Deep poems

Meherafraz wrote: If I could have you for a day
I would take you far away
Just grab hold of my hand
We’ll travel to a distant land
A place where very few have been
The most beautiful place you’ve ever seen
A place so warm you’ll never be cold
In this place you’ll never feel old
All the things you could ever wish for
Its all there for you to explore
So much happiness you’ll never cry
This special place for you and I
Forget everything, just come with me
I’ll turn your dreams into reality
This place might seem out of sight
I’ll take you there, just hold on tight
But make sure you open your eyes
Because you might miss the big surprise
Where this place is, you have no clue

This poem is lovely! Did you write it? If not can I have the authors name because I would like to read some more!

I guess mine sucked, even Skully didn’t comment. (and he’s the one I really wrote it for to see).

Chilly man wrote: Ronnie


Born together, we clung to each other,
Twas so warm and safe inside our dear Mother.
Then our world collapsed, all violence and noise,
We heard a strange voice say, “You’ve got two boys”.
Slapped on our butts we started to cry,
World upside down, heads low, feet high.

We grew and learned love for our parents and each other,
I finally learned, I had a twin brother.
Our thoughts were as one, our hearts were in sync,
We played together, ran with our arms linked.
I’d say, “Mommy can we..." and you’d say "...play outside?"
We’d play Hide and Seek, knowing where the other would hide.

We faced the world as one, knowing each others thought,
When we had done wrong, we always both got caught.
We lived, we loved, we had so much fun,
We slept together, when the daytime was done.
Our lives were so happy even when we were tested,
How were we to know, we were being molested.

As the years went by it finally stopped,
The monsters were gone, they were caught by the cops.
We learned from our Dad, those actions were wrong,
But we still had longings, we had done them so long.
We talked to each other, our minds both the same,
Our Dad tried to help, told us we weren’t to blame.

Life passes so quick, in a blink it is gone,
Suddenly were twelve, we faced a new dawn.
One day we were playing, just crossing the street,
You saw the car that we couldn’t beat.
You pushed me and shoved me out of the way,
You gave your life for me on that terrible day.

My heart had been broken, I felt empty and dead,
Where were your thoughts that I heard in my head?
I laid in our bed, so empty and cold,
no longer a child, feeling so old.
In your coffin I looked, my eyes filled with tears,
How would I live, throughout all the years.

My heart was just half, the other was gone,
No more would I wake and smile at the dawn.
No more would I play with happiness and glee,
So lonely my life, because it’s just me.
I look at our pictures and just sit and cry,
I loved you my brother, I just wish I’d die.

wows...

not as deep, but this page is so freakin' depressing.

All This Way, by me.

Your beautiful smile,
that look that’s in your eyes,
it’s been quite a while;
just way too much time.

i’m so happy you’re coming
up here just to see me,
and now my heart is pumping
as i look up to the skies

'cause you came all this way
to see me, your best friend.
cause now you’ve made my day
i hope this weekend never ends,
'cause you came all this way...

it’s been way too long
since we saw each other last.
but i won’t waste a minute
dwelling in the past.

i only look forward
cause i know where i’ve been.
and i can’t wait till this summer
when i’ll get to see you in

our favorite place
to just sit around and talk
to drift off into outer space
or just to take a walk...

these two short days just flew on by
and once again i watch the sky
and as your plane takes off into that orange glow,
i shed a tear and watch you go.

but it’s okay, i will be strong
and i promise you it wont be long
till we’re together again,
and i’ll hang on till then...

Beautiful..You have moved my heart.

Someday you’ll be where i am today
Above the clouds where i do lay
You’ll choose someone from down below
To watch over your family wherever they go
You’ll wear a white gown and walk streets of gold
In this wondrous place,you’ll never grow old
Here in this place there’s no stormy weather
Once and for all, we’ll be together
But until that day this all you will see
There’s no other place i’d rather be

girlfriend wrote: Someday you’ll be where i am today
Above the clouds where i do lay
You’ll choose someone from down below
To watch over your family wherever they go
You’ll wear a white gown and walk streets of gold
In this wondrous place,you’ll never grow old
Here in this place there’s no stormy weather
Once and for all, we’ll be together
But until that day this all you will see
There’s no other place i’d rather be

A touching thought of Heaven and a loved one.

You guys are crazy. Mad funny. Seriously, I love this page. Made my day this morning.

A FAT POEM

my name is ugly.
some call me fugly.
i’m fat and big.
some call me a pig.
i’m round and short.
i hate to play sports.
i love food i eat it all hours
i’m to big i cant get in the shower.
so i have dirt in my rolls and crevice.
did some one say grill cheese sandwiches
by: a skinny girl

I made this early last year I think:

Betrayal

It was because of greed
that his soul has been enslaved
A thousand tears I’ve cried
that you have became what has been slain

A lazy man of small proportions
in search of far greater power
His soul entangled in his lust for strength
as he would not even spare a flower

Alas his soul was once of pure
of truth and loyalty he swore
His mind controlled and his body a puppet
he is now a ruler no more

Once a friend but a complex man
whom everyone enjoyed
But as time takes its course and we begin to see the truth
that man, what a kill joy!

'Do not judge a book by its cover' they say
and indeed that saying is true
A man of a towering physique he bears
but a softy he can be out of the blue

Does he wish for glory, wealth or fame of the people
or simply a cause in life?
Does he expect his herd to foretell his story
when he performs no more than a simple whine?

He cannot remember the horrors he hath seen
for thine mind only visions in black and white
With a taste in his gut of which is sour and bitter
how can one call thee a noble knight?

