Archangel Azrael wrote:
what
no comments on my song
Skully, What is there to comment about? All your songs are from your heart and great. We feel your love for your g/f. We know you are happy. All your friends care about is your happiness. Just be careful, you wear your heart on your sleeve. Girls have a way sometimes to rip it off and tear it up. Love, Skulls, but keep a little on guard. Don’t let your heart be broken again. In one way, you and I are alike, we fall in love (infatuation) easily, and we can set ourselves up for heartache. You are my friend, I always want you to be happy.
thats the difference between us though chilly,
i know the difference between true love and infatuation. its part of being a hopeless romantic
and its okay because my gf like that i am really sweet,
she wears her heart on her sleeve too.
its part of what i love about her.
Archangel Azrael wrote:
what
no comments on my song
Skully, What is there to comment about? All your songs are from your heart and great. We feel your love for your g/f. We know you are happy. All your friends care about is your happiness. Just be careful, you wear your heart on your sleeve. Girls have a way sometimes to rip it off and tear it up. Love, Skulls, but keep a little on guard. Don’t let your heart be broken again. In one way, you and I are alike, we fall in love (infatuation) easily, and we can set ourselves up for heartache. You are my friend, I always want you to be happy.
thats the difference between us though chilly,
i know the difference between true love and infatuation. its part of being a hopeless romantic
and its okay because my gf like that i am really sweet,
she wears her heart on her sleeve too.
its part of what i love about her.
Skulls, what you say about you and her may be true, but I am in true love too. Love doesn’t mean you have to be with each other. Love means how you feel in your heart, your soul and your mind. I know what infatuation is, it is the first step towards real love. Real love builds day after day, as it is for me. I may get to be with my love one day, or I may not, but I love my sweetheart as much as you love yours.
Chilly man wrote:
Well, guess you didn’t read my PM’s yet. Nothing like blowing our secret and telling everyone when YOU didn’t want them to know. I love your ditziness. I’m gonna send you some blond hair dye. Your still the best though.
Guess since it’s out and the poem I wrote formerly titled “Amber” (now titled “My secret love)was really about you, I’ll try to write a new one just for you. It may not be good but it comes from the heart.
Mar-Hinata
(She didn’t want me to say her real name on here)
I was lonely and sad and needed some friends.
I used the puter to do it but just found dead ends.
I went to some sites that were nice but were bland,
I found some there too so delightful and grand.
But those were just filled with porn and abuse.
I thought to myself what the hell was the use?
Chat rooms were freaky, and I can’t talk about comics,
Anime, gamers and cartoons held no promise.
Then I found MvC it seemed so delightful,
The people seemed cool, 'course some were just frightful.
I watched and I watched and liked what I saw,
then I spied one girl that was liked by them all.
She seemed nice, compasionate, witty and kind,
She could also be ditzy and out of her mind.
I watched her and talked and she found me funny,
Then I got too nasty and she called me dummy.
I flirted and flirted but she didn’t care,
She didn’t take crap and would give me her stare
^^
Her words pierced my heart and in love did I fall,
She wouldn’t act smitten, wouldn’t give me a call.
Finally, she gave me the name of a friend,
So, I thought my pursuit was now at an end.
Her friend and I hit it right off at the start,
But shortly thereafter the friend acted smart.
We fought and she changed and then acted so sweet,
Then she’d change again and punch me in the teeth.
I got tired of playing and told Mar all about it.
She said that she liked me and I wanted to shout it.
I told her I’d loved her right from the start.
She said that she too cared and melted my heart.
She said that we should exhibit no drama,
But I finally told the lady called Momma.
Then Mar made a reference to our love affair,
So, here is my poem about our love so rare.
It may not work out, may break each our heart,
But we’ll give it a try and this is our start.
I love and adore you.
Richie
aw i love your poems!^____^ and she broke your teeth?lol
My love flies to me on etherial wings,
'Tis so wonderful to feel the joy that she brings.
Her words pierce my heart like cupid’s quick arrows,
I hear her words in my mind like the song of the sparrows.
I crave her messages, I wait just to hear,
Her words in my puter, so sweet and so dear.
She lightens my heart, she quickens my pulse,
She talks and she laughs and she gives me some luls.
I know what she looks like, her description was clear,
But I know her sweet heart, I have nothing to fear.
I have a big crush on this girl here on-line,
If we never meet it will prolly be fine.
For I have known love now, my heart has been healed,
That hole in my heart has been mended and healed.
I sit here and wait to see her come on,
I’ll sit here all night till mornings sweet dawn.
I’m happy, I’m free, I feel so alive,
I’ve found a good friend, and that ain’t no jive.
So, come to me sweet angel, and bring me some joy,
I love you so much, I’m one happy boy.
Richie
You mean ethereal?
GJ btw,i know who amber is now.
that once was for me i still have it saved, i guess i need to delete it now
My love flies to me on etherial wings,
'Tis so wonderful to feel the joy that she brings.
Her words pierce my heart like cupid’s quick arrows,
I hear her words in my mind like the song of the sparrows.
I crave her messages, I wait just to hear,
Her words in my puter, so sweet and so dear.
She lightens my heart, she quickens my pulse,
She talks and she laughs and she gives me some luls.
I know what she looks like, her description was clear,
But I know her sweet heart, I have nothing to fear.
I have a big crush on this girl here on-line,
If we never meet it will prolly be fine.
For I have known love now, my heart has been healed,
That hole in my heart has been mended and healed.
I sit here and wait to see her come on,
I’ll sit here all night till mornings sweet dawn.
