sonic just came home from a long well deserved vacation he went inside of tails’s workshop and the lights were pitch black so he turned on the lights and then confetty came out and knuckles tails amy and cream said HAPPY BIRTHDAY SONIC you guys planed a party while I was gone thanks said sonic then amy came out with a birthday cake with a 16 on it amy then kisses sonic on the cheek and he says hehe then he says lets party cream says happy birthday mr sonic knuckles shakes hands with sonic and tails says heres present from me sonic sonic opens it and inside is new par of sneakers then amy gives sonic a present and inside inside there are 2 tickets to atlantis for 1 week after that the alarm go’s off and sonic says we’ll celebrate later right now ive gotta take care of eggman don’t worry guys it will take only 1 minute said sonic he then runs out of the door at eggmans base eggman has been working on a special machine made for our favorite blue hedgehog and eggman has all of the emeralds sonic comes right threw the wall and says thanks for makin an attack while its my birthday (sarcastically) then eggman go’s inside of his robot sonic uses a homing attack but it dosent even mae a dent he then trys to a spin dash and it dosent work soon after eggman grasps sonic and says I here its your birthday and heres a birthday present from me personly he then sqeezes sonic in his robot then sonic uses the emeralds at eggmans base and sonic breaks free and becomes supersonic then sonic says bad idea havin the emeralds here then eggman says who said I didn’t want you to turn super? then eggman fires a beem at supersonic supersonic then starts to feel intence pain then sonic finaly comes out of the beam and another figure was there and he glew black aura he was dark supersonic and eggman yells success it worked now dark supersonic killl sonic then dark supersonic doe’s nothing then eggman says did you not here me kill sonic NOW! then sonic says (mentally) what the thats my ....darkside then dark supersonic says I obey no one why you said eggman you’ll be destroyed then dark supersonic say’s hmph he then flys up and he goe’s behind eggman and he say dark chaos................. then sonic says ahhh ive gotta get out of here then dark supersonic continue’s to says BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT theres a big explosion then sonic decends down to the ruble of eggmans base then he see’s dark supersonic and he has eggmans skull and crush’s it with his foot and sonics eye’s widen then dark supersonic says now for you then at super speed he then punches sonic in the stomach then he kicks sonic in the back with his leg then he sends sonic down by punching sonic in the face sonic then fells on the ground and makes a big hole dark supersonic then says dark chaos spear hits sonic and hes all bloody it even makes a pouddle of blood dark supersonic then flys away and sonic whispers some birthday part one end
part 2; shadow was up on a hill and he saw the explosian his eyes widen and says was that a chaos blast? if it was why was black and not red? said shadow. Id bettar go check it out. but before he starts walking he see’s the grey chaos emerald. an emerald? said shadow Ill use this to get there faster. CHAOS CONTROL! he then is in the ruble of eggmans base and he see’s eggmans skeleton eggmans dead said shadow. what a foolish scientist that explosion was probably one of his retarded experaments and in the process he died said shadow. this was a wast of time but atleast I have an emerald now. he then see’s sonic’s bloody body and says sonic? what’s he doing here? I should probably bring him back too tails’s workshop CHAOS CONTROL! he then knock’s on tails’s door amy opens the door and says SO.....nic shadow what are you doing here? have you come to celebrate sonics’s 16th birthday? shadow reply’s and say’s no and its the blue hedgehogs birthday? hmph. amy says SONIC! shadow he’s all bloody did you beat him up for a birthday present!?! shadow say’s I didn’t beat him up if thats what you think this is how I found him so I desided to bring him here. ohhh how and where did you find him? said amy I saw a big explosin that looked like a black chaos blast. then amy said black chaos blast? shadow said we’d better not wast any more time your blue boyfriend needs medical attention. said shadow then they put sonic on a bed and shadow explains to everybody on how it happened.part 2 end. Ill make more
the thing he’s trying to say it’s kinda hard to read it because you don’t use quotation marks, or start new paragraphs, sometimes yo ucan’t tell when some one is speaking