His followers, his disciples
who minds are blind sighted by lies
All may appear as well as such
but in time they will open their eyes

With golden axe and body of steel
and a heart of which thine has such thirst
'Neath the sky of a thousand clouds
his soul shall become our curse

As he rises up to destroy our nation
against the tranquillity of our people
The winds of allies who’s lives have been slain
a fate far worse than a cripple

As the wind sings its hymn in the air
and the tides clash as drums
Our earth shall shatter the ones of darkness
and lightning shall smite in clumps

It never ceases to fail, our lustful land of Tylenol
our inhabitants once withered with glory
To think that an opposer would arise to this place
That man known only as Thellagory

But for what reason was I chosen of all the people involved
of this dirty work I shall regret?
I am sorry my dear friend and for this I am not pleased
but I have enjoyed our time to its best

An engaging conversation as normal friends should do
with swords drawn and ready
While the tears of our precious memories stream
this battle will not be steady

With a slash and a clank on the tip of our blades
it does bring us back to our past
Of how we used to spar with joy
but the end has come at last

Cuts here and slashes there
one must befall the other
With one last tear rolling down my cheek
I thrust my sword with tremor

Blood splattered across my mail
staining all in sight
With Thellagory’s last breath he stated
'My death shall be a break from life'

Fall to the earth did he
allowing his weight to pull
Your time has come, your end has gone
but you lived your life to its full

My people praised me as I returned to the kingdom
but for what reason did they?
I have taken the life of a once dear friend
and my soul is at dismay

These people around me, these filthy creatures
they cheer with delight
Festivals, feasts and parties alike
they show no care for true might

As a true king would do, he would be rid his land of this
of a lesser and immature kind
They act like animals, putrid scavengers
this is their nature I find

They are no better, they are but peasants
paid in peanuts, no more no less
An understandable sight for them, I know
but they are not even humans at best

It is indeed true, that our race does progress
but for we have only our limits
The race of humans are the the most frightening of them all
but our hope shall always be lit

In death we may meet, one day my dear friend
but for now my life is not quite at its end
For if my heart is pure and foretells of no harm
perhaps just this once, I shall dwell in thine’s charm

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sadness, happiness
joy and fulfillment
....their all a state of mind
if u cant see it
then you’re blind
which is another state of mind.

I got a poem

When I wake up I dedcided to masturbate with my favorite dildo. I took a shower and put on some clothes, I made breakfeast, and brushteeth (again). I took out my 12 gauge with slugs (INCLUDED WHAT A BARGAIN!!!) and decided to kill me some children, I started scoping out the nearest parks with my thermal goggles, and I saw a few children, there parents were not looking at them, so I swing my shotgun across a girl’s head and put her in the van and drove her home, I blind folded her and took her hat, and pierce her teddy bear’s nipples and giving it nipple rings.

I started mutilating her hat more and more and let her suck my sasusage so I can cook it since my water is off, and fried it, I let her hear dora the explorer, and soon it was done we had a big party with everyone invited including the mother.

COLOR ME!

i was bored one day so wrote 6 poems this is one of my fave that i wrote,

It is like I am struck in time
Like I am on puppet strings
Can’t hear the bird sing
Just a beep beep beep beep
As i start to feel
I feel the pain
That is it
Barely able to move my arms
Knowing what i have done
I start to think why
Life is amazing
Why did i want to end it
No morebad
Yet no more good
Then it is the end
All black it went
The last thing i hear is a continual beep
That was it no more
That was the end of me

Kay, this is my first poem EVER. Dont be too mean.


Everyday,
death comes to mind;
it reminds me of you,
the way you’d hug me;
make me laugh,
now all that is gone;
i miss how life used to be,
i love you; <3

that was deep umo, awsome, but very deep

D.W. wrote: I got a poem

When I wake up I dedcided to masturbate with my favorite dildo. I took a shower and put on some clothes, I made breakfeast, and brushteeth (again). I took out my 12 gauge with slugs (INCLUDED WHAT A BARGAIN!!!) and decided to kill me some children, I started scoping out the nearest parks with my thermal goggles, and I saw a few children, there parents were not looking at them, so I swing my shotgun across a girl’s head and put her in the van and drove her home, I blind folded her and took her hat, and pierce her teddy bear’s nipples and giving it nipple rings.

I started mutilating her hat more and more and let her suck my sasusage so I can cook it since my water is off, and fried it, I let her hear dora the explorer, and soon it was done we had a big party with everyone invited including the mother.

motherfucker please bitch dont shit on my fucking cat

^^^^HAWT

HALOOOOOOOO wrote:
...but I’d tap that bitch in The Power Within’s sig...

step by step your closr to dying
everyday is another goodybye.
when will anyone see?
that in the end...it will never be..
forever gone.
nowhere to be.
come with me..
then you’ll see
that life for now is a living hell
lies and stories only help
honestly and laughter just make it harder.
end the pain.
because life is forever suicide..


btw im not emo or anything..

I am who I am because of who I am.
I see them all the time,
Looking @ me as if I committed a crime,
It makes me feel bitter as if I swallowed bile,
So, so hard to smile.
They don’t have court rooms, but they will judge u,
Sometimes I feel like screaming F*** u, but it won’t solve what I’m going through.

It’s all in the mind, so they say. I can see it in their eyes, rejoicing over my fears.
It need not be said, but sense it in the atmosphere.
Whenever they persist, I desist what others will never resist, I need not prove that I exist.
I am a MAN who stands for what he believes.
U can go ahead and judge me for a have suffers so much from negativity and indignity.
But my spirit is satisfied with my conduct and state of morality.

I need to write 3 poems for English,
BUt i ran out of ideas.
Anyone have any i could use?