i wrote a poem...

BTW^^^ no beef ^^^

Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain

Moose E.B. wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote:

J peth wrote:

Moose E.B. wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote: it wouldnt fit with the rest of the poem.

make every line of the poem a few words longer, describe and egzagarate words, and it will look & sound better.

right now it sound borin.......imean theres nothin to it.

keep addin to it

i actually thouroughly enjoyed it....

thats because, you actually understand poetry... these guys are just thinking its a rap or some shit lol

wo wo wo!

rap is poetry.... end of.

and u say we dont understand poetry?????? ARE U MAD!

u really think shakespeare or some other poet would think that was thouroughly enjoyable.....i doubt it son.

WOT U WROTE WAS NOT POETRY, IT WAS A FEW LINES THAT RHYMED......THATS IT.

i wo tryin to give ya some advise to make it better, but wateva bruh.... ya’meen.

rap=/=poetry... its lame

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote:

Moose E.B. wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote:

J peth wrote:

Moose E.B. wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote: it wouldnt fit with the rest of the poem.

make every line of the poem a few words longer, describe and egzagarate words, and it will look & sound better.

right now it sound borin.......imean theres nothin to it.

keep addin to it

i actually thouroughly enjoyed it....

thats because, you actually understand poetry... these guys are just thinking its a rap or some shit lol

wo wo wo!

rap is poetry.... end of.

and u say we dont understand poetry?????? ARE U MAD!

u really think shakespeare or some other poet would think that was thouroughly enjoyable.....i doubt it son.

WOT U WROTE WAS NOT POETRY, IT WAS A FEW LINES THAT RHYMED......THATS IT.

i wo tryin to give ya some advise to make it better, but wateva bruh.... ya’meen.

rap=/=poetry... its lame

indeed...

blessthefates!

blessthefates!

Once,again it’s not that you’re poem was so deep that nobody could possibly decipher it, it’s just that it sucked.

Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner

King John wrote: Once,again it’s not that you’re poem was so deep that nobody could possibly decipher it, it’s just that it sucked.

indeed...

Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain

fuckin plebb!

Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain

you ladies just dont know poetry... have you ever sat down and read a book of poetry? didt think so...

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: you ladies just dont know poetry... have you ever sat down and read a book of poetry? didt think so...

lol way to ask a question then answer it yourself lol, but if you actually wanted an answer yes I’ve read poetry. Don’t try to insult people’s intelligence just because they disagree with you, what you wrote just wasn’t that good. What exactly about it do you think anybody wouldn’t get? It’s not like it’s deep or metaphorical at all, it’s pretty straight forward.

Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner

oh, so now your a hypocrite... is that it... cause i believe you called me a “pussy” for writing poetry... but its okay to read it?

and yes its pretty straight forward, it was meant that way... you are just complicating it way too much
i wrote it for my girlfriend, why would i want to make such a simple message so deep? ive got tons of more deeper shit ive written in the past...

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: you ladies just dont know poetry... have you ever sat down and read a book of poetry? didt think so...

And I never will.

I really like the poem.

Archangel Azrael wrote: oh, so now your a hypocrite... is that it... cause i believe you called me a “pussy” for writing poetry... but its okay to read it?

and yes its pretty straight forward, it was meant that way... you are just complicating it way too much
i wrote it for my girlfriend, why would i want to make such a simple message so deep? ive got tons of more deeper shit ive written in the past...

I didn’t say you were a pussy for writing poetry, you’re just a pussy for writing THAT poem. How am I complicating it? I only mentioned it being deep because you said,“You guys just don’t get it." As if there was something hard to understand about it.

Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner

l3376543210 wrote: I really like the poem.

thank you...

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: you ladies just dont know poetry... have you ever sat down and read a book of poetry? didt think so...

fuck off

read it, write it, heard it everyday for the past 4 yrs n that wasnt one of the better 1s, TRUST MEH MAN.

Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain

Archangel Azrael wrote: oh, so now your a hypocrite... is that it... cause i believe you called me a “pussy” for writing poetry... but its okay to read it?

and yes its pretty straight forward, it was meant that way... you are just complicating it way too much
i wrote it for my girlfriend, why would i want to make such a simple message so deep? ive got tons of more deeper shit ive written in the past...

(HIGHLIGHTED) because its poetry, poetry isnt straight forward..... niether is rap.

THATS WHY U DONT UNDERSTAND SHITT.


no offence

Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain

a lot of poetry is straight forward, just as much as there is deep poetry...

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: a lot of poetry is straight forward, just as much as there is deep poetry...

Yeah, but your straight forward poetry just isn’t good, it’s nothing that anybody wouldn’t understand,so to say Oh you just don’t get it,is a pretty pathetic excuse for crappy poetry.

Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner

im done with you faggots... now your just making shit up... you obviously dont know what your talking about, and its easy to tell... from now on, you even attempt to flame me, im hitting the fucking report button... its getting old... what do you have a crush on me or something? wanna touch my penis? is that why you are making fun of my girl? so that i will dump her and go and get my penis touched by a faggoty beaner... is that it... go fuck yourself... all i have to say...

blessthefates!