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Standing,
Waiting,
Contemplating,
All that I did wrong.

It’s 6 O’Clock,
I’m with 5 friends,
My Sorrow never ends.

A light shines down,
From Hell above,
And in its wake
The one I love

{Chorus}
====
Flummoxed by mixed emotions,
Seven Sorrows ring.
Inside my head fake feelings turn.
Inside my heart true feelings burn.
I still can’t tell the difference:
Love is Heartache.
Misery is Happiness.
The only thing that is clear to me
Is that Loneliness is Pain.
====

A week has passed,
That feels like years,
Yet still they fall,
My poison tears,
Wishing it could be undone
Sorrow Number One

From there it grew,
Sorrow Two
Losing what I need
Hell broke lose
And strung my noose
There she made me bleed

{Chorus}

From day one
I never showed the truth
I never showed the real me
From my mind
A regret Sprung
Forming Sorrow Three

She broke my heart
I slammed the door
Anger
Hate
Sorrow four

{Chorus}

Slowly grief fills my eyes
As all I loved
I now despise
Now I have lost the need to survive
And with it came Sorrow five

Melancholy thoughts
Fill my soul
Death is the only thing left
I get ready to leave this life.

As I reach the river Styx
Brushed away,
Is Sorrow six

{Chorus}

Revelation,
I have found
Again to this earth
I am bound

My bloody heart
It starts to heal
By all those things
I never did feel

I must say that I never loved her
And I hope I never will

I look up
And pray to Heaven
Never to lose
Sorrow Seven

Seven days
Have passed since then
Seven Sorrows
Seven Sins


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bump..


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ya lol
lots of sevens


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Are you a 5%?

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Ok I guess not.Just tough your a 5% because of all the sevens.


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RealTalker wrote: Ok I guess not.Just tough your a 5% because of all the sevens.


5%/5 percenters - is a Islamic cult.


no
just put lots of sevens because its in the name of the song

lol

if you notice
i also hid a 666 in it

the second stanza thingy


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Ok...oh and not a bad song I guess...Don´t listen to such music..so can´t critic it smiley.

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lol
and thats the worst review ive gotten so far
lol
tons of other writers on the RJA site are freaking out at how good i am
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really?


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really really
i got home and checked my email
24 replies to my blog containing these lyrics
all of them were extremely positive lol


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straight


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wouldnt expect you to understand, johnny boy.


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Archangel Azrael wrote: wouldnt expect you to understand, johnny boy.



What’s there to understand.


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the big words
the depth
the situation
the feelings


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Ok infact there no any big words here.The depth?Ok let´s say,there is something like that in the song.The situation?What do you mean by that?The feeligns.Ok there are some feelings in here.But most pop/rock/emo/metal songs have the writters feelings in them.So nothing special.

P.S. Happy Easter everyone.

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Archangel Azrael wrote: the big words
the depth
the situation
the feelings



What big words?

once again you’re not as deep and brooding as you think you are, but please don’t take this as flaming or get pissy. I’m simply giving my opinion, if you don’t agree that’s perfectly fine don’t take it so personal.


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big words:

Contemplated
Flummoxed
— — — — — —
depth:

- look in the second stanza
there is a hidden 666 in there
showing that i am facing hell

-Light shines down from hell above
showing that at this moment in time
when i see her face
i face a fate worse than hell


— — — -
situation:

loving a girl...
come on you pimp bastard
how many girls have you honestly known that you would do anything for.

— — — —
feelings:

Loving a girl that broke your heart
feeling misery from all that would usually make you happy
and visa versa
as well as feeling heartbreak by all that you love...





seriously
did you actually read it?


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yea, I read it.


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