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[Reply] #30,441
07-19-2010 05:10 PM
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JDawg
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My Freestyle :

Now You Know Ive Had A Fucked Up Life,
Cuz Ya Niggahs Stabbed Me In The Heart,
Wit A Rusty As Fuck Knife,
I’m The Master Of The Arts, 
Rip Rappin An Quick Stabbin Hearts,
An Makin The Marks On This Town,
Cuz Im The King,
I Wear The Crown,
And Ill Turn Ya Life Upside Down,
So Listen To This Shit Im About To Tell,
Or Do I Have To Yell,
Dis Shit In Yo Ear,
So You Can Hear,
Everything In My Life Thats So Sincere,
Oh Wait There Aint Nothin On This List,
You Werent Expectin Much Like There Was A Twist,
Yo Think Ya Cool,
Wit A Gang Wrapped In Stitches,
Hold Up You Boys Look Familiar,
How Can You Boys Be Such Bitches,
Haha,
You Think Ya Cool Wit All The Yo Mum Jokes,
But When I Put My Dick In Her Mouth,
She Just Chokes,
And Swallow Like I Won Lotto,
I Got A Fucked Up Motto,
But Ey,
Imma Get The Ten Digits Of Ya Mother For A Dollar Tomoro,
Now After That Shit I Bet Ya Feelin Sad,
But Wat Ever Happeneded To Being So Big N Bad,
So Fuck You,
Don’t Judge Me And I Wont Judge You,
Cuz You Dont Know All The Shit I Been Through,
Wen Ya With Ya Boys Yu On Top Of The World,
But When You Alone You Such A Lil Girl,
So Welcome To My World,
You Should Have Ya Eyes Ripped Out,
And Glued To Ya Ass,
So You Can Look Back In Da Past,
An See How Bad I Spanked Yo Ass,
So Why The Shiver N Shake,
Like Yu Been Hit Wit A Fuckin Earthquake,
Like A Shake N Bake Pancake,
Yu Flat On Ya Ass,
Now Yu Cant Say Nothin Bout Ma Swagga Or Class,
Niggah You Da Shrill,
Like A Pork Chop On Grill,
Eat Ya I Just Will,
Now Ya Came To Battle Me Did Ya Wear A Vest,
Cuz Ya Cabt Rhyme Without A Slug In Ya Chest,
Now Im Only Half Way Through,
Like Hitler N A Jew,
Ya Gassed Up N Nothin Is Stoppin You,
From Blowin Or Goin,
Like A Suicide Bomber Wit No Fear Showin,
Or A Flurescent Light In The Night Sky Glowin,
Fuck Rappin Is Easier Than I Thought,
Cuz My Words They Just Flowin,
Now Listen In Dawg,
Cuz I Wanna Have This Girl,
I Wanna Call Her Mine N Give Her Da World,
Like A Red Rose Flower,
Does She Pay By The Hour,
Like Ya Ugly As Shit Sister There Aint Nothin Sour,
Well All Thats Shit,
Now Ive Failed To Show Her What I Think,
So My Last Resort Is This Pen An Its Ink,
I Wanna Be A Man But Im Still A Child,
Like A Snake In The Wild,
Waitin To Retract An Come Back,
Wit Chit Chat And Get That,
Shit At The Crib,
Like A Gangsta In Prison Wit A Knife N A Shiv,
Niggah Niggah Are You Okay,
Haha Like I Give A Fuck Im Da KKK,
So Fuck You I Got My Own Problems An Sin,
So Suck My Dick Bitch,
I’m The Devils Fuckin Twin,
Now I Aint Trynna Win This Battle,
Cuz Im Already The Best,
So Fuck Wit Me N Ya Fail The Test,
If It Was Up To Me Id Pump Lead In Ya Chest,
So Niggah Yu Aint Gettin Da Mic,
Imma Finish Da Rest,
Okay Niggah Im Outtie,
Try N Tell These Niggahs Somethin They Dont Already Know About Me,
Know I Know That You Okay,
So Imma Finish This Rap,
Wit A Fuck Yu N Have A Nice Day,


Soz It Might Not Be Good, Its My First Freestyle An I Wanna See If Its Half Decent. So Please Rate And Comment.!

