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part (7) The findings



Getting to the door the woman turned sharply “oh!" the woman exclaimed “i didnt tell you who i was, my names tennus” Jason grinned “my names Jason, I think?" by then the door was open and Jason found himself looking down a long corridor “where are we” Jason asked again “well it’s hard to say, as fare as we can tell there a five diffrent levels of time Earth being level two and where we are now is level three we think” Jason stoped walking “sorry did you say time is made up of levels? i dont understand?" " it’s simple realy think of time not in seconds or hours but as a level you enter when your born i.e Level two level one being befor your concieved i mean pre birth we have no idea what gose on there yet but where working on it." tennus turned an held Jasons hand “dont worry your now in level three after you die Dr Fagen will explain better than i can"

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THE FINDINGS.

“Spread the word my son, time is here, time for you and me to take hold of the moment” Jason gript his fathers hand as hard as he could “NOW!" his father shouted “NOW MY SON JUMP!" his father leened foward pulling at Jason’s arm almost ripping it out of it’s socket Jason didnt have the stragth to pull back “NO!" Jason shouted “I CANT DO IT!" his little legs where shaking with fear “YOU MUST! WE DONT HAVE MUCH TIME IT MUST BE NOW!" his father replied, the wind seem to take the words away from Jason “I CANT HEAR YOU!" Jason shouted back, his hands sweating and slowly losing his grip on his father “COME WITH ME JASON!" “I CANT I’M SORRY FATHER I JUST CANT!" his fathers hand slowly let go of his.
Stepping foward his father looked back “Ok then i must do this on my own” he wispered “FATHER NO!" Jason screamed but it was to late his father had gone Jason turned to the railings on the side of the old iron bridge his hands so cold from the howling wind he could hardly get a good hold of the rusty rail but some how he managed to pull himself up and over the top bar now on the solid concrete Jason could reflect on what had just happend his father was dead.
Tears rolled down his face each one holding a memorie of his father “no be brave” he wispered to himself, wipping away the tears and his thoughts for his father he new he had things to do people to find and qustions to be ansawed
Jason started to contiplated the meaning of time as he walked along the road home, his hands still feeling the cold he slid them back into his jacket pockets “whats that” he asked himself as his hand could feel a small peace of paper in the corner of his left pocket, he pulled it out *04 88 76 04 22* the paper read “it’s a telephone number” Jason folded it back up and put it back in his pocket “Where did that come from ?" stopping near a street lamp he thought for a while “did father put it in my pocket without me knowing,and what dose it mean?" Jason thought about the last thing his father said to him “there’s something i should tell you Jason about what i know, time is irelivent time is only a mesurment which we use to justify a point in time when we are doing somthing i.e shopping one hour waiting for someone 20 minuits do you understand Jason this is very importent time is much bigger than that, much more complicated it is’nt as we see it, i found somthing that will show you what i mean, but i cant show you now it’s to big to carrie with me but meet me by the old bridge on Dennon way at 7:30pm tonight.“Jason wondered what his father was trying to say”
The wind seemed to gently push him on his way, still thinking about his father Jason was trying to put the peaces together “the peace of paper with the numbers, what his farther said " his thoughts drifted again “why would father want to kill himself and why did he want to kill me too..........OH MY GOD!...........was that what he wanted to show me death?" he shudderd at the thought “did my father have somthing wrong with him that he went mad” he put he hands to his face in shock “was it his work or home life did he have money troubles” Jason scratched his head in wonder “father was loaded and i never heard him and mother argue at all, it must be somthing at work!" and with that thought Jason started to look around him “A PHONE!" he shouted " a bluddy phone i need a bluddy phone” his hart sank when he relised there was no phone “god damb it” he mumbled to himself as he did so he looked up a small blueish light had apeared above his head the light seemed almost transparant, Jason starred at it, it shaked as if cold it couldnt have been more that two inches round he steped to one side to move away from it, still starring he streched his arm out to grabb it, the light moved as his hand got close but he could feel a slight warmth raideating from it.
Standing to one side he could see the light was triangula in shape and shooting from the center where small flakes of smaller lights, as he kept sterring the light seem to grow in intencety the blue had changed to a deep amder Jason raised his arm to make a vain attempt to shut out some of the light as he did so the object increased its overall mass and started to shake even faster than befor,getting scared Jason turned his head to try and run but his feet didnt move he reached down to his leg to see if he could pull them away from the spot he was stuck on “COME ON!" Jason shouted at his legs, still pulling hard on his right leg, he could feel the heat of the object getting hotter he looked up buy now the light had grown ten fold and the flakes of light were the same size as what the object was befor the object moved closer to Jason he leand back to move away but thats all he could do, the little flakes of light started to fly a round Jason’s body unable to move his feet all he could do was try and flap his arms to make them go away, sudenly he could feel his belly move he looked down his jacket seem to be pulling him into the light “NO!" he tryed to break free but it was to strong his whole body wanted to move closer to the light he struggled more in an attemped to get away the light started to grow eaver bigger “NO! NO! NO!" he sreamed as the light started to ingulf his whole body.
The muscals in his body felt like they were tearing away his stomoch wrenched with fear as the light drew him in even further jason took a big gulp and gritted his teeth his face contorted with the pain and the heat.
“NO!" he shouted again but to no avale the light still pulled at him, Jason was helpless to resist his fait he closed his eyes tight hoping it would be all over soon, his feet now off the ground the light just sucked him in “god” he cried as he entered the vortex in front of him.
Then as soon as it had started it stopped his body relaxed at the same time his feet seem to touch solid ground again
Jason slowly opened his eyes still a bit dazed he could make out a figuer in front of him it was a woman “are you ok” she said in a soft voice, still shaking after his exspirence Jason replied “i dont know, am i ok?" the woman smiled and took Jasons hand “come on Dr fagen will sort you out, it always feels bad the first time it happens” “what happens?" he asked “c’mon i’ll explain later.
Jason looked around him, he was in a small and dimmly lit room the walls were grey and dirty in front of him was a small green coloured door to the right he could just make out a large carved rock well at least thats what it looked like to him on his left was a tall piller with a object lent up against it because of the light he couldnt see exactly what it was, he then peared back behind him “whats that” he thought to himself there stood a triangular object no bigger than a small car the sides were glowing blue and the front was yellow with what looked like a split in the front on top was a gold point about 12” higher than the object itself, the woman gently ushered jason off to the small green door.Getting to the door the woman turned sharply “oh!" the woman exclaimed “i didnt tell you who i was, my names tennus” Jason grinned “my names Jason, I think?" by then the door was open and Jason found himself looking down a long corridor “where are we” Jason asked again “well it’s hard to say, as fare as we can tell there a five diffrent levels of time Earth being level two and where we are now is level three we think” Jason stoped walking “sorry did you say time is made up of levels? i dont understand?" " it’s simple realy think of time not in seconds or hours but as a level you enter when your born i.e Level two level one being befor your concieved i mean pre birth we have no idea what gose on there yet but where working on it." tennus turned an held Jasons hand “dont worry your now in level three after you die Dr Fagen will explain better than i can”


