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06 May 2008 09:50 am
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Its a fantasy/scifi that every one can add to. I have done the fist chapter. Someone else can do the next chapter and so on. So who well add the next one to this story?

Good idea is it dose anyone think?



Rich tycoon he was in hes 80’s but you would think he was still in hes 50’s has time had been hes friend.

He was an idealist and someone that believed in fairness and the right for every person to live out there dreams. He was killed in a freak accident in a plane. He was the pilot BTW.

There was a lot of research with in hes company that was trying to get it so we would be able to live on the planet mars smiley He believed that this is something that is possible. And he was rich enough to put the research into it has well. So hes will says that the research well carry on.

And so 50 years later the date is now 2058 I was chosen has one off the ppl as hes grandson to go into the spaceship that would finely set the base up that would be among the fist ppl to live there. On mars. Finally the dream was a real possibility.


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haha hehe come


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As I watched out the small window, the stars and black velvet sky seemed to suspend next to me, calling out to me as the bright dots winked while the ship sailed past, the voyage almost complete now. The dusty red planet lay far in the distant, illuminating the sky with it’s bold presence, giving a welcoming aura to all who looked upon it. Raking my hands through my hair, I turned from the majestic sight and looked over at a woman sitting at a small table at the other end of the room. She loomed over a large book, scribbling notes on a piece of scrap paper without really glancing to see what she was writing. The small light above her head flowed down over her, basking her in a faux warmth that seemed to flow over her delicate skin. I forced myself to look away, focusing again on the nearing planet, but found even Mars' unbelievable beauty didn’t compare to hers. I gave myself a mental shake and walked from the room, the white metal doors sliding up into the walls as I walked past them impassively. After going down a long, seemingly endless hall I finally came upon the small control room, which seemed to have shrunk since the last time I had visited. A short, chubby man sat in a tall chair in the front of the room, searching a coal black area of the sky for something only he could see. I cleared my throat loudly, attempting to get his attention. After a few moments, he swiveled in his chair and glanced at me, his dark, watery eyes settling on my blue ones. “It seems we’ll be arriving soon. I’ve sent Charles to go tell the rest of the crew." I nodded, not paying much attention to the deep voice that seemed to overpower even that of the ship. I had always wondered how such a large voice could come from such a small man. I dismissed the thoughts and spoke softly, a whisper compared to the captains. “I’ll prepare the transports, so I won’t have to bother with them later." The captain nodded absently, waving a dismissal as I headed out, heading for the smaller ships that would take them to the surface.


Lol. Idk I don’t write SciFi. x.x


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Well its sill good. You write Vere well. I like scifi and that was like 10X better then what I write.


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pluto wrote: Well its sill good. You write Vere well. I like scifi and that was like 10X better then what I write.



Well add on to it. Lol.


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Green_Ninja wrote:

pluto wrote: Well its sill good. You write Vere well. I like scifi and that was like 10X better then what I write.



Well add on to it. Lol.



I well, But to be honest I had forgotten about this and I have just got up and not awake properly yet lol I need to get me head on to think.


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pluto wrote:

Green_Ninja wrote:

pluto wrote: Well its sill good. You write Vere well. I like scifi and that was like 10X better then what I write.



Well add on to it. Lol.



I well, But to be honest I had forgotten about this and I have just got up and not awake properly yet lol I need to get me head on to think.



-Dramatic sigh.-

Alllright.

Lol.

Going to sleep now. Have a good day, Pluto. Nice talking to you. smiley


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Green_Ninja wrote:

pluto wrote:

Green_Ninja wrote:

pluto wrote: Well its sill good. You write Vere well. I like scifi and that was like 10X better then what I write.



Well add on to it. Lol.



I well, But to be honest I had forgotten about this and I have just got up and not awake properly yet lol I need to get me head on to think.



-Dramatic sigh.-

Alllright.

Lol.

Going to sleep now. Have a good day, Pluto. Nice talking to you. smiley



LOL OK nighty night and don’t let the bed bugs bight wink


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OK all attempt to add on to it even though you have totally out classed me here GN glare

As we approached the surface of this red dusty planet it become obverse that it was by no means going to be an easy task to set up any kind of base here by which life could live and be self sufficient. There was no life at all here. It was just all a see off desert and if something where to go wrong no one would know let alone be able to help. I could not help but think of the Arabs and how they live and survive from day to day. I had all of a sudden a very deep admiration for them. Of course there was one very different thing. where they have to deal with scorching heat here in the depths of space and where no man had ever been it was cold.


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The spacecraft crashed into the dusty red planet with a huge bang, there was a flash of fire and then everyone lit on fire and died


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[i]Their souls were on a fantastical journey to a world they couldn’t possible imagine, but then...

...they stopped.

In the middle of literally nowhere, a bright and shining figure came to them, and said he, “Go back, you have not yet vanquished all evil in the universe."

And so, with the wave of a hand, they were sent to the entrance of a cave on the red planet. A monstrous dragon emerged from it, and they prepared for battle...


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Haha


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Forsaken Corpse, thats stupid lol

Red_Calibur9, thats good

Green_Ninja smiley


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