[Reply] #30,442
07-20-2010 01:29 AM
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Sid-u cant see me
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rap is ma free style,i cant stop till the end/
i got no girl,but u all gay have new boyfriend//
whats gone dude try to battle with me/
may be u r crazy but that didn’t happen to me//
the fact is that i am real and u r phony/
just like Saragossa and tony//
o boy u cant hurt me//
u better 2 climb up a tree/
before the wilder got free//
u cant shoot me,even u holding up a sniper 92.3//
i telling u that on your face/
i got no respect, there is no place//
and what about this world life/
u just a poor boy who has no wife//
there is no dream,i am a walking nightmare/
anytime anywhere,i dont fight fair//
i gonna kick ur ass so beware//
u say i cant rap/
u call me black//
whats up that//
i rap like free style,i am not sure/
but people goes crazy for sid once more//
no matter how hard you try/
i dont know why/
but with me you cant fly//
ur face may be gonna cute but dont think anything big/
becoz your mind size at my dig//
now u have 2 say my rapp is just wowww/
because u cant see me my time is nowww//

[Reply] #30,443
07-20-2010 03:11 AM
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DJ Gro-P
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Jdawg (if that’s his name) was much better than the second one, right below him. Just saying.

I like your style, Jdawg. It seems there are two patters for rap, well, as I know of.

1
1
2
2
Ex: I love to blow
but I ain’t no hoe.
Jesus walked on water,
but also slept with your daughter

I’m keeping it simple, just listen :P

Also, there’s

1
2
1
2

I don’t love to blow
and Jesus walked on water.
I ain’t no hoe
but I slept with your daughter

I like the second way, it’s abit more complicated and when saying the rap, you can PUNCH way more each line differently.

It was nice, hope you’ll bring new shit to this place. (:

[Reply] #30,444
07-20-2010 06:25 AM
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JDawg
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Thanks man, that’s my first ever rap is it okay haha.. Considerin I’m a lil white boy, the mic is my toy, like blister in the sun, me shootin a gun, havin some fun chillin, killin a lil hillin, that’s the way so of yu disagree yu are gay haha idk justcame up on te spot

[Reply] #30,445
07-20-2010 07:46 AM
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to sid-u cant see me,


why yu actin hard,
this aint poker,
stop playin the cards,
quit playin the game,
cuz the shit yo spittin is lame,
now listen in cuz im nearly the same,
yeah thats right im new to the game,
but my rhymes arent wrong,
cuz the tick of a tyme bomb is the beat to rhyme on,
so cut with the shit n the crap,
this aint a war so dont attack,
charge at me with yo words of hate,
haha yo gonna lose this battle,
cuz its just fate..


haha what now G...
dont worry, i havent been rappin for long.. just started.

[Reply] #30,446
07-20-2010 10:24 AM
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JDawg
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Aiight, imma lay it down.. Let’s get some battles goin..? I’ve been doin this shit de two days and want some competition so anywone wit the balls to challenge me go ahead... Haha I only just started freestyle so I ain’t that good

[Reply] #30,447
07-20-2010 11:17 AM
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listen here you little bitch, i just dont give a shit, you trying to act hard with these weak lyrics u spit, cause when i spit the verse the shit gets worse and worse
first of all u aint ill, dont even have any skill say you coming at me with a fuckin ak trying to diss me your going about it the wrong way,

O.M.G i forgot my god damn key sittin here with D o double g, sayin bitch please get off yo knees

And When I get done with the song, you think I’m bullshitting
because you wont know if it’s freestyle or if the shit is written

got our gats grippin just in case you start dissin, i got perfect precision, in my division i got perfect vision, sitting here watching television.

