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dear lord can you listen
iam sittin reminicing on my past sins
its been a while since we spoke god how you been?
iam sitting down thinking back to the harder days
dear lord can you show me a better way
i swear i feel like my enemies are calling me please god iam begging you to talk to me
will i cry hell nah nigger stand tall
got my back against the wall
with my semi automatic screaming fuck em all
see this shit wont stop till i see em drop
i love the sound opf my motherfucking gun shot
my lyrics running all you cowards out of hip hop
talk shit young sucker i squeeze lead
rest in peace motherfucker and now your dead
i love to see my enemies flee when i drive by
spreading hate and misery better duck and hide
too late mother fucker its time to die
i make sure you feel pain till your final breath
ill have you on your knees begging me to give you death
see my glocks still hot and its pointed at your cranium
i got six shots left and im aiming em
now here you gotta choice i can shhot you or knife you
i gotta switch blade and a fully loaded rifle
you know i dont give a fuck what it says in the bible
you cant tempt me with riches or bitches
fuck you iam exterminating all you snitches
activate my hate now watch it unfurl
fuck law enforcement iam taking this world
i bet you couldent picture me as a motherfucking revolutionary
but through trial and tribulation hate and discrimination
i rose up from the slums bought my first gun
a colt 45 gonna kick it into overdrive
iam taking over this dictatorship
i reply with fire when my enemies trip
i dnt give a shit ill empty out this entire motherfucking clip
all you bitch made niggaz can suck my dick
point my gun out the window better duck quick
cant escape the pain and agony
the penitentiary wasent meant for me
id rather die before they capture me, watch me flee
i can’t beat em but i wont join em
when you wake i wont be there in the morning
ive made up my mind and iam already packed
iam leaving now and i aint ever comming back the stress is building, getting major
lord be my saviour
mama raised a hell razor
i can feel him in my mind its some scary shit
your about to flat line iam the devils advocate

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