I needed to write something for school regarding a book called “separate piece” and relate it to the real world or another book. Did i go to far with this in stupidity means?
Connection
This book relates to tragic accidents caused by trees.
This book had a tragic accident because of a tree and someone shaking it. If the tree was never there, someone would still have a life as it is the same in a lot of real world situations. Many kids have fallen out of trees, got stuck, stepped on the wrong branch, or tried to jump out but failed. Many little kids are murdered by trees.
Um first off I think you meant a “tragic accident happened in the book” rather than “this book had a tragic accident”. Unless of course you’re referring to a tree being cut down to make the book, or you spilled something all over it .
Second, the accident has nothing to do with the existence or non-existence of a tree. It has to do with the friendship and then animosity between 2 of the characters. This would be a better subject to write on.
Also, how long is the assignment supposed to be? And I’m not trying to be mean or anything, I know you were trying to be funny, but I could see the teacher assuming you didn’t read the book.