lookin for feedback look at my acc and read the freestyles hit up the pm
#4
29 Jul 2008 03:30 pm
trizzle
Guest
im spitten its never written im on the run never sittin never quittten u just been bitten im ballen like jordan and pippen till the day i die ill never stop rippen the rhymes this is my time i have the world ina tradjic bind i wont be kind mine to shine this dime i smoked i toked i choked...
trizzle wrote:
im spitten its never written im on the run never sittin never quittten u just been bitten im ballen like jordan and pippen till the day i die ill never stop rippen the rhymes this is my time i have the world ina tradjic bind i wont be kind mine to shine this dime i smoked i toked i choked...
As soon as a verse starts
I eat at MC’s Hearts
What was he thinkin
Going against....Smart
and its abserd
how people hang on every word
I’ll probaly never get the props I deserve
But I’l Never be servred
My Spot is for ever reseverd
If I ever le-versed
That would be the death of me first
My thoughts are sperattic
I act like Im a attic
I rap like Im addicted
to Smack like Im canavis
yea I just made that up all by myself.
wat........huh........thats not from till I collapse by Eminem..............Your hearing things or somthing >.>
Tarizin flows/goin through tromes/
folkes wanna HIP in the zone/but they HOP on the clone/
got the game sowed like pinz/compediterz even refuze to win/we are not pefect but we try ta refuze to sin/
prayin...dude ive been/and demons cant break me down cause
they fake like moviez so i need ta cut scene/
follow up dream/have a Holy team where Jesus destroyz demons/cause the Lord reigns on all regions/keep believin/
that hell keep you breathin/and flowz are portable like a psp/whether im rollin in a bus or a s.u.v/got my Faith next to ME/linez blow mindz/and track off timez/and twist evil spinez/this demon disser iz tragic like a brutal crime/where the pos have you pinned up like mimez/
tha flow iz a real ryhme rider not 50 cents or dimez/
tha flow got it goin twisted in hife illest to mic/
money and dimes/lemon and limes/dats how tha flow connectz from outa country to in the projectz/where eva you go
know that Jesus protectz/evil we wreck build flow
to build respect/lyricz flyin hard like jetz/
with vocal callz that blow up setz/and rip through hex/
see watz next/ az i set off the text/KID call a check/
rhmes real crunchy and chewy like a bowl of cereal chex/
whether you are or not callin bets/just know that
power-flowz wreck|-
--- -And Jesus answered and said unto him, Get thee behind me, Satan: for it is written, Thou shalt worship the Lord thy God, and him only shalt thou serve.-Luke 4:8
Last edited 30 Jul 2008 12:38 am by .E_G-THA 2 FACED KID
#7
01 Aug 2008 03:54 pm
DJ Heezy
Guest
y’all niggas is whack!
#8
07 Aug 2008 02:04 am
OnLy
Guest
????
#9
07 Aug 2008 04:05 pm
LOL man
Guest
LOL U Guys Coudnt rhyme if your life depended on it WTF
YO Nas is out wit his brand new single,
makes me want to mingle,
wit da boys in the industry,
be the first from the 416 on BET,
but everywhere i see,
faggots like EG tryin to be as good as me,
go start a group wit lil weezy cause ur ryhmes r too easy,
some people will think that ur good,
but youd get shot if ever came into the hood
id hunt u down like an avanlanche,
no matter the circumstance,
me hittin u is a 100% chance,
this is to tha 2 faced kid,
ur rhymes i forbid,
talkin bout god casue I know u a poser,
fuck wit me and you will get a lot closer
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" Your hate fuels my fire, and once im lit theres no putting me out." -Koncept
NAS4EVER wrote:
YO Nas is out wit his brand new single,
makes me want to mingle,
wit da boys in the industry,
be the first from the 416 on BET,
but everywhere i see,
faggots like EG tryin to be as good as me,
go start a group wit lil weezy cause ur ryhmes r too easy,
some people will think that ur good,
but youd get shot if ever came into the hood
id hunt u down like an avanlanche,
no matter the circumstance,
me hittin u is a 100% chance,
this is to tha 2 faced kid,
ur rhymes i forbid,
talkin bout god casue I know u a poser,
fuck wit me and you will get a lot closer
*sigh*
ANOTHER ONE?
What’s with all these newbie accounts posting raps?
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Last edited 15 Aug 2008 07:12 pm by LinkHeroOfTime
ima lil leaner. alot meaner. iam the bun. u r the weiner. u like a peter. peter pan. flyin around like a lil fairy man. i wait for u to land. i hit u the head. u wont die. but youll wish u was dead.
i am hustler. i get that bread. i am a player. yo momma gives the best head. and i am the beast man. u r the feast man. u dont eat at my table. u eat at my feet man. if u cant go wit the beat man. stay out the heat man. u run slow like a mini van. flow so good they start sellin highdro in a can.
i really dont freestyle that much but my friends tell me im pretty good. what do you guys think?
yo 1st of all thank u have haveing the guts to ryhmes on here.
but u need to make ur ryhmes more complex man dont ryhme the same shit ten times.
overrall it wasnt bad.
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" Your hate fuels my fire, and once im lit theres no putting me out." -Koncept
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