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#1
01-07-2006 10:10 PM
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your rhymes are crap, you cant even keep a beat,
c-unit is in the house so take a seat.
I float like gravity
never had a cavity
got more rhymes than the winans got family
no need ot go on big brother to gain some sort of fame,
no shame in my game cos ill always be the same.
your time is up, my time is now
respect the master get down and bow.
writing rhymes is all that i do,
if u feel me then im writing for u.
peas, broccoli and beans,
its wat makes u strong, so eat ur greens.
its wat ur mama always said,
so liten gud and hard and u will be in gud stead
the rims on my navigator
ride the kerb like a street skater.
im white W-H-I-T-E,
im the guy than even at midnight u can see
never grew up in a hardass hood,
not saying that every rapper has to, or should.
so next time u sit down a try to write,
think of me, c-unit the white!

#2
01-09-2006 04:04 PM
mr.jump off stuff
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HELLO y0 i guess its time to go now sit back and
watch the show as i beat you to death with words
and you crying from below your steppin in a vortex
of qiuck sand do you even know no i guess you dont
and if you ever step up ima break you fucken back back y0 and now i guess you know that you in the wrong show you cant step to this flow s0 go home
man you are just to slow.............and i ant even
tryen yet you dont believe me wanna bet as u standen
there all swetty and wet this is somthen you will regret you fucken made me upset strangle you with a net and watch and enjoy my ciggarette.......... bitch i ant done yet you wanna see red words floaten straight out the center of my mouth come up here and will have our selfs a bout so shut your fucken mouth





oh and um im white to


and if i can remember that ryme i just wrote sucked to me i didnt like it blaaaaaaaaa whatever

i ant done never never

#3
01-09-2006 05:56 PM
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edit


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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

Edited 05-20-2007 09:15 PM by Red Spartan 226
#4
01-10-2006 01:49 PM
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Flamingo
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Fuck this, bitch,
I’ll rip your dick off and spit off,
Rap and shit and get yo' bitch off my lap with bitch,
And laugh when you get pissed off for that and this,
Is just smack you twit, now get off my dick

A start...

#5
01-10-2006 07:35 PM
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look at u man u cant rap
so go home take a shit and think of some crap


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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

#6
01-10-2006 09:29 PM
mr.jump off stuff
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Red Spartan 226.......that ryme was funny and all but you could of siad somthen like this........

look at you fag you cant rap so go home take a
shit in your hand and chow down on your crap and
as you eat do a little clap and i ant gana give you
a smack uve done that yourselve "smack" look through
your eyes as a lip this gap i would out flow you
taken a nap and so its done homie you have just been zaped........im bored now shit im done with this rap

#7
01-19-2006 09:18 PM
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couldn’t rap that good


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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

Edited 05-20-2007 09:16 PM by Red Spartan 226
#8
01-24-2006 08:42 PM
Player H
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hey dog is the H to the a to da double R y
aint got no options but to do or die
yall niggas aint got nuthing on me
cant you see
i make yo ass buzz like fucking bee
cuz thats how i be
i see yo ass in da hood hanging out wit all them bitches
come back again and i fill you up wit stiches
yeah u look like a motherfucker
thats why u scared
cuz im known as the original bonecrusher
i cut yo ass like a bitch ass butcher
ask all my niggas they know who i be
cuz im tired of srpaying yo mamas crib
and let yo ass look for me
ight ima let u go now
see u again
and ima spray yo ass down
Bitch HaHaha!

#9
01-25-2006 05:32 PM
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...


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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

Edited 05-20-2007 09:16 PM by Red Spartan 226
#10
02-07-2006 08:31 PM
IM THE BLACK GUY FROM KENT
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MAAAN im through wit dat yo rhymes lame yall is havin nuttin but a preschool game im ready to extuingish yo so called hot fires i think that yall is lyers so go back home cuz im enclosin into yo zone 5,4,3,2,1 it aint over i just begun take a sit cus i over control you now yall aint got no rhymes thatll shut me down you bitches aint nuttin but sum rich mufuckers drinkin tea since i control you i say yall should squat when you pee dont you see im better than all yall so i be ready for round 2 whenever and it aint goin to be as weak as this one this was nuttin but a practice run

#11
02-07-2006 09:41 PM
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HE want me shut him down
I won’t do that I’ll slap him down
Beat him, kick him, throw in down
Into the ground
He says he’s a king
he probably couldn’t lead a string
much less a note
Here’s you defeat
Up out my throat
ANd down you go
Down goes the so called master
After listen to a rap I say he’s a disaster
All the cusse words
It makes him nothin but a turd
I mean he says we’re rich,
That ain’t our fault
It ain’t our problem yu live in a ditch
SO don’t be comin up here and callen me a ----- (I don’t curse)


