the name is G not abc
i reckin yu get it straight jus for me
i dont play games i dont act nice
you mess with me i get me my knife
you think you nice you think you kool
buh you aint nuttin you jus a fool
i dont like you & you dont like me
so lets get to fighting between me & you
you see your little gang what they gonna do
they cant do nuttin & let me tell you
i’ll get mrz charmz to kick yall a**
then i’ll sit back & start relaxin
now craziigyrltee she chillin with me
yall just mad kus she got sum money
im not sayin terrible coz u rhyme and thats the main part of rappin but you need to use more words, try not to use words more that once & try to go deeper into what your sayin e.g.
“the name is g not abc//
i reckin yu get it straight jus for me//"
you could say somethin like
“the name is g not abc//
the alphamale on the streets not the alphabets 1st three//“
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Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain
Last edited 20 Apr 2009 10:34 am by That Dude Moose E.B.
Here’s mine. Alot of people enjoyed it on another website but its surver crashed, and i got an email to repost it online again by a girl that goes to my old high school.So here it is on the lounge. When I was in high school I went to Rickards High School in Tallahassee, and i previously went to Booker T. Washington High School in Alabama, and didn’t quite fit in until i wrote this rap about my brother Tyler.
Well here it is(not a freestyle by the way)
This is about Tyler Henry he goes to Rick,
and yahhh boy yahh he is a hick,( i loved Flava Flav)
and yes he has a very long dick,
This kid loves to lay b-ball(i thought hthat was the nickname for baseball)
But that’s not all,
All the hoes like hime because he’s fine,
but you trashy bitches he is mine,
a real country boy eating hot grits,
he is hotter than an oven mitt,
he wants to go to FSU(if you want to know he didn’t)
But you got to learn to swallow what you chew,
he’s got an inflatable baseball bat,
when i saw it i was like “whoa what’s that?"
Fool I ain’t no hygenist,
But my brother Tyler needs to clean his penis,
No I’m just playing he smells like Mr.Jake (old teacher),
Some days like chopped steak,
In black culture he thinks he can partake,
But its okay i love my country brother,
yess word to your mother.
*Posted at April 24th 2009*
Sorry if it’s late a virus crashed my old website and my computer has been having problems.
My name is Rick, so suck my dick
I’m not a hick, I’m just a big prick.
You think yur hot you jus a fool
I be da big fish in dis whole pool
Yo momma is big yo momma is fat
she sits on a car dey says “where’s it at”?
Yo daddy done left yo scuzzy ol house
y’all is so poor you eats da mouse
Yo sistah likes to fuck aroun
but she likes white instead a brown
If ya don’t like dat well dats jus tuff
cuz you aint gots no fightin stuff
You jus a puss you aint no man
your like Tinker Bell or Peter Pan
You fuck your dog and that aint right
and we dont want you in our sight
You gots a car a piece a shit
Aint nobody gonna want ta steal it
So just sit down take my advice
ya fuck wit me you’ll pay da price
Dis block is mine I own da place
I da baddest mothafuckea in da human race
Is that any good for a white boy never leaves the house?
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
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Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
lol, do you honestly think that rap was good? One syllable rhyming with random nonsensical lines isn’t exactly lyrical genius.
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Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
Im here and have nothing against .
Thanks Supra, is it really as horrible as John says?
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
Im here and have nothing against .
Thanks Supra, is it really as horrible as John says?
Chilly man wrote:
Bump AHA! I found it. Please rapperz, critique it (That means let me know how you feel about it). lol
It was horrible, and why do you always put the definition of the word after you write? Do you really think we don’t know what critique means?
John, sorry, I was just bein a smart ass. You dudes are all smarter than me. I guess my rap career is over, I was honestly trying with that. I guess a white boy just can’t cut it. Thanks for your critique.
White boys can cut it, just not you.
Thanks for your honesty John. You just don’t like it cuz you don’t like me. How tolerant and unbiased of you. I’ll ask Moose E. B. He’s intelligent and a nice guy. Unlike like some otherz (ahem)John(ahem)
Im here and have nothing against .
Thanks Supra, is it really as horrible as John says?
from a scale of 1 to 10?
2.
lol, well there you go.
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Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
