My book

i know this is a bit weird, but i started writting this book, and i thought i would see if u liked the first paragragh

This Morning,when i opened my eyes and saw the spring sky above me as i lay in the shallow boat, i realised that my long journey from the heart of the forest was over, and that i had come home again.
Oak lodge was there, across the meadow, empty and silent.And yet i could not step throught the trees nd go to the houseas if the wood, so difficult to enter from the out side eccept alonge the brook, was now reluctant to let me go..............blah blah blah

please

well.....?

actually,it is probably better than I could do!

u like the start? i think im gonna write wen im a bit older, its fun. (geeky loren regrets saying that)

i love to write.i think it helps your soul and your spirit.

i love to write songs too, its anti-stressful,lol

I like the blah blah blah part better

Why is everyone (some) being rude to me?lol I never said I was a film maker,I am interested in making a film.I may end up leaving this site I dont need anymore drama in my life I come on here to talk and maybe get a good laugh.I dont come on here to be insulted or ridiculed

i come on here for a good laugh too, too bad the jokes on you lard ass

I like being called lard ass it kinda turns me on.I have never been called that before,actually I finally have a butt now did not have one for a while well........since I AM SO FAT lol

i like the story. And, i like writing as well. Mostly drama & romance. THat probably sounds rather stupid, but i like it a lot

for sum reason i like war books. i find them real cool, i sound like one of those little geeky boys that sit in the corner and read, but i cant help it. I like “Tommorrow, when the war ended” its good. but u prob dont care so um yeh