this is what i got so far ima edit it a couple of times tho lemme know what you think so far
you can call me DK but im no drift king,
i stay off to the side like i play left wing,
this guys not big and mighty like a fuckin moose,
hes white and fluffy like a gay little goose,
dotn even get me started on this ugly ass car,
prolly never been in a fight never even got a scar,/
so he sits at home watchin anime fliping his covers,/
but what they dont tell you is that there both gay lovers,/
so you can call me the monster truck hunter,
but i still kick shit like im a punter,
beatin these niggas easier than takin a walk,
i could flow a flow while i strole around the block,/
write it down and submit the post,
but at the most ive been diagnosed,
with only bein able to speak in rhyme,
i flow so long im my own unit of time,
starts:19
Yall be hatin while im spreadin the love,
the message of the entrance into heaven above,
get shoved, if you wanna collide,
step aside motha fucka im going worldwide,(yea)
step aside motha fucka im goin worldwide
my time now or never, got a heart colder than Canadas weather,
no one better than yours truly, truly yours,
like CB4 you know when im here to score,
just listen while I glisten in the sun,
bring your hissin and yur dissin im waitin 1 on 1,
shaq vs kobe act like you know me son,
otherwise blow me slowly, take all your shots like a goalie,
I take affirmative action, wear the crown
get your brain relaxin,
but never dumb it down,got 20 letters to every noun, add another page in this stage of sound,
im the pound for pound champ, given mediocre rappers stomach cramps,
got you hooked like a chronic, this hall of fame is a little too ironic, sorry speakerzz, vin, you gonna have to accept,
its a hall of shame without koncept.
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" Your hate fuels my fire, and once im lit theres no putting me out." -Koncept
Start 00:24 the golden sun light runs down 1 side of my mind, the other covered in doubts n bouts i cant fight/
but blood vessels wont be hassled tryin to tackle this unnecessary battle where yall think im..../
destined, to wrestle, to keep these peepers open, but even if those three zeezs dont get stolen/
ill be leavin the V.E.T. speaker solo, see speakerzzz knows E.B. oh, he be golden/
moulded on hip hops mid finger rest folded, raised to the mid night sky in slow motion/
i help hold petron proposing toasts to homez, like im the maid of the house when im not just gold son/
my cold tong retreats when lazyness competes with dreams, like a stroke so i pet it count sheep n sleep/
lines 5 & 6 repeat, i wake get to my feet to see im competing for the bottom 3 on M.V.C., JEEZE!/
ill be on the top podium in a matter of weeks, overdone poetry seems to keeps my cipher complete/
bout 3 month back voted worst on M.V.C., controlled posts got me close to ownin the M.O.DEEZE!/
rap has horrible tention, im 2 toned on my knees, shoutin SPEAKZ GIVE THE FUCKIN HONOURABLE MENTION TO ME!/
i deserve it im a workin progress turnin potent contests into my opponents regrets/
test me for yourself unless PMs arent good for health, no messin a personal message will be felt in my 12/
a comination of dedication n fascination helps, cos my name n my age buddy speakzzz for its self// Fin 01:31
Start 01:41 freedom sells for dearer than life itself,dreams peace arent feared but yall know ya need wealth/
n if ya rock bottom, take ya dreams off ya mind shelf, common people dont stay when heavens a mile walk// Fin 01:50
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Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain
Last edited 25 Mar 2009 08:33 am by That Dude Moose E.B.
