It’s funny when you rap about rape and poverty//
People come at your discrediting your story//
but drop ten bars about cash you don’t have, or straps that ain’t strapped//
and people start handing you undeserved glory//
yeah I shot up a liquor store, and I do have a gun under my bed//
I bloody anyone who comes at me, but that ain’t shit compared to the thoughts in my head//
Do you think it’s normal to fantasize about committing homicide?//
Do you think it’s sick to get off on thinking of how they’d die?//
I don’t give a fuck anymore that’s just how I live my life//
I’m not a thug and I don’t claim to hustle//
I don’t claim I run shit or cry about an imaginary struggle//
I grew up homeless, raped, and abused//
But I guess that isn’t shit compared to what you’ve been through//
It must suck missing your allowance once a week//
You get money for nothing when my family can’t even afford to eat//
Don’t talk to me about having a hard life//
Be grateful for the things you have//
Like a family that won’t stab you in the back, or a Mom who wasn’t raped by your Dad//
Be glad you grew up with somewhere to lay your head//
Because for 3 years of MY life the fuckin streets were my bed//
I don’t want your pity, I don’t tell you this for attention//
I just thought maybe my struggle deserved an honorable mention...
That Dude Moose E.B. wrote:
on the last page i said id wrote 2 complex verses, well i lied, they werent that good.
ive had none stop writters block for ages now, and it gets me down cos i know ive got the ability to be almost as good as vintage.
anywayz ive bought 4 cds to try n get my inspiration back....
. Talib Kweli - The Beautiful Struggle
. Common - Finding Forever
. Genius GZA - Liquid Swords
. Common - Universal Mind Control
if by next time i post on here i havent wrote a good verse i might just quit writtin cos i really cant be assed with it.
Writing shouldn’t be something you feel forced to do...Forced music isnt good,you should just feel it and write whats on your mind,worry about being complex and everything after you’ve covered the basics..
its not that im forcing it... it might be lazyness, maddafact, im not even sure.
ima post a couple o barz doe might get me started
oh n btw this thread is dead boiz...all these newbs!! lol
That Dude Moose E.B. wrote:
on the last page i said id wrote 2 complex verses, well i lied, they werent that good.
ive had none stop writters block for ages now, and it gets me down cos i know ive got the ability to be almost as good as vintage.
anywayz ive bought 4 cds to try n get my inspiration back....
. Talib Kweli - The Beautiful Struggle
. Common - Finding Forever
. Genius GZA - Liquid Swords
. Common - Universal Mind Control
if by next time i post on here i havent wrote a good verse i might just quit writtin cos i really cant be assed with it.
Writing shouldn’t be something you feel forced to do...Forced music isnt good,you should just feel it and write whats on your mind,worry about being complex and everything after you’ve covered the basics..
its not that im forcin it its the oposite, yameen... it might just be lazyness im not sure.
anyway ima post a couple o barz to help me get back on track.
oh n btw this thread is dead... look at all these newbs!!!
That Dude Moose E.B. wrote:
on the last page i said id wrote 2 complex verses, well i lied, they werent that good.
ive had none stop writters block for ages now, and it gets me down cos i know ive got the ability to be almost as good as vintage.
anywayz ive bought 4 cds to try n get my inspiration back....
. Talib Kweli - The Beautiful Struggle
. Common - Finding Forever
. Genius GZA - Liquid Swords
. Common - Universal Mind Control
if by next time i post on here i havent wrote a good verse i might just quit writtin cos i really cant be assed with it.
Writing shouldn’t be something you feel forced to do...Forced music isnt good,you should just feel it and write whats on your mind,worry about being complex and everything after you’ve covered the basics..
its not that im forcing it... it might be lazyness, maddafact, im not even sure.
ima post a couple o barz doe might get me started
oh n btw this thread is dead boiz...all these newbs!! lol
ill come flyin across like spikes in a chinise fight scene//
find my feet in tree tops even in timbs i seize talk by rhyming//
their gob smacked each lines mine so i dont fight to cause behind chins//
im death proof on the mic side so watch out when im drivin//
thats more like it...