I’m happy, I’m free, I feel so alive,
I’ve found a good friend, and that ain’t no jive.
So, come to me sweet angel, and bring me some joy,
I love you so much, I’m one happy boy.
Richie
You mean ethereal?
GJ btw,i know who amber is now.
that once was for me i still have it saved, i guess i need to delete it now
aw ain’t that cute, a little fairy is crying over his boyfriend
Mar_hinata wrote:
dont you know anything? shes a girl and why dont you crawl back into that hole you came out of?
LMAO Mar, I came here to write a sad poem and saw your reply to that guy. He shouldn’t mess with my lil Tuffy. I was depressed but you brought me up. Guess I’ll still try to write.
Sadness washing over like a dark fog, clouding my brain.
Eyes tearing, looking sadly, everything brings me such pain.
Why must I feel sad when I was just happy, cheerful and gay?
My life is not bad, others have it worse. It’s a beautiful day.
I have many blessings, good parents, wonderful girl and new friends
My blessings continue to increase. I hope this never ends.
Yes, I know, chemicals rush through my brain bringing despair.
Feelings changing so rapidly. Wondering does anyone really care?
I can’t help my feelings and take medicine for depression.
But thoughts of suicide rush in, it’s like an obsession.
I decide to write about sadness, pain, heartache and death,
when suddenly I spy a picture and words that take away my breath.
How can I be depressed when God has given me such a love?
To me, so worthless, undeserving and bad, He sent a sweet dove.
My heart beats faster, the fog lifts away and clears my mind.
Dear Lord you work miracles, your Love for me is so kind.
Lonely, I get so lonely. I have no one to call my best friend. I once had a best friend, someone to listen to my innermost secrets. To know my thoughts. To understand my ups and my downs. To care. My friend and I laughed together, and we cried together. When trouble came our way, one of us was always there to back up the other. Unfortunately, we weren’t prepared to, or capable of, confronting stronger adversaries. We lost the fights to them. We succumbed to Stockholm Syndrome and began to think of our adversaries as friends. We were young and innocent. We knew nothing of the world then. When finally our adversaries were removed, we thought nothing of the wrong that had been done to us. We were still innocent in the ways of the world. We continued on, best friends. Caring for each other. Confronting troubles together. Listening, advising, playing, talking. Life was ours, we had so much to achieve, so much to live. One day my best friend was gone. No more to laugh, to play, to talk, to cry. No one to listen and advise. No one to care. My secrets were my own. My thoughts, my own. No one to have my back. Why? Was this our punishment for unknown sins? To be friends no more? What had we done? How had we offended? Why had this happened to us? Life ended that day. Can a person exist alone? I don’t know.
Sadness washing over like a dark fog, clouding my brain.
Eyes tearing, looking sadly, everything brings me such pain.
Why must I feel sad when I was just happy, cheerful and gay?
My life is not bad, others have it worse. It’s a beautiful day.
I have many blessings, good parents, wonderful girl and new friends
My blessings continue to increase. I hope this never ends.
Yes, I know, chemicals rush through my brain bringing despair.
Feelings changing so rapidly. Wondering does anyone really care?
I can’t help my feelings and take medicine for depression.
But thoughts of suicide rush in, it’s like an obsession.
I decide to write about sadness, pain, heartache and death,
when suddenly I spy a picture and words that take away my breath.
How can I be depressed when God has given me such a love?
To me, so worthless, undeserving and bad, He sent a sweet dove.
My heart beats faster, the fog lifts away and clears my mind.
Dear Lord you work miracles, your Love for me is so kind.
aw...im sorry your sad...i can try to help you smile!^^
My light has gone away. My star has fallen.
How can someone live with such sadness?
My heart aches from being broken. Loneliness,
sadness and gloom. I look, but she’s not there.
I look again but she’s still not there.
I try to feel but there is no feeling. I am empty.
How can one know such love and then lose it?
I walk through the darkness of my soul. I see her.
Oh, no. That’s not her. Just a memory. A reflection
in my mind. Was she real? Did I love a sprite?
Was she just a wisp of air passing through? Why can’t I see her again? I can’t harm myself to end the pain.
I promised I wouldn’t. I feel a great weight upon my chest. My eyes. Damn my eyes. Wouldst that I were blind.
I would never have seen her beauty. Never have read her words. I see her in my sleep. I see her words and hear her voice through those words. I see her smile. Her loveliness. I watch her talk. So sad at times. So happy at others. She talks to me. She laughs. She stares. She raises her eyebrows. She makes eyes at me. Her eyes, and her words, once shot their arrows through my heart.
No more I smile. No more I laugh. I still love, but now I weep.
Sadness washing over like a dark fog, clouding my brain.
Eyes tearing, looking sadly, everything brings me such pain.
Why must I feel sad when I was just happy, cheerful and gay?
My life is not bad, others have it worse. It’s a beautiful day.
I have many blessings, good parents, wonderful girl and new friends
My blessings continue to increase. I hope this never ends.
Yes, I know, chemicals rush through my brain bringing despair.
Feelings changing so rapidly. Wondering does anyone really care?
I can’t help my feelings and take medicine for depression.
But thoughts of suicide rush in, it’s like an obsession.
I decide to write about sadness, pain, heartache and death,
when suddenly I spy a picture and words that take away my breath.
How can I be depressed when God has given me such a love?
To me, so worthless, undeserving and bad, He sent a sweet dove.
My heart beats faster, the fog lifts away and clears my mind.
Dear Lord you work miracles, your Love for me is so kind.
i still have it saved, i guess i need to delete it now
