Some fatass redneck dippin snuff, was sittin at his fruit stand
I pissed on some apples layin in a heap,
he pulled out a glock and put a nigga' to sleep.
I raised up from the dead, like Tupac Shakur,
I shot that mutha fucka, and he was dead fo' sure.
I took off my shirt, I took off all my bling,
I tied him to a tree and burned his ass with kerosene.
Hey yall that was a little Insane Clown Posse style rap. Kinda short. I know it sucked but it was my first one so give a nigga some slack. Rate me man and when you rate me post your rap below the rating.
Example: 5/10 8/10 9/10 etc.
Last edited 07 Aug 2006 11:38 am by Deathspartan117
Ok check it. Im gunna start this off again since that idiot screwed up the thread....
I was walkin' down the block, gun in hand
Some fatass redneck dippin snuff, was sittin at his fruit stand
I pissed on some apples layin in a heap,
he pulled out a glock and put a nigga' to sleep.
I raised up from the dead, like Tupac Shakur,
I shot that mutha fucka, and he was dead fo' sure.
I took off my shirt, I took off all my bling,
I tied him to a tree and burned his ass with kerosene.
Hey yall that was a little Insane Clown Posse style rap. Kinda short. I know it sucked but it was my first one so give a nigga some slack. Rate me man and when you rate me post your rap below the rating.
Deathspartan117 wrote:
Ok check it. Im gunna start this off again since that idiot screwed up the thread....
I was walkin' down the block, gun in hand
Some fatass redneck dippin snuff, was sittin at his fruit stand
I pissed on some apples layin in a heap,
he pulled out a glock and put a nigga' to sleep.
I raised up from the dead, like Tupac Shakur,
I shot that mutha fucka, and he was dead fo' sure.
I took off my shirt, I took off all my bling,
I tied him to a tree and burned his ass with kerosene.
Hey yall that was a little Insane Clown Posse style rap. Kinda short. I know it sucked but it was my first one so give a nigga some slack. Rate me man and when you rate me post your rap below the rating.
YOU NIGGAS ARE SLACK,
YALL NEED TO LET THE STREET NIGGA BANG/
AND I DONT SLUR WHEN I SPEAK,
ITS JUST MY STREET SLANG/
YOU TRYINA RAP IN HERE
WIT YOUR SPEECH IMPAIRMENT WAYS/
BUT WHEN I HIT,
ILL LEAVE YOU LAYIN IN A DAZE/
AZ IF YOU WERE BLAZED
ON PURPLE HAZE OR CHRONIC/
THIS FOOL TRYIES TO RAP,
BUT HIS WORDS SOUND IDIOTIC/
NEVER FEAR YOUNGIN,
THE FORD BLOCK INTRUDERS ARE HERE/
AND WE’LL LAY YOU OUT,
WIT YOUR PETTY CLOUT,
AND NO REMORSE TO SPARE/
YOU NIGGAS ARE SLACK,
YALL NEED TO LET THE STREET NIGGA BANG/
AND I DONT SLUR WHEN I SPEAK,
ITS JUST MY STREET SLANG/
YOU TRYINA RAP IN HERE
WIT YOUR SPEECH IMPAIRMENT WAYS/
BUT WHEN I HIT,
ILL LEAVE YOU LAYIN IN A DAZE/
AZ IF YOU WERE BLAZED
ON PURPLE HAZE OR CHRONIC/
THIS FOOL TRYIES TO RAP,
BUT HIS WORDS SOUND IDIOTIC/
NEVER FEAR YOUNGIN,
THE FORD BLOCK INTRUDERS ARE HERE/
AND WE’LL LAY YOU OUT,
WIT YOUR PETTY CLOUT,
AND NO REMORSE TO SPARE/
YOU NIGGAS ARE SLACK,
YALL NEED TO LET THE STREET NIGGA BANG/
AND I DONT SLUR WHEN I SPEAK,
ITS JUST MY STREET SLANG/
YOU TRYINA RAP IN HERE
WIT YOUR SPEECH IMPAIRMENT WAYS/
BUT WHEN I HIT,
ILL LEAVE YOU LAYIN IN A DAZE/
AZ IF YOU WERE BLAZED
ON PURPLE HAZE OR CHRONIC/
THIS FOOL TRYIES TO RAP,
BUT HIS WORDS SOUND IDIOTIC/
NEVER FEAR YOUNGIN,
THE FORD BLOCK INTRUDERS ARE HERE/
AND WE’LL LAY YOU OUT,
WIT YOUR PETTY CLOUT,
AND NO REMORSE TO SPARE/
PEACE OUT.