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Moose E.B. AKA CartOOn Villain
Last edited 07 Jul 2009 07:42 am by That Dude Moose E.B.
El Hermosa Locura wrote:
They say rap about shit thats personal and the flow will jus come//
But what the fuck is personal about my life when odds are a million to one//
That I’ll jus be another failure statistic, or live my life in poverty//
But tell me why I should waste my fuckin time when I can’t feed my kids on philosophy//
I’ve lived my whole life fearing tortue, rape and starvation//
While tha dumbfucks at my door preachin' about the good Lord’s salvation//
Please tell me where he was at when my Daddy was hittin my mom//
Or when my uncle would molest me 'til my parents came home//
Tell me where was God when I had nothing to eat//
Or when at the age of 8 I had sores on my feet//
From runnin meth all over the city to support my parents habit//
There’s no hope of a better life for me, but fuck it I’ll have it//
You want to hear something personal, something that’ll start this flow?//
How about being 12 and having my head slammed through a door//
Or at the age of 14 dying of alcohol poisoning//
Fed to me by my “friends” and the boys that they’d bring//
Now I have a gun, my own, and I can’t decide//
Should I end this shit? or get back everyone who ruined my life//
I don’t know how to end it, or fix what I’ve been through//
But if you were raped and beaten for 17 years what the fuck would you do?//
*** Can I get some feedback plz; preferrably from vintage or one of the other ones who knows what they are talking about. haha wheres Godsfavourite when you need him?
yeh man that was good, r u new to this site or an oldie on the return??
and was that real wot u were talkin bout...seemed a lil crazy baby.
Mumbles wrote:
ok B.J.M you thinkin you tight,but you the former king of this site,
your only 13,you just became a teen,
now that im in town,im takin your krown,cuz if you fuckin with the king,
than you fuckin with my seen,
im comin though with the killa Bs,droppin you to yo knees,
nigga plz,dont regret it now muthafucka,
just respect me cuz i got the krown muthafucka,
now look at you right back down on yo knees bowin down to me,
and if not then muthafucka im insane,
ill make it rain,with this crome to yo brain,
i got no shame,i got my fame,from my game,
now im grave robin yo ass,
fo yo cash and yo stash,yo bud will never last,
cuz im smokin it fast,tokin it fast,
see now your boys are hatin me cuz im smokin
and takin nuthin but the T H C in yo trees,
see i U stoo love kickin it with my niggas,
now i love poolin my triggas,pop pop bang,now every nigga is goin insane,
im at the top of the food chain,
you at the bottom you aint no thang,
im repin my gang,east side 8 trey gangsta crip,& we straped to the tip
yo dude you say you gonna take the crown
now that you came town
the only way you gonna take the crown is if you grow breast and wear a gown(no homo)
because dude ya only fit to be a queen
i noticed something we only rap about certain things like kings,violence, and schemes
but thats o.k cause im the king and i reign supreme
o didnt mean to crush ya dreams
but i deem that i have alot of time to be king
because my mind always be keen
yo im the king forever like Michael
if i die the crown’s gonna stay in my family like a cycle
yo i was laughin when you said you got no shame
you should be ashamed that ya rhymes are this lame
yo you always rap about the same thang
dude give me something new before i make ya ass hang
kill you with this nasty slang
i’ll bring yo pain over and over a gain
yo hit me back wit something good this time
wit some good ass rhymes
or somethin more hood this time
before i loose my mind
im done bitch
so read this last line
i got that mack milly,ready to put you in a box,
cuz im really,fuckin insane plus i got a glock,
step to me & im quick to make shit pop,
these silver slugs makin niggas drop,
yes im quick on a lick & i never stop,
never come to my block & if i see you on my lot,
ima plant you in the ground like my pot,
nigga your flows are slow & you only gettin cought,
spittin other niggas rhymes that shit aint hot,
nigga my flows are right up on the dot,
this is mumbles off the dome! on the spot,
Mumbles wrote:
i got that mack milly,ready to put you in a box,
cuz im really,fuckin insane plus i got a glock,
step to me & im quick to make shit pop,
these silver slugs makin niggas drop,
