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JUST A P0EM I WR0TE I NEED FAIR CRITICISM

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18 Aug 2008 05:26 pm
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WHERE 2 TURN
as i look to left & look to the right i see my fears gloomy in the night despite the angel’s that hoover around me ..... ppl be-little me im stuck to the groud see i look air with tear asking & wondering should i face my fear i ignore the devil that whispers in my ears i have found my love i have found my ground i have permission to cross that gate cuz love i have found minus me being a dummy and not realizing what i have ...........only thing im afraid of is the aftermath ....i dont wanna risk getting hurt but if by-pass my circle love i should have regrets only god could understand from above as my mind boggle and my heart toggles i contemplate on life i use to think life didnt offer anything i thought brought more shadow to my pain ....... new ppl are entering my life tymes have changed .....all i can do is sit back and wonder ...... i hope i have an angel to fly with me when god calls my number ........


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JUST A P0EM I WR0TE I NEED FAIR CRITICISM

P0EM WAS H0RRIBlE ************************* 100%
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N0 FEElING AB0UT THE P0EM 0%
P0EM WAS 0K 0%
P0EM WAS G00D 0%

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