[Reply] #30,448
07-20-2010 06:13 PM
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JDawg
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Niggah why yu actin hood,
haha yo rhymes ain’t good,
yu can’t rhyme n ya never could,
why yu talkin bout fuckin snoop dogg,
n walk out kwl like ya got a fuckin boob job,
now yu ain’t no pimp like him,
cuz yu can’t rap wen the lights get dim,
so quit the games and make a decision,
cuz I mean my rhymes have got perfect precision,
so stop fuckin wit me bulk ass niggah,
cuz I know yu got this shit off the television,
now yu probz think yu da best yu niggah,
but all that’s bullshit,
cuz yu just a white ass wigga..
So go home to mum,
before ya en up like cheddar bob,
n shoot yurself in the leg wit yur own gun,
don’t be worried cuz yu n ya gang just wussies,
we all know ya gang just a congregation of pussies,
now niggah I’m leavin yu,
just like the swine flu hitch yu,
yu fuckin sore an ache,
cuz yu r nothin on me,
niggah niggah don’t yu see,
yushuld have learnt ya lesson,
so don’t fuck wit me..

[Reply] #30,449
07-20-2010 09:53 PM
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*Places $20 on the table*
Fight! Fight! Fight!

[Reply] #30,450
07-20-2010 11:19 PM
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joker the clown
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i’m back,ohw and gro-p come on man don’t take it seriously,yes i admit I do rap some shit but thats cause its my style,i’m not like rappers who you know spit words to hurt someone,why’d ya think I put joker as a name,btw I only ''flowed'' in two of my raps and not all of them

so who wanna battle joker? Open invitation

[Reply] #30,451
07-20-2010 11:26 PM
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joker the clown
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scooby dooby doo
did a poo
and put it in his slipper
shaggy put it on
what a pong
it made him shake and
shiver.
scooby dooby doo
where are you
half way down the ladies
loo
flush the chain
fly away on a a chocolate
airoplane.
the adams family started
when uncle fiesta farted he
farted
he farted through the key
hole
and paralized the cat.
i beleive i’m a pie,
i believe i’m a veggie pie,
think about it every night
and day,
spread my pastry and fly
away!
I love po,
Po loves me,
Lets all gang up on dipsy,
with a great big bang and a
bullit through his head,
sorry la la dipsys dead.

[Reply] #30,452
07-21-2010 12:22 AM
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JDawg
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Joker596 wats wit that,
that shit to bad that’s called whack,
so get back,
before I click clack,
so stop wit the chit chat,
n talkin crap,
we know ya style is unknown,
but I agree wich ya cuz that shits homegrown,
so imma catch ya later cuz I gotta go,
see ya mum again n make her moan...
So imma accapella, n rocka fella,
like a blue car Audi, niggah I’m outtie!

[Reply] #30,453
07-21-2010 01:18 AM
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joker the clown
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yo jdawg listen

Keep act’n like you rep da
boogy down bronx...
I come frome the land of
the honky tonk...
So if ya cant walk dat walk
dont talk dat talk...
Keep talk’n dat shit and ill
split ya dome...
Smake ya ass up and send
ya home...
Ya come ta battle me ya
better where ya vest...
Cause ya cant free style wit
a slug in ya chest...
Dats what’ll happn' if i give
it my best...
I flow like a convoy, dis mic
is my toy
Scream it out loud and
proud bad ass joker boy...
yall scared ta see me on da
mic cause i might say
somthing ya might not like,
like i’m da great white...
Yo, if hind site’s 20/20 you
should have ya eyes riped
out
and glued to ya ass...
So you can look back in da
past & see how bad
i just spanked dat ass...
I ain’t try’n to win dis battle
i’m all ready da best...
So i’ma give you da mike
and let you finish da rest...

[Reply] #30,454
07-21-2010 01:36 AM
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123
lil mario thats what they call me
im the one and only
fuck JOKEing around
ill put Ja DAWG in the pound
no I CANT SEE YOU cuz ur a nobody
so check your STATUZ homie
ill take on any one
ill clown u just for fun
if you didnt get what i said
read this again
and pay close attention
im just doing a little flexin
and this aint shit of what you facin
for some names i metion

[Reply] #30,455
07-21-2010 01:54 AM
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JDawg
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To joker597 I know yu a wannabe,
where dat ya steal that shit off,
oh wait thts it, it was on page three,
now that shit was dismal,
here have a pencil,
go home write some shit,
n make it suspensful,
fuck it yu can even take the mic home wich yu..
Now quit trynna beat me up,
cuz I’ll fuck yu up like da red Tonka truck,
now go home n keep on tryin,
cuz all yo shit the people ain’t buyin..

