alright...alright...that was sick but you used to many big words...wtf....Well regardless my rhymes will put you in the NEW YORK TIMES//
I come with power to “defeat”, you gon need a MIC 2 STOP IT//
I’ll probably stomp on you unintentionally cuz you MI-CRO-SCOPIC//
Your “Rhymes a Joke” lemme guess, you couldn’t “find the scope”?//
I’ll have you left just like your rhymes, cause your Rhymes is Broke//
Imma Design your face just like a Kaleidoscope//
If you anger me, my daggers gonna COLLIDE-with ya-THROAT//
You act famous, maybe on your corner where you BUY~the~DOPE//
But round here? I couldn’t find you with a MICROSCOPE//
Sorry Kid, I really wish I could say I~SEE~YOU//
But only time I do is when you in the I.C.U//Intensive Care Unit
When It comes 2 Rhymin I don’t care Christain, Catholic, Or Anglican//
I’ll have u stunned so bad you’ll stand just like a MANICAN//
I’m so hott, yet so cold, im like Jesus was//(Powerful)
Only time u coulnd’t feel me’s under ANESTHESIA//
When I talk I won’t take it back, cause what I say, I meant it//
You better believe Im from I.B that makes me SO AUTHENTIC//I.B a.k.a IllBattle
SO baiscally I don' understand why u wanna b facing me//
Im worth about 10 times more then your ACV//
So tell me is it really me that your tryna battle?//
10 cents your ACV, which is your ACTUAL CASH VALUE//(Check the Dictionary)
I come in “storming”, “Whore, this” is Me, Im like a GLOBAL WARMING//
SO Beware Cajun cause this IS your ONLY~WARNING
#3
12 Feb 2006 09:45 pm
BIG RED
Guest
that was tight but look
...
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yo motha fucka so u think u bad,
u neek to get a motha fuckin writin pad,
take notes cause im about to destroy you,
and this shit here is way overdue,
homie this shit here is my life,
imma open this up like a switch blade knife,
i hope u will learn somthing today,
i leave people in a disarray,
this shit right here is unfair,
im so gifted and and my talent is very rare,
u never seen this shit so clean,
to measure the damage on u we will need a machine,
cause its just sad all this shit im doint to you,
battelin me is somethin like taboo,
cause i will massacure you just like jason or freddy,
so who in this relationship is doing the lovin?/ you both couldnt hit a hot line sniffing coke off an oven/ and i’ll give you a dozen to you and your cousin/ a half gram each and you still wouldn’t be buzzin/ and i bet half that shit your typing is rehearsed/ and its still backwards like when you came out your mom feet first/ and who’s be worse? i just cant figure it out/ i’ll walk in your house drop my draws and take a shit on your couch/ than wipe my ass with the pillow and walk away smiling/ while you and your mom cleaning up the shit pile and/ covering your faces with your shirts and squinting your eyes/ trying to keep the dog away from your lunch and eating your fries....ahahahah wtf..
walk away now kid you dont want the trouble son/ how can you be hard? you’re named after a bubble gum/ with your childish raps has me smiling back/ screaming at me caps where’s your style in rap?/ im the type to eat carrots turn around and i’ll puke corn/ maybe you should rehearse your rhymes next time cause they luke warm/ only time you around heat is when you causing a kitchen fire/ or burning rubber on your 50 dollar michelin tire/ and thats word to my mother and both of my twin brothers/ only time you in the hood is when your hanging around the undercovers... get your game up
lmmfao...to be honest little man, im not gonna waste anymore time with you, it’s pointless. just expand your vocabualry, make more than one single word in a line rhyme, and make it flow because it’s very choppy. oh and try to diss better.. just some pointers. good luck.
you are taking offence not me, i can care less. im just trying to explain to you how to become better, because you are very bad. that may be blunt but its the only way you will improve. maybe if more people were on this i would continue, but now i dont see a point, plus i write text on rapforums.com
#14
13 Feb 2006 08:02 pm
the_illest_rappa
Guest
Man all ya is whack//i’ll have u livin on the streets feedin off rats//you fuckin bitches ur gonna stitches after im done with u//man u better get out of my way//or else im coming for u while im in my ESCALADE with an AK 47 coming your way//u best talk behind my back cause if i hear u talkin that smack im coming for u wit my gat//
BIIAATCH!!!!!!
#15
13 Feb 2006 08:20 pm
the_love_rapper
Guest
This is for the LADIES
Damn u so fine in that sexy dress//in the middle of the party standing up on the rest//make my money over to you as i’m rushing your chest//come into my room and excuse the mess//lay back and relax lets talk for a while cause i’m guaranteed to leave you walking away with a smile//damn you still want some more//well tell me girl you better slow your boat//well here we go//i’ll give it to u one last time its just a little bit of ass and a piece of
trin ta diss me and u going about it the wrong way,
u wanna come at me go ahead,
if u do just remember what i said,
u say im the wack one,
homie my wrath has just begun,
--- "I’ll throw ya gang sign up, and then spit on my hand” ~IMMORTAL TECHNIQUE~ OBNOXIOUS
Last edited 03 Aug 2006 12:13 pm by XBIG REDX
#17
13 Feb 2006 08:37 pm
the_love_rapper
Guest
Another One for the LADIES
In my top drop Benz got u next to me//extasy when u on top of me you sexin me//secretly undressin me beneath your eyes//i can feel it when you ride it between your thighs//mezmerised baby by the look in your face//i got u hypnotized the way you scream my name//theres not a thing in this world that could make me explain//i walk out you in a rush because you gowing insane//i might be a thug baby but i’ll be still getting mine//you best read between the line//good girls do bad thangs all the time!!!
#18
13 Feb 2006 08:43 pm
the_love_rapper
Guest
MAN WHAT THE FUCK WAS THAT
The_illest_rappa MY ASS!!!!!
You aint got no skill dawg dont even try it
Dont even try it no more
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