can someone help me learn to rap?

its the bitchess on this track were ganna merk u and u aint ganna merk us back its nearly 2009 and its time to shine.

ur all sad merkin each ova like mad, yall faces look like yah arse and yah breath iss banging, its called a tooth brush dont be anging check yah merking check ova mum and u dnt even no them,grow up be4 we blow yah up.

twinkle twinkle little star,we dont care whoo you aree,check you cruzzin in yah car but wen it cums to a mc bar ur off quickly in yah car,the red light dont get u dat far , when it turns green u leave the scene .

u just got merked of a pair off girlls

haha were only buzzin

My flow is heat and you cant even keep a beat because im fire and your dead meat!

come to my site school of rap

crbeef.b1.jcink.com

Why waste time with rap? It’s for losers who have no lives. What dipshits you are.

Just so you know, I’m a girl. And here’s my profile:

http://www.topix.com/member/profile/thekitchensink

haha nice rhymes N.W.A how bout this

Yo yo

I’ll flip ya da bird/
havnt u heard/
i dont giv a shit/
suk my dik/
you cant c me im dat quick/
you’ll empty clips at me but all u do is miss/
im like a renegade/
not afraid/
if you dis me while im spit/
i’ll cum up n strip ya of ya cash/
then i’ll be wippin ya ass

peace

MC PHATTY wrote: haha nice rhymes N.W.A how bout this

Yo yo

I’ll flip ya da bird/
havnt u heard/
i dont giv a shit/
suk my dik/
you cant c me im dat quick/
you’ll empty clips at me but all u do is miss/
im like a renegade/
not afraid/
if you dis me while im spit/
i’ll cum up n strip ya of ya cash/
then i’ll be wippin ya ass

peace

lol.

But the rap sucked. No offense to you personally or anything but the rap sucked.