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its not even on paper yet but i thought i would give yo guys a sneak peek. the year is 1542 after Henrey VIII had broke from the Roman Chatholic church, a girl was born justoutside of the Kings gardens. Her mother [a cuban] was running from the some bobbies but came across a dark stranger who never showed his face. He hideher in his carriage and drove her just behind the castle walls. Once Luna [the main character] was born the guy raped and killed her mother, and threw luna into the river [not with the same intentions as moses’s mother and he waited after Luna was born before rapping her mom because the mom was givig birth.. itll be explained better once i get the story started] Luna was found by some thiefs and was then on raised to steal to live. its all ive thought besides some random scenes that heep replayin in my head...... so yea give some times and ill post the prologue ;p
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linegraph wrote:
its not even on paper yet but i thought i would give yo guys a sneak peek. the year is 1542 after Henrey VIII had broke from the Roman Chatholic church, a girl was born justoutside of the Kings gardens. Her mother [a cuban] was running from the some bobbies but came across a dark stranger who never showed his face. He hideher in his carriage and drove her just behind the castle walls. Once Luna [the main character] was born the guy raped and killed her mother, and threw luna into the river [not with the same intentions as moses’s mother and he waited after Luna was born before rapping her mom because the mom was givig birth.. itll be explained better once i get the story started] Luna was found by some thiefs and was then on raised to steal to live. its all ive thought besides some random scenes that heep replayin in my head...... so yea give some times and ill post the prologue ;p
Your avatar looks like a Boo, awsome.
linegraph wrote:
its not even on paper yet but i thought i would give yo guys a sneak peek. the year is 1542 after Henrey VIII had broke from the Roman Chatholic church, a girl was born justoutside of the Kings gardens. Her mother [a cuban] was running from the some bobbies but came across a dark stranger who never showed his face. He hideher in his carriage and drove her just behind the castle walls. Once Luna [the main character] was born the guy raped and killed her mother, and threw luna into the river [not with the same intentions as moses’s mother and he waited after Luna was born before rapping her mom because the mom was givig birth.. itll be explained better once i get the story started] Luna was found by some thiefs and was then on raised to steal to live. its all ive thought besides some random scenes that heep replayin in my head...... so yea give some times and ill post the prologue ;p
good job write more then post it
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