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SuBuRbAn GaNgStAAA wrote: Whatever. If you try selling coke to my little brother I will gather my merry band of Punk Metal boys and we will fight!

Don’t say anything about Rock sucking. I doubt you even know anything about Rock. It isn’t all satanic or suicidal messages neither. You need to look up some Disturbed, Lamb of God, Ted Nugent, ect. There is some positive Rock out there. Unlike Rap which is all the same.

-Change the World by Bone Thugs -N- Harmony
-Changes by Tupac
-The Poverty of Philosophy by Immortal Technique
-Dear Momma by Tupac
-Order My Steps by Bone Thugs -N- Harmony
-Creation & Destruction by Immortal Technique
-Speak Your Mind by Immortal Technique
-Hard Times Hustlin' by Krayzie Bone
-Keep Ya Head Up by Tupac

Those are just a few of my favorites, but they are definitely unique, don’t ramble on about the glory of hoes && dope, and have a message && story to them. Don’t confuse sell-out hip hop songs with real rap. I’m sure there are plenty of posure rock bands with artificial messages out there, but that doesn’t define the genre does it? Try not to be so biased and judge something on it’s value, not it’s title or category.

OK just went back && saw the post about you faking those opinioins;
Guess I jumped the gun a little bit lol.

Do you know what it feels like for your own blood to leave you bleedin?/


For the few people you trusted to leave you sodomized and defeated?/


Do you know what it looks like to see clearly, no distortion/


That you’re the unwanted bi-product of your mother’s failed abortion/


Have you ever lived a life where you had nothing to eat?/


Or been out on the streets with nowhere to sleep?/


Do you know the pain of being beaten until you’ve broke?/


Or watching everything you own as it goes up in smoke?/


Do you know how disgusting it feels when you’re 4 && he’s touching you/


The first person in your life that you thought you could put your trust into/


Do you know what it’s like to watch your mom waste away?/


From the sex, and the alcohol, and all the fucking meth she takes/


Do you know the revulsion it causes being raped by grown men/


Or the fear that someday it might happen again/


Do you live everyday knowing that your father tried to murder your family/


Or is it worse knowing that he was incarcerated for raping your nanny/


Does it even make a difference which uncle molested you?/


When every single one of them has shown the evil’s they can do/


Is it over-reacting when you’re devastated by the miscarriage of your first baby/


Or did you get your own hopes up by letting yourself think that maybe/


For once in your life something good happened to you/


Maybe God was trying to make up for all the shit you’ve been through/


But then you lost it....and deep inside you lost you.


*this is my first attempt on a freestyle about some genuine shit in my life; give me some CONSTRUCTIVE feedback please.

HAHAHAH ok B.J.M ill hit you back



nigga i was a thug, before i got my mug,
now i just lay low, kick back spittin my flows,
and before i new it i became the mufuckn king,
nigga i rain supreme,i got that thug mentality,
an im doin my skeems,im leaving reality, while im spittin my seen,
& nigga im a monster and everyday is hollowen,
what is my name? MUMBLES and im bringin the pain,
im repin that (562) ima sykotik nigga and ima ride on you,
chicken noodle soup now im feedin you to yo crew,
blowin my mind with this hennessy,
fillin my stomach up with that KFC,
im downin this syrup & i aint talkin bout the mapol,
niggas a loked out mufucka sniffin yey up the nazol,
without a doubt im gettin layed tonight,
& if you disagree then stand and catch my fade and fight,
now you tryin to pick up trees,nigga plz,
you aint no G,im chargin bitch ass niggas fees,
yous a dumb muthafucka name B.J.M,
& ima turn around and slang yo ass stems,
burned my ass to a crisp?,
nigga ima give you a permanent lisp,

nli.... wrote:

Rap Superstar wrote: wow so talented...Not.

who you coming at faggot?

You got something to say mate?
dont write one line..write Ten.

I doubt that there could ever be...a more wicked MC//
'Cuz AIDs infested child molesters aren’t sicker than me// - Immortal Technique

Rap Superstar wrote:

nli.... wrote:

Rap Superstar wrote: wow so talented...Not.

who you coming at faggot?