Don’t copy shit ayy.. It’s called freestyle not freesteal... Fuckin idiot

Edited 07-21-2010 01:55 AM by JDawg
[Reply] #30,456
07-21-2010 02:09 AM
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but jdawg your stealing rhymes from eminem...so why don’t you try being original and face this battle like a man...my rhymes where a test...so I could check who really is the best...now I think we’re on the same page....you copying shit makes me sick,it just fuels up the rage...if you keep rapping like this you’ll put everyone to sleep...cause they already heard it,and it doesn’t hit that deep...but I respect what you do,cause your still a rookie...but watch out or you’ll turn into a croockie,and then grandma c an’t give you a kiss and a coockie...but lookie crookie,I got somthing on my hookie...ohw its your ticket out of here...now wipe your tears and keep living in fear...cause the begining of the end is here

why so serious? :-D - Home of All Freestyle Raps and Battles

Edited 07-21-2010 02:20 AM by joker the clown
[Reply] #30,457
07-21-2010 02:27 AM
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JDawg
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Aiight G, that’s good shit,
but yu shuld know not to battle me if ya ain’t wanna get hit,
yur shit was a test,
I mean I’m the best,
so quit ya game,
yu don’t know the price of fame,
yu would even get the prize,
if the shit was in front of ya eyes,
but thanks for the respect G,
cuz I agree wit ya shit,
it’s all about me!
But I wanna know what yu wear sayin bout scooby doo,
that shit is weak like a niggah fuck yu,
so quit wit the lil kid toons,
but I bust this battle like I bust baloons,
so I’m leavin by myself,
but cheers for the encouragement I don’t need yo help..

[Reply] #30,458
07-21-2010 02:37 AM
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YAH FIGHTIN LIKE TWO BITCHES jDAWG AND JOKER
TAKE THIS SHIT SOMEWHERE ELSE LIKE OPERA
CUZ BOTH OF YAH WACK
MATTER FACT
BOTH OF YAH SHOULD GET BITCH SLAPPED
TALKING ABOUT COOKIES
AND HONKY TONKYS
IN JAIL YOUR BUBBBA BITCH MIGHT AS WELL SCREAM FUCK ME!!
BOTH OF YAH FUCKIN KILL
TO BOREDOM THAT IS IVE HAD MORE THRILL
WATCHING OLD PEOPLE PLAY CHEST
YAH HUSH UP BEFORE YAH GET CHECKED
BETTER HOPE YOU WEARING THAT VEST
THIS POST IS THE REAL TEST
FUCK A PENCIAL I DONT ERASE
AND EDIT LIKE THE REST

[Reply] #30,459
07-21-2010 02:50 AM
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MAN IM CHILLIN
SITTIN BACK WAITIN
TILL THESE FAKE NIKKAS COME BACK AT ME
ATTACK ME WITH THESE LYRICAL FLOWS THEY SUPPOSABLY SPEAK
BUT THE TRUTH BOTH OF THEM FOOLS HELLA WEAK
HAVE EM STAIGHT ON RETREAT
BEFORE THE BATTLE EVEN START
I RELAXING WAITING FOR SOMETHING TO SPARK

[Reply] #30,460
07-21-2010 02:54 AM
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joker the clown
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yo lilmario why don’t you run home...and leave the big boys alone...and for jdawg what the hell was that...u said I can have the price but I don’t want your house key under the mat...word on the street is that you live in a dumpster...so shut up or I’ll turn you in a humpster...imma make you hump lilmario so he can get luigi pregnant...now i’m battling two suckas and i’m winning what else do you want...but jdawg I thought you where at home copying some rap...while lilmario was fiddling with your lil crap...man I never thought that mario was a perv...you guys look good together why not adopt some smurfs...now i’m ready to take my price...and like chickens ya’ll gonna bow before the king who’s about to rise

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