My Prologue.

At the start of time, there was only God. After many years of solitude, God decided to create his own company. That is when the races were created. Seven dominating races were created. First came the Humans, followed by the Elves, Vampires, Demons, Fairies, Dwarves, and finally Angels.
For the first hundred years, everything was perfect; but eventually the races grew apart. War broke out among them. Many casualties were taken, and God grew furious. God loved all his creations; instead of destroying them, he decided to split them up. Within this Earth, he created seven different realms. There was one realm for each race. The problem was God could only watch over one realm at a time. To fix this, God then created 6 beings that were equal to him in every way. He based their figure off of each of the different races. These beings were named Sovereigns, as they were created to govern a realm of Earth.
As the humans were created first, and looked the most like God, he decided that for the most part he would govern over the Human realm.
About this time, God decided to create a sort of sanctuary for those he found worthy of being in his presence. He called this sanctuary ‘Heaven’.
Seeing as God was busy all the time, he decided to create a seventh sovereign. One for the human realm. He called this being Jesus Christ. But the humans didn’t see this as a blessing. They believed that they could look after themselves. So they tricked Jesus Christ into taking on a mortal form. The moment he did so, they killed him.
God was outraged. As punishment to the humans, he did just what they wanted and let them govern themselves. Unlike the others, the humans fought amongst themselves time and time again. Many humans were killed by human hands.
The Country of Atlantis has kept Gods secrets for almost 1000 years. This country was created as an apology for killing the one God sent to govern over the human race. God accepted this apology from the people of this country and decided to govern over it himself.
Since then, the humans have forgotten about that earlier time. The other races are just legends to them now. And many have forgotten the Being that created us. Only Atlantis remembered. Only they knew the truth.
Unknown to the people of Atlantis, an evil emperor was informed that they were more prosperous than the rest of the human Earth. The empire planed to take out Atlantis and gain the knowledge that has been kept from the majority of mankind.

what do you think? missing anything? anything too much?

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Looks good.

What is this 'prologue' for?

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a book im writing.... its first in a trilogy

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bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Edit:
But im thinking of naming the trilogy “Of Saints and Sovereigns”

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Ventus Klein wrote:

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Name it “God Wars Episode 1: The Devil Menace”

Anyway good job that was cool .

The Power Within wrote:

Ventus Klein wrote:

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Name it “God Wars Episode 1: The Devil Menace”

lol if anyone would be named the Devil Menace, it would be part 3...

part 1 is about this war that is hinted at the end of the prologue,

part 2 is about in the afterlife when 4 of the sovereigns go bad and try to take over the Sanctum *which is a sanctuary above heaven where those dubbed saints (some from each of the 7 races) live, it is also a nexus point between the 8 worlds (the 7 realms of earth, and heaven)*

and part 3 is about how the saints chosen to become the next sovereigns after the 4 are destroyed have to battle with 4 demons lucifer *the sovereign of the demons* gave his power at the last second before his death.

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Ventus Klein wrote:

The Power Within wrote:

Ventus Klein wrote:

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Name it “God Wars Episode 1: The Devil Menace”

lol if anyone would be named the Devil Menace, it would be part 3...

part 1 is about this war that is hinted at the end of the prologue,

part 2 is about in the afterlife when 4 of the sovereigns go bad and try to take over the Sanctum *which is a sanctuary above heaven where those dubbed saints (some from each of the 7 races) live, it is also a nexus point between the 8 worlds (the 7 realms of earth, and heaven)*

and part 3 is about how the saints chosen to become the next sovereigns after the 4 are destroyed have to battle with 4 demons lucifer *the sovereign of the demons* gave his power at the last second before his death.

