i wrote a poem...

Archangel Azrael wrote: Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

So you admit that your “poems” are nothing but bullshit words thrown together in an order that sounds pretty cliche?

The same can be said for all “art” but there’s still things that distinguish genuinely good works like the sistine chapel from a sporadic scribble by a 3 year old.

I agree with Watermelon, there wasn’t much soul there.

lots of dicks on today

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

na but having a dirty slutty girl friend is

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

na but having a dirty slutty girl friend is

How would that make somebody a dick?

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

So anything other than positive praise means that I am a dick? Well, I should think next time before I look at something critically huh?

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

na but having a dirty slutty girl friend is

How would that make somebody a dick?

just because your girl is a dirty slut thats all

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

na but having a dirty slutty girl friend is

How would that make somebody a dick?

just because your girl is a dirty slut thats all

I don’t see the connection,but you’re entitled to you own opinion.

Light pole barrel,chopper stupid long/
New Orleans nigga, I get super dome/ Lil Wayne - Wasted

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote:

KlNG JOHN wrote:

spencer the king wrote: lots of dicks on today

Giving an honest opinion of somebody’s literary work, when asked for there opinion isn’t being a dick.

na but having a dirty slutty girl friend is

How would that make somebody a dick?

just because your girl is a dirty slut thats all

I don’t see the connection,but you’re entitled to you own opinion.

i would know how sluty she can be

Archangel Azrael wrote: ya im in a writing mood... what lit. freak isnt? lol
anyway, i wrote it for my girlfriend, so tell me what you think...
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Soft,
Your eyes against mine,
Brushing away the hands of time,

My hand in yours,
We laugh away,
The words 'I Love You' I meaningfully say,

I hold you tight,
All day All Night,
Taking away all of the fright,

Leaning in hoping to kiss,
We only pray,
that I don’t miss,

Engaged we are in only this,
The sweetest smile,
An endless bliss.

aight just for comparison, here’s my latest rap, I know it’s not a poem but just compare it to what you wrote and tell me if you think yours is better

You aint feeling me? Make you John Kennedy, body shots will put this mother fucker out his misery///So if this is his end I’m Jim Morrison, call me the Lizard King/// I spit wizardry, can turn vinyl into plat, so fuck what your chemistry/// Teacher taught ya, aught to, watch while I alter, the verbs in my words and turn them into Spartans/// So while the beat running, I spit my 300, bars and out duel you fools about jewels and gunners///Mother fuckers think I’m worried about a punchline? I show more purpose than their whole career in one line/// Yes I can rhyme, and yes that’s a Cham line, but I don’t give a fuck so don’t say shit this dam time///Dam I’m, Dirty South’s finest, rhyme with, perfect sight you can check my iris///My wrist shines with, the brightness of my tightest/// Rhymes/// So fly in sky you can’t miss this, witness me kick flip over nimbus///Relentless with sick spits,Wait and hear, I’m Shakespeare and this is my Tempest///

Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner

watermelon man wrote:

Archangel Azrael wrote: Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary. Poetry is an ancient form that has gone through numerous and drastic reinvention over time. The very nature of poetry as an authentic and individual mode of expression makes it nearly impossible to define.

So you admit that your “poems” are nothing but bullshit words thrown together in an order that sounds pretty cliche?

The same can be said for all “art” but there’s still things that distinguish genuinely good works like the sistine chapel from a sporadic scribble by a 3 year old.

lol. Nihlists.