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haha ^ Ouch..

Nice.

thanks
nice 2 see respect

sometimes the tick of a time bomb’s a rhythm to rhyme on

can u tell me which lines u liked the best?

sometimes the tick of a time bomb’s a rhythm to rhyme on

“The line where you say he’s Trash but shouldn’t recycle him.. the line explaining him being Schooled” haha those two lines and more.

how can he believe?/he think hes gonna get a win//
thats like swimmin wit a shark n tryna only catch a fin

u sayin u weird/so u outta be strange//
but u wacker than anything so i think ur name should be changed/

loved those to vses

Vintage veteran, but I know some people you’re lesser than/
I got a whole list of people that you ain’t better than/
Do you have the whole hood on your back?/
Did you give the East Coast some reputation when it was falling back?/
Representing for my old town, kick motherfuckers' souls down/
Bitches tryina play me, well what goes around comes around/
Ha, I ghostwrite for half the rappers in the school/
Perform on this shit, and now I got my own crew/
So you see that I’m generous, I’ll share my wealth/
But run up against me and I turn venomous, impede your health/
Don’t bet against me, you can’t match the cards I’ve been dealt/
Walkin around like I run this shit, with 3/3 wins under my belt/
I make it look easy, how to play this game/
But a motherfucker I ghostwrote for tried to play me, I’ll fucking murder that lame/
And once he uses my lyrics and gets fame, I’ll challenge him to a REAL freestyle and these kids will see him get slain/
Then everybody know my name, the record label I own will all refer to one and the same/

Oh and here’s the freestyle I wrote for him..

Yo I go by the name of Affan, A-F-F-A-N/
I murder you in a freestyle like I was the chosen one/
You try to run up and hit me with a broken gun/
Next thing you know, you’re lying dead in a back alley, in my hand is the smoking gun/
For you, this battle is a choke-and-run/
For me, it’s a hole in one/
For the first 20 seconds, you just sit there and think/
Then for the last 10, you spit some pre-written rhymes you spun/
Forget it, I ain’t wasting my time to counter your weak lines/
I’m out of here, man this battle is DONE./

cool
i don rap at school or anything
i jus do it sumtimes on here wen im bored n i like 2 write a song occasionally

sometimes the tick of a time bomb’s a rhythm to rhyme on

yeah i dont rap much jsut saw this forum and thought it would be fun

listen rogue,i dont hav beef w/ u
i never did
i wuz bored and randomly dissed u 2 stir sum action in a dead topic
keep doin u-if u want a battle,then challenge me but im done w/ random disses 4 a while (til sum1 pisses me off)

sometimes the tick of a time bomb’s a rhythm to rhyme on

Hmm wonder where that kid Laface is.. he sayin he’s better than me ha I’m not holding back when I battle him.

4 am u pretty good but im gonna spit harder this time

4am ya depressed with ya name cuz i was fuckin ya girl at 4AM busting them guts in her frame!/ and i talkin bout shooting, but when i nut ima shoot right in/ now she saying 4am come play with ya son Adrean/hah/ im crazy man/ my gun connect is arabain, so u know i be bringing them k’s in, as a matter of fact right now im PAGING HIM!

I’ve been creepin up and down these streets
Lettin some smoke flow with the sound of these beats
Ppl hatin on me for slangin these trees
But me without weed is like a bee without honey
Quit my job,so now this is how I make money
It may seem odd to you, but this shit ain’t funny
Dead broke a couple bucks, But the Gov. they dont give a fuck
They pushin there luck, cuz one day Im not gunna be so nice
Im gunna start riots, Like I’m with drawl from ice
Its like my main part of my brain has popped a vein
Cuz all its wired to do is smoke this fire
Drink this brew
Screw that chick and wake up like “what we do?"



Cant really think of anything else after that :/

whoo you new to rapping too?

Whooo im never depressed/ the other night ur mum i undressed/ “wooohooo” she was saying/ im guessing thats where u got ur name/ bringing the beef thats pretty cool, but picturing ur mum naked does make me drool/

AznSkillz wrote: whoo you new to rapping too?

Ya, kinda, was it alright?

anti-moviecodec. wrote:

AznSkillz wrote: whoo you new to rapping too?

Ya, kinda, was it alright?

lol I was talkin to the Guest named “Whoo” but yeah your verse was alright man.. not bad for beggining.

sry, I had to go. Now I can finally start writing it. I’ll take about 30 minutes...

30 minutes make it good man.