AZ, I came here to trash your song (in a kidding way), but I was struck by the emotion of begging sorrow and ending acceptance in the song. That was a damn fine song. Honest to God I kinda choked up just reading it. A true lost love song. I sure wish I could write like that. My songs sound like limmericks (“There once was a man from Kent....." or :There once was a girl from Nantucket....."
Keep it up man.
lol
thx chilly
finally someone who appreciates my writing
everyone else here are complete assholes who wish they had my talent
so they constantly bash me
because they wanna be me
or at the very least
fuck me
which is a no-no
oh and chilly
took some topless pics of myself
ill have them up later
lol
jk
but seriously
i was bored last night
so i seriously did take pictures of myself in mah undies
all from waist up though...
dont wanna make you guys jealous of my bulge on top of everything else
lol
Archangel Azrael wrote:
lol
thx chilly
finally someone who appreciates my writing
everyone else here are complete assholes who wish they had my talent
so they constantly bash me
because they wanna be me
or at the very least
fuck me
which is a no-no
oh and chilly
took some topless pics of myself
ill have them up later
lol
jk
but seriously
i was bored last night
so i seriously did take pictures of myself in mah undies
all from waist up though...
dont wanna make you guys jealous of my bulge on top of everything else
lol
ROFLMFAO
So yur still stuffin crew socks in yur undies?
And I wanna see them topless pics, bet U gots pretty nips.
Archangel Azrael wrote:
lol
thx chilly
finally someone who appreciates my writing
everyone else here are complete assholes who wish they had my talent
so they constantly bash me
because they wanna be me
or at the very least
fuck me
which is a no-no
oh and chilly
took some topless pics of myself
ill have them up later
lol
jk
but seriously
i was bored last night
so i seriously did take pictures of myself in mah undies
all from waist up though...
dont wanna make you guys jealous of my bulge on top of everything else
lol
lol, that’s all I can say.
__________________
Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
Archangel Azrael wrote:
you know its true
or you still stuck on the delusion that you are better than everyone else?
Once again when have I ever said that? Are you still under the delusion that all of your songs or poems are historic works of art that are beyond criticism?
__________________
Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
no
i only believe
that you and your buddies are going about criticism all wrong
and
seeing as you are use to a different style of music than I
that you really dont understand the type of lyrics that i have written
Archangel Azrael wrote:
no
i only believe
that you and your buddies are going about criticism all wrong
and
seeing as you are use to a different style of music than I
that you really dont understand the type of lyrics that i have written
How would you liked to be criticized? Saying " You don’t understand that’s why you don’t like it” isn’t a very good way to go about taking criticism, making excuses as to why other people don’t like your work doesn’t make it any better.
__________________
Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
good criticism
has both good
and bad reactions in it
“i liked how you did this, but im not really feeling the way you did this”
“you could have done better in this area, but i liked how you did this”
Archangel Azrael wrote:
good criticism
has both good
and bad reactions in it
“i liked how you did this, but im not really feeling the way you did this”
“you could have done better in this area, but i liked how you did this”
There wasn’t anything that really stood out, it wasn’t horrible just extremely average.
__________________
Feet hanging out the window, jock my shoe game/// Cause all my kicks fly, like Liu Kang///
Lil Wayne - First Place Winner
Archangel Azrael wrote:
lol
thx chilly
finally someone who appreciates my writing
everyone else here are complete assholes who wish they had my talent
so they constantly bash me
because they wanna be me
or at the very least
fuck me
which is a no-no
oh and chilly
took some topless pics of myself
ill have them up later
lol
jk
but seriously
i was bored last night
so i seriously did take pictures of myself in mah undies
all from waist up though...
dont wanna make you guys jealous of my bulge on top of everything else
lol
Dude, I’ve had your tallent..its small and rather unsatisfying.
Archangel Azrael wrote:
lol
thx chilly
finally someone who appreciates my writing
everyone else here are complete assholes who wish they had my talent
so they constantly bash me
because they wanna be me
or at the very least
fuck me
which is a no-no
oh and chilly
took some topless pics of myself
ill have them up later
lol
jk
but seriously
i was bored last night
so i seriously did take pictures of myself in mah undies
all from waist up though...
dont wanna make you guys jealous of my bulge on top of everything else
lol
Dude, I’ve had your tallent..its small and rather unsatisfying.
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