yo battle me please ima get things started

hey do me a favour. instead of you new guys bustin in here and callin everyone “fake” rappers and actin like they the shit just cos they blck, how about you make sure you can actually rap b4 u challenge me. check this shit out, this is how real rappers sound:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5OmyXqSGXpo

niguh u wack im sick of seein all these fake boys that claim they kno how to rap . how do the fake boyz kno how to ryme they wastin there time. u fakes betta chill befo the blood spill cuz when the guns pop u bitchez drop. born an raised in the 801 we be caryin gun cuz when we see dem cops we dont run .ICEMAGIC u bringin a knife to a gun fight now imma pop led in yo head and tell me if it feels right son this is thefast and furious ill fuk u up so bad your head will be delirous u claim to be the thug but youve never seen blood cuz with the cholos on the block this shit will never stop and with crips down the street will never restin peace you say u got flo but yo my hoes got mo flo than yo wack ass shit Ice magic says hes got game yo i make it rain so tell me what happens when yo ice meets my flame. you said you went hard but i kno some kids that betta than u and they retards man u weak your about to be deceace cuz i murderd u on this battle so rest in peace!

i never claimed to be good at rap. this is my first try really at it. I was just seeing how to do it. I did it wrong but what the fuck just starting. lil detox that was pretty good. i like the line “Ice magic says hes got game yo i make it rain so tell me what happens when yo ice meets my flame."