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23 Apr 2009 06:09 pm
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Most people are glad when the school year ends. They jump for joy and maybe even sing. But when the school that has magic people such as witches, werewolves, and much more gets out. For the year it’s a bigger deal.
“Students remember to keep out of trouble over the next two months.” Blah, blah, blah that’s the person in charge of this school. And of course she has a kid who’s really smart and is great t magic.
“Oh and Mag, some boy came looking for you”
“Ok” there’s always somebody looking for me. I’m one of these girl’s that every one wants to study with or get to do there home work. Other than that I am just a normal girl that not many people like.
“Mag there you are!”
“Yeah here I am” I do have some friends but they mostly just eat lunch with me. And then there’s this guy who I am strangely drowns to and I don’t know why.
“I was wondering what you were doing over the break?”
“Nothing to interesting why?” But the weird thing is he always pops out of no where and doesn’t say anything. SO when he asks what I am going to be doing over the break it is weird.
“What are you going to be up to Ace?”
“Well hanging out with my friends and your sister” When I started to walk away I felt like someone was following me and when I turned around he was right there.
“Is there something you wanted Ace?”
“Not really…well could you tell me if your sister likes anyone?”
“I’m not telling you if she does or does not you’ll just have to ask and find out”
When I got to first period there was a note on my desk.
Mag,
Please meet me at the front of the school today
A
theres more that ill post later on


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23 Apr 2009 07:29 pm
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Is this a romance book?


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23 Apr 2009 07:34 pm
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How gay can you make names? “Mag”? “Ace”?

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26 Apr 2009 03:07 pm
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those are shortened names. like mine. and good story hinata grin


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“Sometimes i feel like a butterfly trapped inside a cocoon
wishing i could spread my wings and fly away”

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27 Apr 2009 01:49 pm
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thanks i have more that go with it


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27 Apr 2009 03:09 pm
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Mar_hinata wrote: thanks i have more that go with it



I’m waiting with baited (or is that bated?) breath. smiley


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27 Apr 2009 11:37 pm
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go for it


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“Sometimes i feel like a butterfly trapped inside a cocoon
wishing i could spread my wings and fly away”

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27 Apr 2009 11:45 pm
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Feels choppy to read. But intriguing concept two thumbs up


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28 Apr 2009 12:01 am
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I liked the name “Mag."

It’s so obvliviously generic, it’s awesome.


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28 Apr 2009 02:36 am
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I like the story line and agree with chaos that it is a little choppy to read. I look forward to reading more smiley


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28 Apr 2009 03:27 am
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IDK

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28 Apr 2009 01:17 pm
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lol


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