yes im quick on a lick & i never stop,
never come to my block & if i see you on my lot,
ima plant you in the ground like my pot,
nigga your flows are slow & you only gettin cought,
spittin other niggas rhymes that shit aint hot,
nigga my flows are right up on the dot,
this is mumbles off the dome! on the spot,
B.J.M dont be usin my rhyme cuz
hell no i aint stealin nobody rhymes because i got mine
right there you just crossed the line
cuz my rhymes are divine
the only reason you sayin that is because you aint got nothing else to say
this is ya final words for today
put you to sleep in ya grave
bury you in a cave
youll be in the sky spitin the words that i gave
yo i’ll collapse on you like a tidal wave
ha yo wishin yo could be saved
dude i’ll spit these nasty rhymes to ya face
one wish thats all it takes just tell me to back down cuz ya bout to crack now
lick a sack child
ya such a fag wow
im out bitch
get something good this time
Mumbles wrote:
i got that mack milly,ready to put you in a box,
cuz im really,fuckin insane plus i got a glock,
step to me & im quick to make shit pop,
these silver slugs makin niggas drop,
yes im quick on a lick & i never stop,
never come to my block & if i see you on my lot,
ima plant you in the ground like my pot,
nigga your flows are slow & you only gettin cought,
spittin other niggas rhymes that shit aint hot,
nigga my flows are right up on the dot,
this is mumbles off the dome! on the spot,
El Hermosa Locura wrote:
They say rap about shit thats personal and the flow will jus come//
But what the fuck is personal about my life when odds are a million to one//
That I’ll jus be another failure statistic, or live my life in poverty//
But tell me why I should waste my fuckin time when I can’t feed my kids on philosophy//
I’ve lived my whole life fearing tortue, rape and starvation//
While tha dumbfucks at my door preachin' about the good Lord’s salvation//
Please tell me where he was at when my Daddy was hittin my mom//
Or when my uncle would molest me 'til my parents came home//
Tell me where was God when I had nothing to eat//
Or when at the age of 8 I had sores on my feet//
From runnin meth all over the city to support my parents habit//
There’s no hope of a better life for me, but fuck it I’ll have it//
You want to hear something personal, something that’ll start this flow?//
How about being 12 and having my head slammed through a door//
Or at the age of 14 dying of alcohol poisoning//
Fed to me by my “friends” and the boys that they’d bring//
Now I have a gun, my own, and I can’t decide//
Should I end this shit? or get back everyone who ruined my life//
I don’t know how to end it, or fix what I’ve been through//
But if you were raped and beaten for 17 years what the fuck would you do?//
*** Can I get some feedback plz; preferrably from vintage or one of the other ones who knows what they are talking about. haha wheres Godsfavourite when you need him?
yeh man that was good, r u new to this site or an oldie on the return??
and was that real wot u were talkin bout...seemed a lil crazy baby.
Um I was on this site like 3 years ago on the forum that got locked, as Lil Deztynii or whatever but I never really dropped much before. What did you think about the last one I did?
&& yeah all that shit’s happened to me, thats why I decided to rap about it because I figured my flow would be more genuine; I’m just getting started though so the shits not really complex yet. Thanks for helping a girl out though!
Yo You niggaz is wack posting Garbage come on this aint the trash
You motherfuckers Aint hood yu dont hold gats
You aint out till 4 in the morning Selling crack
Come on dog il send my niggaz where you rest at
They’ll leave you on the ground with yah neck twisted back
I know you dont want that so where the safe at where the cash at?
I know you dont want problems but you gnna have to face the facts
just something imm bored as fuck i havet wrote in a min anyone wanna battle get at me
If I’m elected for ten terms
I’m renewing the staff after the inagural
And hiring all girls as interns
If I don’t like you, I’ll snatch you outta your mic booth
While you’re rappin and pull your right through the window and fight you
I’ll take you straight to the pavement
Uppercut you, and scrape your face wit a bracelet
Like a razor that shaved it
Three drinks and I’m ready to flash
Runnin on stage in a g-string, wit a bee sting on my ass
thats it..how is it?
Music 
lol