Name it “Supernatural: War of the (whatever it is about)

The Power Within wrote:

Ventus Klein wrote:

The Power Within wrote:

Ventus Klein wrote:

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Name it “God Wars Episode 1: The Devil Menace”

lol if anyone would be named the Devil Menace, it would be part 3...

part 1 is about this war that is hinted at the end of the prologue,

part 2 is about in the afterlife when 4 of the sovereigns go bad and try to take over the Sanctum *which is a sanctuary above heaven where those dubbed saints (some from each of the 7 races) live, it is also a nexus point between the 8 worlds (the 7 realms of earth, and heaven)*

and part 3 is about how the saints chosen to become the next sovereigns after the 4 are destroyed have to battle with 4 demons lucifer *the sovereign of the demons* gave his power at the last second before his death.

Name it “Supernatural: War of the (whatever it is about)

nah, ive got ideas already for a name, but im not going to name it til its done...

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Good goin'

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Ventus Klein wrote:

The Power Within wrote:

Ventus Klein wrote:

needforspeedfreak wrote: bump from creepy bro with knives !
lol nice prologue !

i love that picture.... :P

goku1003 wrote: Sounds interesting, Oh and what is the title of your book?

it doesnt got one yet...

Name it “God Wars Episode 1: The Devil Menace”

lol if anyone would be named the Devil Menace, it would be part 3...

part 1 is about this war that is hinted at the end of the prologue,

part 2 is about in the afterlife when 4 of the sovereigns go bad and try to take over the Sanctum *which is a sanctuary above heaven where those dubbed saints (some from each of the 7 races) live, it is also a nexus point between the 8 worlds (the 7 realms of earth, and heaven)*

and part 3 is about how the saints chosen to become the next sovereigns after the 4 are destroyed have to battle with 4 demons lucifer *the sovereign of the demons* gave his power at the last second before his death.

Man its just gets better!

pretty much... i need to start writing chapter 1 of the first one... i have chapters 2-5 done, other than editing...

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dangit... i cant get anything for chapter 1 thought up.. i have got to think tonight... i have an idea, but cant fit it into words...

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Ventus Klein wrote: dangit... i cant get anything for chapter 1 thought up.. i have got to think tonight... i have an idea, but cant fit it into words...

yeah its very hard to write isnt it? I have only gotten to chaper 3 in mine.

Ventus Klein wrote:

At the start of time, there was only God. After many years of solitude, God decided to create his own company. That is when the races were created. Seven dominating races were created. First came the Humans, followed by the Elves, Vampires, Demons, Fairies, Dwarves, and finally Angels.
For the first hundred years, everything was perfect; but eventually the races grew apart. War broke out among them. Many casualties were taken, and God grew furious. God loved all his creations; instead of destroying them, he decided to split them up. Within this Earth, he created seven different realms. There was one realm for each race. The problem was God could only watch over one realm at a time. To fix this, God then created 6 beings that were equal to him in every way. He based their figure off of each of the different races. These beings were named Sovereigns, as they were created to govern a realm of Earth.
As the humans were created first, and looked the most like God, he decided that for the most part he would govern over the Human realm.
About this time, God decided to create a sort of sanctuary for those he found worthy of being in his presence. He called this sanctuary ‘Heaven’.
Seeing as God was busy all the time, he decided to create a seventh sovereign. One for the human realm. He called this being Jesus Christ. But the humans didn’t see this as a blessing. They believed that they could look after themselves. So they tricked Jesus Christ into taking on a mortal form. The moment he did so, they killed him.
God was outraged. As punishment to the humans, he did just what they wanted and let them govern themselves. Unlike the others, the humans fought amongst themselves time and time again. Many humans were killed by human hands.
The Country of Atlantis has kept Gods secrets for almost 1000 years. This country was created as an apology for killing the one God sent to govern over the human race. God accepted this apology from the people of this country and decided to govern over it himself.
Since then, the humans have forgotten about that earlier time. The other races are just legends to them now. And many have forgotten the Being that created us. Only Atlantis remembered. Only they knew the truth.
Unknown to the people of Atlantis, an evil emperor was informed that they were more prosperous than the rest of the human Earth. The empire planed to take out Atlantis and gain the knowledge that has been kept from the majority of mankind.

what do you think? missing anything? anything too much?

its good except that god would of destroyed them all and made them suffer in hell for all eternity!

but other than that its good.

nobody needs your negativity towards religion here...

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