You got something to say mate?
dont write one line..write Ten.

who was “wow so talented...Not." meant to be at?

puttin other peoples lines in yo rhymes/
thinkin you the shit when we really know you the bitch/ thinkin your as funny as richard pryar/
ima fold you up and put you in the dryer till you start on fire/
this shit gonna be like a movie on high speed connection so yall better bring your fukin protection/
Ima let you have it/
My name aint fukin rabbit/
but i can still rhyme like a fukin savage/
try n hate on me i’ll attack you like fukin HIV virus/
you’ll be lookin like miley cyrus doped up on crack/
ill be waitin for you to be back with some kind of line/
but the thing is you cant fukin rhyme/
youll be looking as green as a fukin lime/
cant afford nothin but that 10 cent rhyme/
you scared to hit that bong unlike cheech and chong/
you run at the smell of that chronic/
in search of that gin and tonic/
you should get yo rhymes straight b4 you post em on myspace/
cause u gonna have to work your magic if you think you gonna be sellin that havick.

puttin other peoples lines in yo rhymes/
thinkin you the shit when we really know you the bitch/ thinkin your as funny as richard pryar/
ima fold you up and put you in the dryer till you start on fire/
this shit gonna be like a movie on high speed connection so yall better bring your fukin protection/
Ima let you have it/
My name aint fukin rabbit/
but i can still rhyme like a fukin savage/
try n hate on me i’ll attack you like fukin HIV virus/
you’ll be lookin like miley cyrus doped up on crack/
ill be waitin for you to be back with some kind of line/
but the thing is you cant fukin rhyme/
youll be looking as green as a fukin lime/
cant afford nothin but that 10 cent rhyme/
you scared to hit that bong unlike cheech and chong/
you run at the smell of that chronic/
in search of that gin and tonic/
you should get yo rhymes straight b4 you post em on myspace/
cause u gonna have to work your magic if you think you gonna be sellin that havick.

That Dude Moose E.B. wrote: on the last page i said id wrote 2 complex verses, well i lied, they werent that good.

ive had none stop writters block for ages now, and it gets me down cos i know ive got the ability to be almost as good as vintage.

anywayz ive bought 4 cds to try n get my inspiration back....
. Talib Kweli - The Beautiful Struggle
. Common - Finding Forever
. Genius GZA - Liquid Swords
. Common - Universal Mind Control

if by next time i post on here i havent wrote a good verse i might just quit writtin cos i really cant be assed with it.

Writing shouldn’t be something you feel forced to do...Forced music isnt good,you should just feel it and write whats on your mind,worry about being complex and everything after you’ve covered the basics..

Mumbles wrote: HAHAHAH ok B.J.M ill hit you back



nigga i was a thug, before i got my mug,
now i just lay low, kick back spittin my flows,
and before i new it i became the mufuckn king,
nigga i rain supreme,i got that thug mentality,
an im doin my skeems,im leaving reality, while im spittin my seen,
& nigga im a monster and everyday is hollowen,
what is my name? MUMBLES and im bringin the pain,
im repin that (562) ima sykotik nigga and ima ride on you,
chicken noodle soup now im feedin you to yo crew,
blowin my mind with this hennessy,
fillin my stomach up with that KFC,
im downin this syrup & i aint talkin bout the mapol,
niggas a loked out mufucka sniffin yey up the nazol,
without a doubt im gettin layed tonight,
& if you disagree then stand and catch my fade and fight,
now you tryin to pick up trees,nigga plz,
you aint no G,im chargin bitch ass niggas fees,
yous a dumb muthafucka name B.J.M,
& ima turn around and slang yo ass stems,
burned my ass to a crisp?,
nigga ima give you a permanent lisp,

Ha it seems like someones finally bringing something to the game
its a shame that the only thing that you got on me is my name
ha dude you rappin and sayin shit about KFC you should be rappin about that girl that gave you an STD
nigga please,
you sayin this shit like if it hurts me
do yourself a favor and go back to rehearsing
because your rhymes are disturbing
Now dont try to talk back to me or i’ll make your ass swim wit the fishes with the rest of the bitches, and snitches wit stitches so dude make ya final wishes
Yo you say my name is dumb but your name sounds like a clown with his ass numb
because he keeps on gettin fucked up the ass.hum.
yo im thirteen but im killing people on this site wit da ill rhymes that i write
theres blood on my fingers thats how much i type
because man now im hype
im ready for the pin
find da closet man wit da stripes
i dont watch wresling but i know that im right when i say 1,2,3.find the next nigga who wants to battle me