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#12
02-09-2006 08:39 AM
Asif.. Black Jesus mm
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Another part of me lost
in my life, the guide

I took the wrong path
so i try to swtich my side

I slip n slide
falling deeper to my grave

The only friend i had
left me hoping for better dayz

Thinking positive
yet no cheques deposited

I gambled my soul
and unscrabbled the scroll

I read the subscript
but by now they’ve dubbed it

If you were there
you would of loved it

My flow is cheap
so i must blow this technique

All these half as rappers
be trying to test me

So i sit back, relax
kick back to these tracks

I can’t believe these peeps
tryna decieve

So called rappers
My lyrics aint thieved

I just jotted these down
and typed them up

Altered the sound
i’m hyped to fuck

So bring the beef
and i’ll break your teeth

I’ll do one for free

YOU AINT NOTHING LIKE ME

Copyright(c)MexMan Corp.

#13
02-09-2006 10:06 PM
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bonjour
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YOu gotta tough life,
A rough life,
got no luck,
not gonna live Life

You ain’t got love
No buds
Just mope around
Man you a scrub

Wait’n on a check
liven life a wreck
you be falin to the deck
Just because you ain’t got a check

man get up!
Shut up
stop complain’n
And stop explain’n
How ya only boy left you
How everyone disrespect’n you
How you ain’t got no boo
It’s just you you you!!!

man you lost in your mind
you need help to find
the man inside of you
Thats what this rhym’ll do

I’m not trying to look down on you
I because your sloppy
I ain’t gonna carry you
I ain’t you mommy

I’m that guide
That hand
Just look inside
the man

you thought you lost is there
Get up out that chair

I mean just because you from the streets don’t mean you can insult me,
Just because you got that little Copyright don’t me that you can smack me

You’ve only just entered the game
I mean we are one and the same
Liven each day
now as my equal you’ll stay!

...I don’t think I meant a single word I just put down


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#14
02-09-2006 10:59 PM
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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

Edited 10-29-2008 09:30 PM by Red Spartan 226
#15
02-10-2006 09:24 AM
Asif.. Black Jesus mm
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You ever heard of po nigga blues!?
well thats whats happening to you

Mistreated, abused,
you rhymes are misused

Don’t direct them at me
your bound to lose

I’m not into the beef
But you can’t fill these shoes

I rep my block
Kingsway is my kurb

My rhymes are sick
yours are left unheard

My plan was to show
you bitches my flow

I said it one time
this is the second

I place my mind
on these half ass records

Your doing your best
but i guess its too little

I’m tired from these tests
so my breaths like a riddle

I seen your ass
when you came out your crib

The week before last
wearing a diper and bib

You want a signing
get back in line

My rhymes split timing
my bars are fine

You need a clean
no, not no spit shine

Your past being dusty
aint that a sign

Leave me be
I aint got the need

This is long for me
unless you don’t believe..

Copyright(c)MexMan Corp.

#16
02-10-2006 09:47 AM
Asif.. Black Jesus mm
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Itís like cold fusion, when I spit bars
Always picking and choosing, always moving to yards

There ainít no confusion, will I make it to the top
All this accusing, of reppin the same block

I donít participate in beef, I concentrate on the beats
But if you want some of me,

Iíll contemplate, to take, this shit to the streets

You swagger jackers is waiting, for some hardcore lyrics,
After all this debating, I can see yíall ainít with it,

Let me introduce myself, as I am right now,
Mex Man in stealth, so get up and bow,

You want some respect, bring yourself to your words
Donít just twist my lyrics, that shit be absurd.

Copyright(c)MexMan Corp.

#17
02-10-2006 03:34 PM
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DestinyGuy678
bonjour
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Your really good, it’s really cool!


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#18
02-10-2006 06:57 PM
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kev360 wrote:

98supra wrote: Kev, Why do u want me 2 be gay?

because i want to bend you over and shoot chocolate gew in your asshole.

Edited 10-29-2008 09:31 PM by Red Spartan 226
#19
02-10-2006 08:38 PM
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DestinyGuy678
bonjour
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lol I love that show


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#20
02-11-2006 07:49 PM
BIG RED
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yo i spit my flow,
incase yall dont know,
i started this shit,
everytime i rhyme is a fuckin hit,
i came up in the game,
and i stay the same,
i knew i was the shit from the start,
and all my rymes come stright from the hart,
motha fucka ill chew you up and spit you out,
imma still be here after you fade out,
im the sickest motha fucka in this rap game,
after im finished youll be livin in shame,
yall fools aint got nothin on this,
and that aint even a fuckin diss,
i speak nothing but the truth,
all my flows are home runs im something like babe ruth,
id keep rappin this shit but there aint no need to,
as a matter of fact its your ture cause im fucking through!

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