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Lonely on the 14th ---Vintage...poem/rap

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12 Feb 2009 04:23 pm
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Start at :23

walkin thru the halls,shit’s light till its overhaul//
i dont fit right..overalls in the Oval Off-//
-ice where decisions made,in my brain,dictate,//
the tempo like an instrumental,food and clothes essential//
and I got it all fixed on the template, checkmate//
never done eatin but just pass me the check,mate//
never son speakin, just write it on the canvas//
wavin to my fans like waves upon the sand//
wash the words away,nothings forever,bury your treasures//
in my case,I guess it means that we’ll be buried together//
this is deep, hope my speech convinces not to succumb//
and finds you in a similar place to where im rhymin from//
instead of tryna find your gun,go find your heart//
cuz no lie,its a gold mine that may seem dark//
search thru it,light it up,cuz soon you might be outta time//
Dear secret Valentine, you know I got you in my mind...//


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12 Feb 2009 09:29 pm
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Feedback anyone??? damm


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12 Feb 2009 09:33 pm
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lol, its a sensitive poem.

never thought I would hee one from you.

But I guess if I was a female I would love it.


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12 Feb 2009 09:49 pm
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Supra wrote: lol, its a sensitive poem.

never thought I would hee one from you.

But I guess if I was a female I would love it.



Really??...I’ve written tons of verses like this..


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