steppin up to me is like walkin into a whore house ya gonna get fucked gimme 45 seconds b4 i self destruct and this is J-A-K-E i be the best mc to eva be on ya fm feed i aint got no beat but this is buissnes im ill with the flo like im dyin of sickness i spit wit my peeps its a family buiseness so ya betta roll deep if you aint standin with us brap brap brap
IIGHT YALL NIGGAS SUCC FOREAL CHECC THIS THIS A FREE STYLE TOP OF MY HEAD
I B DA CHRONIC KING FROM THE WEST
GOT THEM HOLLOW TIP THAT GO THROUGH YO VEST
FUCC THE REST
IM E-TOWNS BEST
MY POWER DO NOT TEST
DIDN YOU KNOW WELL YOU SHOULD HAVE GUESSED
I STRTED RAPPIN WHEN I WAS 14 IM 15 NOW SOON TO B 16
THIS IS ONE OF MY PARTS IN MINE ND MA BROTHAS TRACCS
C-MONEY AND SMOKE GONA KILL EM ON THIS ONE
YEAH IM MOVIN TO ARIZONA IT AINT TO FAR FROM NOW
I GOTTA GET THROUGH THIS SHIT ND I DON’T KNOW HOW
I DON’T WANA MOVE ND HAVE TO LEAVE THE CREW BEHIND
THERE SHIT I GOTA THINK BOUT THT HASNT EVEN HIT MA MIND
CANT MAKE A DECISSION IM GOIN NO MATTER WHAT
SO IMA TELL MY MOMZ TO SUCC MY LEFT NUT
IM COMIN BACC WHEN I TURN 18 ND MY MOM MY DAD AINT NO1 STOPPIN ME
THEY CAN BEG AND PLEAD AND GET DOWN ON ONE KNEE
BUT WHEN IT COME DOWN TO IT IMA SAY FUCC YOU AND PEACE
IMA B LIKE A LOCCED UP DOG WATIN FOR RELEASE
IMA DRIVE MY ASS BACC ND VISIT MA CREW
ND SEE HOW BIG BBP DONE GREW
AFTER THAT GO AND FIND ME A BOO
AINT MANY I WANT WHICH MEANS THERES FEW
ILL LIVE A GOOD LIFE IN THE ORIGIAL SPOT
SAME O’ SHIT SEE A SLOB HE GET SHOT
BUT GET LOC^KED UP I THINK ID RATHER NOT
ND THAT MEANS THAT ILL NEVA GET CAUGHT
NOW IM GONA PASS IT TO MY NIGGA SMOKE
HE GOT A NASTY FLOW IT AINT NO JOKE
my name is brandon i love to rap i can throw up freestyles and thats a fact walkin around this town knowin im black sag my pants and stragin up my act all my words ryme someone out there say its not then they sure blind if u wit me say it lound im brandon and im rapin now 15 yrs old high skool is the way to go rapin to kids rapin to mizz rapin to my parents who think im the liz
You know what. Rap is basically poetry about killing bitches, selling drugs and having sex with drunk girls. Oh, or three minute long advertisments on fucking apple bottom jeans and fucking boots with fur.
And don’t use the excuse of “Well not ALL rap is like that." Almost 99% of popular rap is, and the 1% does not redeem it.
Pick up a fucking guitar, or rap about something important (or at the very least something that isn’t killing, selling drugs, having sex with drunk girls or three minute advertisments). One or the other.
Thou shalt not make generic repetitive music.
and try to stop using Nigg every other word.
Have some respect for your fucking self.
Being like “My word my word no one else (That isn’t black) can uuuuuuuuuuse it or im gonna get soooo angry"
askin me to teach u to rap will end up with ur face gettin slapped, maybe ur neck getting snapped, who knows who cares, i’ll blow u away with jabbawockee flares, u will shit urself so grab a few pairs of new underwears!!!
u dont have to be black to rap im white and iv only been writin my own bars 4 like 2 moths and i can rinse just got to belive in ur self and ur doin ittrust
hey its easy, but first before hittin the basics u need to be confident, create your own worlg wher u tha king
here are the basics, u gots to be comparative, like u can say u are somethin like or somethin better than something well known
then, be creative abit off the box, like link ur skills or anything u got and link it with somethin so not real or very supernatural, like say “am dangerous n its really not funny, am posted out your like its the return ov e munny”
finally just luk for words or twist the pronouncation of the last words in lines to make them RHYME
heres sumthin for you guys cuz ur down in rank.. u look like a clown and ur ryhmes stank!(not really just ryhming)you try and try to catch up with me .. but you suck at lyrcis.. and you only got 3!