i wrote a song

got bored and in a writing mood, so just give me your opinions...

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FUCK!!!!
walking out, you scream and shout
you stabbed my heart there is no doubt

[Bridge]-
Depression wry
my end was nigh
the only thing i had i could deny

then she came descending upon me
she granted me my Immortality
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[Course]-
My life grew full
Immortal!!!!!!!

Power Poll
Immortal!!!!!!!

I gave my life for immortality
i gave my life for a chance to be free
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she came to me to lend a hand
she offered me a life more grand

we lived in peace
we lived in happiness
we lived for nothing but bliss

but then he came
to take her away
i wouldnt let him
i had to save the day

[Bridge]
— -
[course]
— -
i fought with all my strength
i fought for days
i fought until both bodies gave way

but i had her
i could not leave
i had to take the gift she gave to me

[Bridge]
— -
[course]
— -
I gave my life for immortality
i gave my life for a chance to be free
i gave myyyy life
i gave myyyy life
i gave my life!!!!!!!
FOR HER!!!


She showed me the way to a better day
she showed me my faith
she gave me my life
I gave it back
but still remain
only thanks to the gift she gave to me

Immortality
immortality
immortality
immortality!!!!

blessthefates!

I like it. It’s good lyrics imo. But good lyrics can be drained out by bad sounding type music(The tabs and all that fun stuff) and the singing and actually how it is sung.

As far as I can tell, it’s good lyrics.

ya i just write for the lyrics
i might give the song to my friends if they actually decide to fucking start their band up... lol

blessthefates!

lol. Yeah could be a nifty little song to play.

mhm

blessthefates!

is that a good or bad

blessthefates!

Lahl itz ghey.

Sounds like a Metal song to me.

Szayel wrote: Sounds like a Metal song to me.

thats what its meant to sound like

blessthefates!

Forsaken Corpse wrote: Lahl itz ghey.

thinking something skully wrote is ghey? you sir are the ghey one...

blessthefates!