learn to rap

elderado red stackin bread

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Well first I need to produce it and make the rymes.
like I said before I only started writing and acually trying a few nights ago. but i own the ps2 game get on the mis and can make on easily. Me and a buudy are going to make one together. that first rap was the first one i ever wrote and the second was free style.naw I aint dissin nobody here but I am willing to battle any one.as long as it is truly there rhymes.

elderado red stackin bread

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We should do some topic rapping ill start who ever can


THE FIRST TOPIC IS........PEOPLE BEING CHEAP.


TYPE OUT SOME RHYMES AND SEE WHO’S ARE THE BEST

elderado red stackin bread

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HEY YO
HEY YO

WHY WOULD I IGNOLEDGE YOUR RHYMES
WHEN THEY SO CHEAP I WOULDNT INVOVE IN MINE
I JUST SPIT MY OWN SHIT THAT I THOUGHT UP IN MY MIND
JUST TAKE A SECOUND AND MEMORIZE THIS LINE
SO THAT YOU WILL CATCH A FINE
WHEN YOU CLAIM “HEY MAN THERE MINE”

YOUR MIND IS NOT EVOLVED ENOUGH TO COMPETE WITH MY WORDS
AND AS IM SIFTING THOUGHT AND WHAT I HEARD
I FIGURE YOUR RHYMES CAME FROM A LITTLE BOY SCURD

CUASE YOU KNOW DEM CHEAP BOYS BE USIN MY NAME
TO GET A RECORD DEAL
SNITCH I AINT PLAYIN

THIS AINT EVEN MY NAME
I GUESS THATS WHAT I BE TRYIN TO SAY
ITS SPH
STEVN P. HAMMELL, BOY YOU BETTER BE PRAYIN
CAUSE WE’LL BE RUNNING ON YOU WHILE YOU BE SLANGIN
AND BOY I STILL AINT BE PLAYIN
JUST BANGIN

UNTIL THE DAYS OUT
MY RECORD WILL BE PLAYED NO DOUBT
ILL ROLL OUT


TIME TO BLAZE THIS BOWL
ROLL A BLUNT
BC WEED IS THE BEST
SO BOY DONT FRONT

elderado red stackin bread

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THAT LAST ONE WAS TO A BEAT TOO.

TIGHT
TIGHT

I GUESS I AM GOING TO MAKE THAT SONG AND I WILL USE SOME OF THESE LYRICS JUST TO PROVE TO SOME WATCHFUL HATERS THAT I AINT PLAYIN

swerk

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u all never had pride,
to u met ur death row suisied
two rong wires blow the fews
wish you had something to choose
youve got nothin to looze
your your own soldier
dont listen to who ever told ya
wat ever you can be,
what ever you can see,
like me thinkin shit out for free
swerk.

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see its the south side,
wishen i lied-thinkn this shits a ride
pullin a gun to some1s head
trigger my 9mil lead

mother fucker im hangin out with the wrong crowd,
makin us feel so proud,
smokin weed, drinkin
hangin for a feed,
takin the lead,
for people who need speed
standin in front of the judge
it was a two sent nudge
swerk.

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standin on stage,
in a rattle of a monkeys cage
in the doll house fillin out a page
go to school- get a job,
get a better wage
mess with your career
sit down shred a tear
face the life even fear

see im king kong with the crown
dont make a sound
you look like the ground,
dirty and brown
it was the section of the lost and found
swerk.

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HOPE YOU LIKE MY RYMES IVE ONLY JUST STARTED RYMING

Last edited 15 Nov 2006 01:35 am by swerk

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this aint a game
think its the wall of fame
i think that ur all fukn lame
twice to see twice to me this is the same
no joke,
wanna gow up fast,
give you a-class,
a ticket to pass,
it was u that made it last
think your a gangster,
your nothin but a prankster
it waz all people,
made me struggle,
made me leathel

our life waz shit
but i waz never a hippacrit
never lit,
your tails on fire
go through your house,
rob you like a mouse
jo to jail,
get out on bail,
set to sail,
the seven seas
no passport pay the fees
swerk.

Tha Ace

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elderado red stackin bread dude you just piitful stickyfingaz is even better than you
and sticky man you be sayin some real corny shit then sayin hahaha son that ain’t banging that ain’t even half way cool

Tha Ace

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elderado can catch a hollow
feedin him bullets so big he can’t swallow
feedin you until you fed
you ain’t stackin bread
you catchin lead to the head
sticky kid you super weak
you don’t deserve a seat
at my table knife to your navel
i’m mentally unstable
u mother fuckin clark gable
u ain’t no rapper
you only an actor
let’s add up all the factors
you a fag, whack and that’s a fact
get of my nutsack i’m beyond you
so bitch you can’t touch that

Tha Ace

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stick you done put the same damn flow on another site...........you ain’t worth messin with son I’m done fuckin with you

Tha Ace

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you even used somebody else’s flow........how sad

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wtf you talking about you snitch your just mad just because you can beat me you faggot and scared of my flows hahahahahaha your a fag

Last edited 14 Nov 2006 09:26 pm by stickyfingaz

Tha Ace

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proof is in the puddin chump don’t deny and i think everyone on here would agree that you can’t fuck with me, you no longer gettin a ounce of attention from me.........if i had any respect for you to begin with, it went out the window when i saw you biting other people’s rhymes and recycling your own
and i would love to here anyone’s opinion on who got a tighter flow

Tha Ace

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and elderado why you givin everybody a play by play of what you doin........nobody gives a fuck

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hahahahahahah look at this little bitch you cant do any shit i got pride for myself and your right its cause you got nothing left

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why am i even wasting mmy time with you man get the hell outta here fagggot

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suck my sack do u wanna fight or sumting