im doing a commentary for english comp classand, maybe you guys can share some thoughts
consider this a debate if you want ,about youth and love today...but #1 goal=help tippy out.
in the end, it’ll be 1200 words plus, tho 1000 is acceptable..
my subject?
well, topci name is
where’s the love drama
what my general ideas for it to address are
. Drama affecting love- say, one person likes another, but someone else snoops, finds out, then blabs it, or texts it to the person, or their buddies, or otherwise purposely messes the possible relationship up-due to media influence
technology’s effect on love, and the process of finding love- from the fact tht so many people today prefer to talk with their crush, etc, on facbook, over going out to take a walk in the park .....having a face-to-face talk...
secondarily....online dating, as opposed to doing it the original way, meeting in places like parks, recreational events, etc...
i guess, highlights are
drama
the media’s influence
how finding love has changed
people who think they HAVe to mess up others....
In the modern world, the goal and aspiration of many young adults is to find that significant other that completes them and makes them whole. Ah yes, the concept of love. It’s a common part of life, and is common, existing from late elementary school, and middle school, up throughout the rest of one’s school career, and even sometimes beyond that. But, is there any love to be had in the process of finding love? Or has the real genuine process made the endangered list, with technology, drama, media, and gossip tainting it with lies of how it should be?
Back when my parents started looking at each other in a diff light, the story that took place seems like its common, even today. Hah, what a joke, for nothing could be farther from the truth. They spotted each other, spent time with each other, and eventually got together. Yep, pretty much that straightforward. I doubt you’ll have it that easy, depending on which you are; because it’s not that simple anymore. Whenever I walked in the halls of my middle school, all I would hear is”Did you hear so-so likes so-so? I’m going to tell them and spoil it, don’t miss it”. I would continue on my way, appalled that anyone would meddle with someone else’s feelings. I saw scenarios like this daily, throughout middle school, both high schools I went to, and even echoes of it here at -college name-. One of my best friends,
i’m doing a commentary on how ...young adult relationships have changed today, from th past, due to tehnology and how drama runs the show now so much...and what causes it
i’m doing a commentary on how ...young adult relationships have changed today, from th past, due to tehnology and how drama runs the show now so much...and what causes it
its caused by breathing and releasing carbon-dioxide, in other words, theres no stopping it
i’m doing a commentary on how ...young adult relationships have changed today, from th past, due to tehnology and how drama runs the show now so much...and what causes it
its caused by breathing and releasing carbon-dioxide, in other words, theres no stopping it
i’m doing a commentary on how ...young adult relationships have changed today, from th past, due to tehnology and how drama runs the show now so much...and what causes it
its caused by breathing and releasing carbon-dioxide, in other words, theres no stopping it
lol, if only i could turn that into 1000 words
oh, well, im useless when it comes to having a certain amount of words and stuff
You know, guys;
This IS the school/homework section, you’re supposed to be on topic and help the guy.
@ Tippership: I’ll read it in a bit and see if I can add anything.
It’s your stuff though so I doubt I’ll be very, well, open to add anything. (I hate changing other people’s work)
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Last edited 22 Feb 2009 09:11 pm by Tyreaus Dreacon
Simple thing people love dram brings out
affection and makes you feel good but it
also hurts people I like this tips < — - btw thats
your new nick name.
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