They say rap about shit thats personal and the flow will jus come//
But what the fuck is personal about my life when odds are a million to one//
That I’ll jus be another failure statistic, or live my life in poverty//
But tell me why I should waste my fuckin time when I can’t feed my kids on philosophy//
I’ve lived my whole life fearing tortue, rape and starvation//
While tha dumbfucks at my door preachin' about the good Lord’s salvation//
Please tell me where he was at when my Daddy was hittin my mom//
Or when my uncle would molest me 'til my parents came home//
Tell me where was God when I had nothing to eat//
Or when at the age of 8 I had sores on my feet//
From runnin meth all over the city to support my parents habit//
There’s no hope of a better life for me, but fuck it I’ll have it//
You want to hear something personal, something that’ll start this flow?//
How about being 12 and having my head slammed through a door//
Or at the age of 14 dying of alcohol poisoning//
Fed to me by my “friends” and the boys that they’d bring//
Now I have a gun, my own, and I can’t decide//
Should I end this shit? or get back everyone who ruined my life//
I don’t know how to end it, or fix what I’ve been through//
But if you were raped and beaten for 17 years what the fuck would you do?//


*** Can I get some feedback plz; preferrably from vintage or one of the other ones who knows what they are talking about. haha wheres Godsfavourite when you need him?

El Hermosa Locura wrote: They say rap about shit thats personal and the flow will jus come//
But what the fuck is personal about my life when odds are a million to one//
That I’ll jus be another failure statistic, or live my life in poverty//
But tell me why I should waste my fuckin time when I can’t feed my kids on philosophy//
I’ve lived my whole life fearing tortue, rape and starvation//
While tha dumbfucks at my door preachin' about the good Lord’s salvation//
Please tell me where he was at when my Daddy was hittin my mom//
Or when my uncle would molest me 'til my parents came home//
Tell me where was God when I had nothing to eat//
Or when at the age of 8 I had sores on my feet//
From runnin meth all over the city to support my parents habit//
There’s no hope of a better life for me, but fuck it I’ll have it//
You want to hear something personal, something that’ll start this flow?//
How about being 12 and having my head slammed through a door//
Or at the age of 14 dying of alcohol poisoning//
Fed to me by my “friends” and the boys that they’d bring//
Now I have a gun, my own, and I can’t decide//
Should I end this shit? or get back everyone who ruined my life//
I don’t know how to end it, or fix what I’ve been through//
But if you were raped and beaten for 17 years what the fuck would you do?//


*** Can I get some feedback plz; preferrably from vintage or one of the other ones who knows what they are talking about. haha wheres Godsfavourite when you need him?

That was good man but I cant help but think you are kind of posing. I mean the chances that you were raped, abused, drug trafficed coke at 8, saw your mom get beat, dying of alcohol poisoning etc..

hit me up on my myspace or follow me on twitter
www.myspace.com/brianjmart
www.twitter.com/BJM1234

hahaha no wonder yo shit is cheap,
dont fuck with me im always on the creap,
tryin to talk about me and the STD,
you wouldnt even know what to do with the pussy
even if it was layin on yo bed sheet,
now you in the bathroom with a magazen skeet skeet skeet!,
you talkin bout how much blood you tipe,
nigga you a nerd get a life,
im the reaper & im comin with the sith,
my flows got a mind of their own,
puttin you in a box like i shot you with da crome,
now nigga dont frown,smile ima clown ;],
shit 1 2 3z,im smokin up all my trees,
but thats just me,thats right im ballin,
im comin up fat nigga you fallin,
now get back up on the lader,like it even matters,
you lil wanna be 2pac,hit me back when yo flows knock

God dam this shit is dead, I’m out for awhile, I’ll be on LB if anybody needs me, holla at me when yall do another tourney.

KlNG JOHN II wrote: God dam this shit is dead, I’m out for awhile, I’ll be on LB if anybody needs me, holla at me when yall do another tourney.

Who gives a fuck? Go away, you’re not important.

