| 08 Jun 2006 06:18 pm |
Mc Lollipop Guest | ill murder u/
witha verse or 2/
i’ll turn u 2 swiss cheese/with my m60’s/
u diss me n i’ll get out my gat and git bizzy/
sorry i took to long with the mic i spit/so close like how ur mom like my dick/
laface u jus a bitch/
so ima be like a teacher and let ur mind roam free wen i bust a clip/
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:20 pm |
Mc Lollipop Guest | srry it took to long but i posted
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:20 pm |
Regular Rep: 0 Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 495 OFFLINE | its iight a can we get some voters
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:27 pm |
TNIZZLE Guest | ummm shit this is a hard battle i cant say who won yet let me re read over yalls battles
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:29 pm |
Blitzd Guest | ima hafta say laface cuz he had a longer verse and better lines but no h8 but i gotta get workin so pce
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:32 pm |
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:35 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 495 OFFLINE | do we have any other voters
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:37 pm |
Mc Lollipop Guest | fuck you TNI ur whack anyways
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| 08 Jun 2006 06:39 pm |
Blitzd Guest | fucc u mang im out tho i gotta work on my cd so fuck u mang u lucky i dont tare u up right now
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:03 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 495 OFFLINE | will someone else vote
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:19 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 172 OFFLINE | is that it members. or are you going another round??? and that vote from TNI does not count because it is un-explained. here is how voting works:
Laface612 wrote:
loilpop
yo verses so bad its seems like you never heard of hip hop
(decent opening=2, okay punchline=1)
my rhymes so good i make panties drop
imma gangsta i make heads pop
im not stoppin til i get to the tip top
(good multiples=3)
ill kick yo ass in a flip flop
(dog you would fight in flip flops, sounds like you were just filling in space. flow of bars=2)
if your so gangsta when i was beatin yo ass you ran away and called a cop
your a white boy staker in stead of hair on your head you got a mop
(that was a weak personal= 1)
this ain’t no fire drill you don’t need to stop drop and roll
i saw you at a strip club grind that poll
(weak personal, okay wordplay=1)
you call me la ass well i have to admit your mom got one
ladies and gentlemen my freestyle is allmost done
you keep talkin that shit and ill have to pull out my gun
(and do what????)
LaFace total=10 points
Mc Lollipop wrote:
ill “murder u”/
witha “verse or 2”/
(alright opening=2)
i’ll “turn u 2” swiss cheese/with my m60’s/
u diss me n i’ll get out my gat and git bizzy/
(nice multiples=4)(okay wordplay=1)
sorry i took to long with the mic i spit/so close like how ur mom like my dick/
laface u jus a bitch/
so ima be like a teacher and let ur mind roam free wen i bust a clip/
(real good multiples, weak personals=1)
(no punchlines=0, good flow of bars=3)
Mc Lollipop total= 11 points
my vote goes to Mc Lollipop
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:21 pm |
TNI Guest | it doesnt really matter how the vote iz it jus matters that itsa vote and i did explain why i said he had better lines and he had a longer verse that i cood get a vibe 2
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:21 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 172 OFFLINE | you guys should do a round 2, since you know how the voting is done and what you need to put into your freestyles. and McLollipop make sure you spit at least 5 bars (ten lines of text)
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:23 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 172 OFFLINE | pick out his hottest bar and do the same with mc lollipop. just cause a freestlye is longer don’t make it better. its the content, punchlines, wordplay, and feel of the crowd that wins battles.
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:25 pm |
TNI Guest | if i was goin for multi’s id go with lollipop but if i had to go with structure id go with laface but idk i guess dont count my vote the should have a rematch
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:27 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 172 OFFLINE | if that’s how you feel then your vote counts. I just want these guys to see where they can improve at, and what they should keep or stop doing. I want members to know they won and how they won. not just cause someone says “you got my vote”. Feel me???
Food for thought:
Learn from each other’s battles and reviews and make yourselves better.
Last edited 08 Jun 2006 07:29 pm by Supreme Chancellor | |
| 08 Jun 2006 07:29 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 495 OFFLINE | we should fuck all this and like make up belts
instead cuz this shits confuseing
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:30 pm |
laface612. Guest | i was raped when i was 6 by my uncle wally
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| 08 Jun 2006 07:33 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 05 Jun 2006 Posts: 172 OFFLINE | check it out, go back to my post read the review, and see my opinion, it will tell you what I think of your freestyle, what you can improve on and what was good or bad.
is this really that hard????
post ways to improve our battle structure on the freestyle rap page, if not we can always go back to the old way. just trying to get you to the next level.
Last edited 08 Jun 2006 07:35 pm by Supreme Chancellor | |
| 08 Jun 2006 07:35 pm |
Regular Rep: 0Joined: 08 Jun 2006 Posts: 495 OFFLINE | ok i looked i guess we can keep doin that system i guess but we should get belts too
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