Yeah, i keep that ting on me at all times/
Four Fives, Or Nines/
lay ya eyes on da gun, Y’all cry/
Cal to ya dome, i keep the big shit/
big fifths, big infs, big clips/
front on me n i’ll clip it, dig this/
imagine a man comin through talkin slick to me, i’ll take that lil shit n turn it into bigger beef/
go after his nephews, neices, n kill them up/
along wit his brothers, sisters, n his bitches see/
i aint da type to talk sidewayz to/
i’ll torture him 5wayz dude, before i murder them/
ride through his block, no niggaz even heard of them/
and as for his mans, i’ll swerve on them/
all ma niggaz ridaz, ridin to the fullest/
y’all niggaz cowards, dyin before i pull it/
these mans frontin, talkin like they cooked it/
took it, n pushed it/n i’ll pull it, you’ll die by the bullet/
y’all niggaz hypocrits, two faced liars/
n i jus skeet ya bitch, n make her two shades lighter/
Start 00:24 the golden sun light runs down 1 side of my mind, the other covered in doubts n bouts i cant fight/
but blood vessels wont be hassled tryin to tackle this unnecessary battle where yall think im..../
destined, to wrestle, to keep these peepers open, but even if those three zeezs dont get stolen/
ill be leavin the V.E.T. speaker solo, see speakerzzz knows E.B. oh, he be golden/
moulded on hip hops mid finger rest folded, raised to the mid night sky in slow motion/
i help hold petron proposing toasts to homez, like im the maid of the house when im not just gold son/
my cold tong retreats when lazyness competes with dreams, like a stroke so i pet it count sheep n sleep/
lines 5 & 6 repeat, i wake get to my feet to see im competing for the bottom 3 on M.V.C., JEEZE!/
ill be on the top podium in a matter of weeks, overdone poetry seems to keeps my cipher complete/
bout 3 month back voted worst on M.V.C., controlled posts got me close to ownin the M.O.DEEZE!/
rap has horrible tention, im 2 toned on my knees, shoutin SPEAKZ GIVE THE FUCKIN HONOURABLE MENTION TO ME!/
i deserve it im a workin progress turnin potent contests into my opponents regrets/
test me for yourself unless PMs arent good for health, no messin a personal message will be felt in my 12/
a comination of dedication n fascination helps, cos my name n my age buddy speakzzz for its self// Fin 01:31
Start 01:41 freedom sells for dearer than life itself,dreams peace arent feared but yall know ya need wealth/
n if ya rock bottom, take ya dreams off ya mind shelf, common people dont stay when heavens a mile walk// Fin 01:50
Vs
KONCEPT wrote:
not really towards anyone
starts:19
Yall be hatin while im spreadin the love,
the message of the entrance into heaven above,
get shoved, if you wanna collide,
step aside motha fucka im going worldwide,(yea)
step aside motha fucka im goin worldwide
my time now or never, got a heart colder than Canadas weather,
no one better than yours truly, truly yours,
like CB4 you know when im here to score,
just listen while I glisten in the sun,
bring your hissin and yur dissin im waitin 1 on 1,
shaq vs kobe act like you know me son,
otherwise blow me slowly, take all your shots like a goalie,
I take affirmative action, wear the crown
get your brain relaxin,
but never dumb it down,got 20 letters to every noun, add another page in this stage of sound,
im the pound for pound champ, given mediocre rappers stomach cramps,
got you hooked like a chronic, this hall of fame is a little too ironic, sorry speakerzz, vin, you gonna have to accept,
its a hall of shame without koncept.
Vs
deadkamakazi wrote:
this is what i got so far ima edit it a couple of times tho lemme know what you think so far
you can call me DK but im no drift king,
i stay off to the side like i play left wing,
this guys not big and mighty like a fuckin moose,
hes white and fluffy like a gay little goose,
dotn even get me started on this ugly ass car,
prolly never been in a fight never even got a scar,/
so he sits at home watchin anime fliping his covers,/
but what they dont tell you is that there both gay lovers,/
so you can call me the monster truck hunter,
but i still kick shit like im a punter,
beatin these niggas easier than takin a walk,
i could flow a flow while i strole around the block,/
write it down and submit the post,
but at the most ive been diagnosed,
with only bein able to speak in rhyme,
i flow so long im my own unit of time,
VETS vote please
moose e.b. Vs koncept Vs deadkamakazi
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Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain
Last edited 28 Mar 2009 09:42 am by That Dude Moose E.B.