Mumbles wrote: hahaha no wonder yo shit is cheap,
dont fuck with me im always on the creap,
tryin to talk about me and the STD,
you wouldnt even know what to do with the pussy
even if it was layin on yo bed sheet,
now you in the bathroom with a magazen skeet skeet skeet!,
you talkin bout how much blood you tipe,
nigga you a nerd get a life,
im the reaper & im comin with the sith,
my flows got a mind of their own,
puttin you in a box like i shot you with da crome,
now nigga dont frown,smile ima clown ;],
shit 1 2 3z,im smokin up all my trees,
but thats just me,thats right im ballin,
im comin up fat nigga you fallin,
now get back up on the lader,like it even matters,
you lil wanna be 2pac,hit me back when yo flows knock

nigga you garbage get off this site,
holla back at me when you learn how to write
nigga you say that I wouldnt know what to do wit a pussy even if it was in my bed sheet
ha ask ya girl i didnt even miss a beat
nigga stop trying to spit
because i bet at home your just a scared little jit
right now your probably at home and all you can do is make ya teeth grit
yo it seems like you runnin out of things to say because ya rhymes are weaker
cuz ya scared ya gonna get schooled by this boricua
ha you said that im a nerd and to get a life
shut up before i get my gat and my knife
man i could go all night
so prepare for the fight of ya life
take ya ass out wit juss one slice
yo man listen to wat im sayin cuz right now ya gonna be payin
yo when i rhyme it should be crime
and i do it all the dam time
im ill thats the only thing on my mind
nigga you trash stop rappin
people are laughin
im out bitch
middle finger i got made hits

ok B.J.M you thinkin you tight,but you the former king of this site,
your only 13,you just became a teen,
now that im in town,im takin your krown,cuz if you fuckin with the king,
than you fuckin with my seen,
im comin though with the killa Bs,droppin you to yo knees,
nigga plz,dont regret it now muthafucka,
just respect me cuz i got the krown muthafucka,
now look at you right back down on yo knees bowin down to me,
and if not then muthafucka im insane,
ill make it rain,with this crome to yo brain,
i got no shame,i got my fame,from my game,
now im grave robin yo ass,
fo yo cash and yo stash,yo bud will never last,
cuz im smokin it fast,tokin it fast,
see now your boys are hatin me cuz im smokin
and takin nuthin but the T H C in yo trees,
see i U stoo love kickin it with my niggas,
now i love poolin my triggas,pop pop bang,now every nigga is goin insane,
im at the top of the food chain,
you at the bottom you aint no thang,
im repin my gang,east side 8 trey gangsta crip,& we straped to the tip

a B.J.M thats whats up you got flow homie
keep hittin me baby hit me hard cuz i aint backin up nigga

KlNG JOHN II wrote:

AznSkillz wrote: Man I haven’t been on here in a while lol, so everyone
I think and beleive I need to work on my delivery on my tracks so.. any advice? and What exactly is delivery man I forgot, I’ve been focusing on flow and other things so much
with the Audios not the Delivery..

Any vets that can help me out let me know please.

ASkillz

Delivery and flow are pretty much the same thing, what you need to do is ride the beat more, you seem to just rhyme with a beat in the background, you need to rhyme on beat.

that’s funny I do rhyme on beat, I hit the tat
with each rhyming word.

oh hai wrote:

El Hermosa Locura wrote: They say rap about shit thats personal and the flow will jus come//
But what the fuck is personal about my life when odds are a million to one//
That I’ll jus be another failure statistic, or live my life in poverty//
But tell me why I should waste my fuckin time when I can’t feed my kids on philosophy//
I’ve lived my whole life fearing tortue, rape and starvation//
While tha dumbfucks at my door preachin' about the good Lord’s salvation//
Please tell me where he was at when my Daddy was hittin my mom//
Or when my uncle would molest me 'til my parents came home//
Tell me where was God when I had nothing to eat//
Or when at the age of 8 I had sores on my feet//
From runnin meth all over the city to support my parents habit//
There’s no hope of a better life for me, but fuck it I’ll have it//
You want to hear something personal, something that’ll start this flow?//
How about being 12 and having my head slammed through a door//
Or at the age of 14 dying of alcohol poisoning//
Fed to me by my “friends” and the boys that they’d bring//
Now I have a gun, my own, and I can’t decide//
Should I end this shit? or get back everyone who ruined my life//
I don’t know how to end it, or fix what I’ve been through//
But if you were raped and beaten for 17 years what the fuck would you do?//


*** Can I get some feedback plz; preferrably from vintage or one of the other ones who knows what they are talking about. haha wheres Godsfavourite when you need him?

That was good man but I cant help but think you are kind of posing. I mean the chances that you were raped, abused, drug trafficed coke at 8, saw your mom get beat, dying of alcohol poisoning etc..

1)I’m a girl
2)All that shit HAS happened to me, thats why I chose to write about it because it’s the only thing I really know. I could write about all the illegal shit I did, but that’s not the kind of person I want to be so I would consider that posing.