i wrote a poem...

no you are, fake jomas

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: no you are, fake jomas

i’m no poet, so how could i be ghey?

jomas the grunt wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote: no you are, fake jomas

i’m no poet, so how could i be ghey?

because its opposite day... so when you said poets are ghey, you were really saying that people who dont write poetry were ghey.

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: hows about this then... wrote it just right now, on the spot..

Perfect Day

Move a mountain
Fall a Star
Love his Girl
No matter how far

For better or worse
Forever more
Take her out
Even when poor

Rope the moon
Pull it in
These are things
I’d do again

For you I’d do
Most anything
I’d dance and laugh
I’d even sing

Nature speaks
To both at night
I’ll hold you close
I’ll hold you tight

We stare at the stars
As we reminisce away
As we end peacefully
Another perfect day

Not really any better it’s pretty much that same thing just worded differently, the whole :

Never fright
hold you tight
All Night

thing isn’t any good.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote:

lol, ok, just saying that formula for writing poems is extremely basic.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

you think i care? i dont have anything deep to say right now... not extremely deep anyway... i feel like getting back to the basics of poetry..

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: you think i care? i dont have anything deep to say right now... not extremely deep anyway... i feel like getting back to the basics of poetry..

Ok then why are you arguing then? If you’re saying yourself that your poems are basic then why are you getting all pissy about me saying it?

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

you just now started saying they were basic dumbass, youve been saying they were shit earlier... shit and basic are 2 completely different things...

blessthefates!

Archangel Azrael wrote: you just now started saying they were basic dumbass, youve been saying they were shit earlier... shit and basic are 2 completely different things...

I said it sucks, not shit, but I digress it sucks because it’s too basic.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

and another

For You

Those who mind dont matter
And those who matter dont mind
Take heed these words
And all the truth you will find

Live and love
Move as one
Take all that in
You and I cant be done

Move like a poem
Flow like a wave
Take into your arms
A life you can save

The sun shines strong
The moon glows bright
I’ll never give you up
Without putting up a fight

This poem i wrote
Will my soul for you
I love you so much
And everything you do

blessthefates!

you don’t have any idea what poetry is do you.

you can’t just slap some words together, add a line break between them, and call it a poem.

i can’t believe i have to spell this out for anybody, it’d be like if somebody wrote a “song” on the piano consisting of a bunch of notes they hit on the spot and think it sounds good.

... you have issues ballsack...

blessthefates!

how so, because I insulted your ability to write a competent poem?

no because your the ballsac of a watermelon man...

blessthefates!

watermelon man wrote: you don’t have any idea what poetry is do you.

you can’t just slap some words together, add a line break between them, and call it a poem.

i can’t believe i have to spell this out for anybody, it’d be like if somebody wrote a “song” on the piano consisting of a bunch of notes they hit on the spot and think it sounds good.

Couldn’t agree more.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

Archangel Azrael wrote: no because your the ballsac of a watermelon man...

ah, whine.

gotcha.

poop

Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

blessthefates!

who els here poop is red?