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07 Feb 2009 05:01 pm
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This is a ROUGH DRAFT of the story of Ronsville Penitentiary, where the main characters go for supplies.

Ronsville Penitentiary was a prison that even the most hardened criminals were frightened of. It was owned by prison tycoon Dale Ronsville, the richest man in the prison business. He was also the cruelest man in the prison business.
Dale was born in rural Arkansas, the youngest son of a father he never knew, and a mother who died when he was 7. Dale’s oldest brother was forced to raise him and his brothers and sisters until Dale left his home to make a life of his own. Starting out as a small-time criminal in New York City, working as muscle for various gangs, he eventually hit the biggest jackpot of his life, litterly.
Dale was walking to his apartment on a cold chilly night when he bumped into a dirty, homeless man running on the sidewalk. “Watch it." Dale grumbled.
Suddenly, the homeless man grabbed Dale, and before Dale could react, the man exclaimed, “I won!"
“What the fuck are you talking about?" Dale yelled, at the same time trying to shake the man off.
“I won lottery, that’s what I’m talking about!"
Know this, Dale was not a kind man, in fact, he was an evil man. He only cared about himself and would not hesitate to hurt others in order to help himself. He saw this as an opportunity to escape his meaningless life and quickly formulated a plan. He killed the homeless man right there (Nobody was around, after all, it was a rundown area in the middle of the night.) and tossed the body in a dumpster. Long story short, he cashed in the homeless man’s lottery ticket, and he was 250 million dollars richer at the end of the week.
Dale was also greedy, he wanted more money, so he looked for a way to make more. And then it hit him: Prisons. It didn’t take him long to set up a good prison, and eventually he built his greatest prison yet. Ronsville Penitentiary, the largest prison in Pennsylvania, the compound sits on 75 acres, and can house over 4,000 inmates. The prison is supposedly escape proof, with barbed wire fences, a 35 foot tall exterior wall, and 12 guard towers. Ronsville Penitentiary also houses 350 prison guards and the best riot equipment legal.
Dale won many awards for the security at Ronsville, Dale would often say, “Unless we say so, nothing gets in, nothing gets out." And he seemed to be telling the truth. In all the prison riots and attempted break-outs, nobody even got close to getting outside.
On August 27, 6:34 P.M., the zombies arrived at the front gate. At 8: 53 P.M., the zombies entered the main compound.

Tell me what you think.


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Anybody?


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ITS PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!


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gabmed wrote: ITS PEANUT BUTTER JELLY TIME!


Interesting...


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an interesting start....so now are you going to have the worst criminals turn zombie?


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