END CHAPTER 1

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AS YOU CAN SE I’V FINNISHED CAHPTER 1 I’V ALSO PUT IT AS ONE BIG PAGE FOR YOU TO READ IN ITS WHOLE FORMATT.


please remember it takes months to come up with a book so any coments so far, should i keep going or stop right there?

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CHAPTER 2. The findings

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Sitting on the cold bench of the doctors sergery jason found time to consider time as a level"BUGGER! i dont get it” he thought to himself " how on earth would you know i mean like pre birth whats that?" he gave up after a while it was giving him a headache “you ok?" the doctor asked as he passed Jason a glass of water “NO!" Jason snarrled back " where am i some sort of milatry testing base or what?" there was a pause “no would be the easeast ansawer to that qustion” the docter replied " how old are you son " the docter went on totaly by passing the question “fifteen why” he didnt like this man he was a bit shifty in his eyes and he smelt of chemicals Jason new the smell from his sience classes at shool the old man that teaches him smells like it too and he hated him, " you must be the first live fifteen year old we’ve had come through the prayloe you must be proud” “wait what did you say prayloe! whats that?" Jason pictured the triangular object in his mind " it’s the gate you came through the others call it a prayloe there scattered throughout the whole place” 2you mean theres more than one?" Jason was shocked at the thought “well it’s only logical realy with the amout of people that come through them one just is’nt anoght”.

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im working on a new one, my old one was a major break, but my new one is sort of based on My life, a few different added things, and changed names.

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No one gives a fuck mariomaniac, so why dont u just go kill yourself, asshole

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wow your pathetic mariomaniac. trying to get me banned when you cant face me yourself?

what a pussy you are, why dont you go hang yourself

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Mortis you silly little girl....

You need help if you tell people to kill one self then you must be non loved. Is it because you have lame go kill your self comebacks that you know it will never work? or is it because your bullshit is getting old real fast? Stop trying to get attention its just getting you banned.

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yes, he should fight you one on one. how about you meet him at the flagpole. lol.

you fail at life and insults simultaneously. congratulations.

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Dsepite what has been said, I say go for it!

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Welcome back.

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GOOD TO BE BACK!
*flops down in specialy reserved chair and put feet up*
Right, so what did i miss?

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Hello FireFox81

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I’m stopping writing because i have a feeling no one’s interested

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Im interested