldy and shitty,
And only had but one titty
But look at the money he saved!


There was a young lady named Alice,
Who used dynamite for a phallus.
They found her vagina
In North Carolina,
And part of her asshole in Dallas.

ROFLCAKE

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My best friend,
An angel from above did send.
Miraculously appearing,
Steadfast and never disappearing.
This companion from on high,
Enlightened to understand each and every sigh.
Understands my life-long journeys,
Consoles and never doubts or worries.
Superabundant love and hope,
Blessed with courage to ever cope.
Thank you Lord for sending me,
Such a beautiful soul to see.

What do you guys think?

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bitter sweet-


love is hate, under the mask
love is a labor, a forsaken
task, if you have a will, your heart will tare
and love will spill every where.
love as a arrow seeps threw,under the mask it will
never show threw, we are all victims
me and you so why do we do.
its a game, its all are shame,
until we can learn to tame,
we are all to blame,and love remains the same.
under the mask, love is a labor, a forsaken task
so don’t say you love me if you have a will
your heart will tare
and love will spill every where.

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Blessed are the angels that sings from out your ass
Blessed is the bullshit that thou spoke with an iron cast
Blessed are the heavens from where god shits upon the earth
Blessed is my massive cock with it’s 8” giant girth

Cassidy.

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I do love all your poetry. Expesially LeClairity’s poem, got me thinking. Anyways, I used this for my goSupermodel profile, thank you all!

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Ronnie


Born together, we clung to each other,
Twas so warm and safe inside our dear Mother.
Then our world collapsed, all violence and noise,
We heard a strange voice say, “You’ve got two boys”.
Slapped on our butts we started to cry,
World upside down, heads low, feet high.

We grew and learned love for our parents and each other,
I finally learned, I had a twin brother.
Our thoughts were as one, our hearts were in sync,
We played together, ran with our arms linked.
I’d say, “Mommy can we..." and you’d say "...play outside?"
We’d play Hide and Seek, knowing where the other would hide.

We faced the world as one, knowing each others thought,
When we had done wrong, we always both got caught.
We lived, we loved, we had so much fun,
We slept together, when the daytime was done.
Our lives were so happy even when we were tested,
How were we to know, we were being molested.

As the years went by it finally stopped,
The monsters were gone, they were caught by the cops.
We learned from our Dad, those actions were wrong,
But we still had longings, we had done them so long.
We talked to each other, our minds both the same,
Our Dad tried to help, told us we weren’t to blame.

Life passes so quick, in a blink it is gone,
Suddenly were twelve, we faced a new dawn.
One day we were playing, just crossing the street,
You saw the car that we couldn’t beat.
You pushed me and shoved me out of the way,
You gave your life for me on that terrible day.

My heart had been broken, I felt empty and dead,
Where were your thoughts that I heard in my head?
I laid in our bed, so empty and cold,
no longer a child, feeling so old.
In your coffin I looked, my eyes filled with tears,
How would I live, throughout all the years.

My heart was just half, the other was gone,
No more would I wake and smile at the dawn.
No more would I play with happiness and glee,
So lonely my life, because it’s just me.
I look at our pictures and just sit and cry,
I loved you my brother, I just wish I’d die.

Last edited 26 Apr 2009 07:26 pm by Chilly man

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Bump (I wanted Az to critique this).