Battle me with your pathetic rhymes!

that was a good one

No shit that IS a good one.
I am the best at shit tricks.
Shit tricks is where, I stick this disturbed say
wordplay down your gullet. So blow it, swallow it.
This shallow shit, you phallic dick pussies push me to this, just to piss you off. Here;s a tissue to wipe your tears off. Sorry I tare off more
complex mean shit, some baleamic stomach flex, what he gonna say next shit. Hey, you my homey?
No! you don’t know me. so your merrige I’m gonna
wreck and your face deck it. Where’s my marijuana at? go fetch it, you’re my bitch, hold on to my pocket! Which is another metaphor, what you yet another whore! Fuck with my lyrics, I can’t wait to hear it, my word swarm in this poetic form.
Hold’n my own on the habit form’n microphne.
Tight flows shown by some crazy coke blown, broke grown individual. Maybe indivisible, probably invisible, indisiguishable no body. whin is this thing, which is drabble to me; my raps pull me, but I feel I won’t make it. I souly real and spit poetic ryhmes that cake it. This cat won’t take shit. So if you do it. I’ll clock it back and shoot it. Lucid with my every approach, DO NOT BE SUPID!

This is really stupid
This is what I have to say,
that this contest is really gay
noone can beat me cos I’m the best
I am better than all the rest
you guys suck, and i am awesome
I can think of a rhyme with awesome
at least none I want to say
but this contest is stupid, so...hey
everyone is in awe of my skills
so just go off and pop some more pills
cos noone can beat me
noone can defeat me
cos I am better than all of you
and peace!

Alright, If your even going to pretend you can ryhme then please, at least give syllable placements and compound sounds in you lyrics.
Otherwise you just plain out suck and furthermore you’re wasting my time!

im just rhyming im not rapping or doing poetry, rhyming doesn’t have to foolw any sort of a beat, I was just jokin anyway, I can’t rap, im not to bad at poetry though...

i flow with immaculate placement
leavin you shackled in the basement
maybe you should taste it
tell me what you think
strung up, on a chain link
clothes and skin stained pink
could be red
but thats not what i said
found down there malnourished, underfed
usin concrete for a bed
all this cuz u were misled
made to believe
there was nothing up his sleeve
didn’t want you to leave
the reason im doin this
is cuz ima full fledged masochist

...just to let you know i write my own shit, i dont freestyle all to often and im not to good at it but i had to and i know its inly a 16 bar, i couldve done more i didnt feel like it and i know theres no rhyme scheme i dont really care

its not a battle verse either and i could care less about that i just had to spit something i couldnt let the opportunity pass

that is AWESOME

you talkin 2 me if you are really

cool!!!

man im adjitated these average rappers have made it
you have it made u made up my mind ur rhymes are fabricated
im sad to say it
infatuated with time go spend yo whole checks on rolex i pay em' no mind
its indicated that i infiltrated your mind
get situated u hated implicated the crime
why u snitchin hata
u cant even say that u rhyme
aint easy doin the time
to creep up from behind
arm yo self with a nine
shot my shots slidin through the roses
my sleavs red so believe that your throat is
i need sess i repeat diagnosis
now watch the pengilum i’ll be proceeding my hypnosis

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didn’t know samus fanboy could rhyme

that shit is ill your pro u betta not b talkin bout me tho (that rhymes totally not intentional) i just write and occasionally spit somthin o ive only been doin it for about 6 months too ive already got almost 2 5 subject notebooks filled and thats not alot of time and my style has changed quite a bit believe me ... what can i say ive got a lot of inspiration

its not directed to u...its a piece from my new album which isnt finished yet...iv written at least 200 verses but i just thought that one looked best on paper/read

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its real good man tell me when u finis that album the 1st was great im lookin forward for more and i was kiddin even if it was directed at me i wouldnt mind really negative crticism doesnt bother me much

my friend sold rollemswol.com so ill post what the new site will be eventually

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this thread is pimp!

I’ll bash you all
hit you like a white squall
you crash to the ground
they start the next round
I ain’t spent my last round
still got a bullet for ya
my rhymes keep you spinnin round
just couldn’t keep up now could ya
I may be a noob at this
but my rhymes will lead to bliss
you missed
you shot your last round
your out of ammo
I flash past you like I’m usin active camo
you don’t compare to me
your nowhere near me
I look down and see the ground above you
your probbly lookin hopin someone will love you
but your wrong
we all hate you
everyone overrates you
but me I’m hard core
this is my first roar
peace out
spartans don’t die they just go to hell to regroup

mine is awesome

haha

your out of ammo
I flash past you like I’m usin active camo

funny

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