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01 Jun 2008 11:41 pm

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i need a lot of poems and i need them fast

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02 Jun 2008 12:16 am

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flame ruler wrote: i need a lot of poems and i need them fast

What sort of poems and why?

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23 Jul 2008 01:40 pm

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The clock ticks at midnight.
As i wait formy flight to hell.
bells ring as im sucked through the hole.
the devil chucklkes as he sucks my soul.
i cant make up for the things i did.
my past is hid.
deep beneath my bitter life.
is a glimpse of strife.
i submitted
but i got no reply from up above.
u ask wat did ido.
i murdered love.

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23 Jul 2008 01:44 pm

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Love tickles our souls as we walk together.
we laugh and giggle because we love forever.
doves fly above our cloud.
they know the music love screams aloud.

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23 Jul 2008 01:48 pm

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Rate my poems im new to writting them and i need feedback. should i continue with this.

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23 Jul 2008 04:59 pm

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Not bad. Not my style but not bad.

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24 Jul 2008 02:12 pm

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Shakespear wrote: Love tickles our souls as we walk together.
we laugh and giggle because we love forever.
doves fly above our cloud.
they know the music love screams aloud.

cool

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