8/10
Im here
ive finally arrived
waiting on one of u dumb fucks to let me shine
Just give me a week and ill blacken your name
From that point on your life will never be the same
What I say to u you
Your going to take it to hart
don’t take it bad cause your mum and dad are retards
I will humiliate u in front of your friends
And then ill knock you out like Nigel fucken Benn
that was weak
my skillz ain’t even reached the peak
this ain’t the top
and before I get there your beat’l drop
fallin so fast
yet you still come in last
yeah I switch up the ryhmes
as I go through the times
years go by
yet you still ain’t fly
can’t touch me
I’m on-a killin spree /END FILE
holla,i’ll battle,
and you’ll be the one left in stiches/
i’ll cap all them bitches,
cos u cant handle when i hit this/
the mic,im steady rockin,
to the top,and aint no stoppin/
unless yall want me to to get my
glock and leave this brothel-a-poppin/
you suck so much,
i bet your lips are getting swolen/
and dont be surprised once i leave
your rhymes dismantled, and leave
your body wit holes in/
my weapon smoking,and
its still hot from this heat that i spit,
so stop thinking your the best,
and lets get this show over wit/
its like hammer time,
when i step the game up to the next level
and flatten you fools/
you young,naive,and you prolly aint learned the rues/
no#1:dont claim to be the best,unless you’ve defeated the best/
now thats all you have to remember, so take a pen and a pad paper, and re-think your style and flava.
-im not tryina start beef,just having fun,but if you do wanna battle,i will..
-not trying to start beef either, I just cant rap without insulting sum1-
so you think you all that?
niiga, ill beat you down with my hands behind my back
what you are doin is just talkin shit and takin my rhymes
hell, everytime u rap u fail, no matter how ,many times
just face it, you cant beat me cuz im the best there is and the best there will be
so just give up and u wont get beaten down by me
hell, i beat you so bad, ill make you look like a hoe
and then youll start acting like a crazy mo-fo
so if you think you can take on me? this is yo last chance
hell when im done with you youll wet yo pants
so stop talkin shit and lets do this
cuz if ya dont, then everyone will think you are a mrs
Last edited 09 Aug 2006 05:11 am by Sabulka is back
Rollin through your base with the biggest gun I got/
Not so I can shoot you I won’t even use one shot/
Go' find a secret entrance or come through the parkin lot/
And jam the handle way up into your expansion slot/
Whoa f*ckin nub I’ll hit you, when I come out to play/
Assassin’s what they call me but the middle name’s melee/
The mafia is comin and we’re here to f*ckin stay/
Flamin ninjas all around you and your homies we will slay/
Ya’ll got killas in the streets we got killas in the trees/
And before you know we hit you you’ll be fallin to your knees/
And when your kneelin down there, you may as well suck deez/
To buy you time before we turn your body to swiss cheez.
/END FILE
--- I am the Chaos Spartan 0wn3d
I coined the following underlined terms: MVC and [/sarcasm]
l,you get 5/10 , 3 points for humour, and 2 bonus points 4 that line 'flamin ninjas all around and your homies we will slay'..
sabulka: aight nigga, you wanna battle,u got it,here goes:
first off bitch,
you sound like you actin a muthafuckin fool
this little boi thinks he can rap,
you must think that ur cool
when i read your rhymes, i laughed
just another fake,
who’s cant pass the test
i’ve rhymed and defeated the rest
put them to rest wit a few
lyrical shots to the chest
at best,you a poser,so close,
but you still aint gonna
get that no#1 spot,
my lyrics are hot,
as if my tounge were on fire
see i put your reputation to shame,
while at the same,
mine get elevated higher,
and aint no stoppin till i get to the top,
i aint got to keep up wit you,
because im already past you
try to get at me,
but im still one level in front of you,
one step ahead of you,
and whats worse?
you weren’t even beaten by a dude
'bood' aint even a word,
i bet you ran out of shit to say
we3ll thats bad for you cos now you fuckin wit N.W.A
N.W.A wrote:
l,you get 5/10 , 3 points for humour, and 2 bonus points 4 that line 'flamin ninjas all around and your homies we will slay'..
sabulka: aight nigga, you wanna battle,u got it,here goes:
first off bitch,
you sound like you actin a muthafuckin fool
this little boi thinks he can rap,
you must think that ur cool
when i read your rhymes, i laughed
just another fake,
who’s cant pass the test
i’ve rhymed and defeated the rest
put them to rest wit a few
lyrical shots to the chest
at best,you a poser,so close,
but you still aint gonna
get that no#1 spot,
my lyrics are hot,
as if my tounge were on fire
see i put your reputation to shame,
while at the same,
mine get elevated higher,
and aint no stoppin till i get to the top,
i aint got to keep up wit you,
because im already past you
try to get at me,
but im still one level in front of you,
one step ahead of you,
and whats worse?
you weren’t even beaten by a dude
'bood' aint even a word,
i bet you ran out of shit to say
we3ll thats bad for you cos now you fuckin wit N.W.A
nice 9/10
Outfunds, i’m outgunned but i’m coming out fighting.
Got the hight of a midget but the heart of a Titan.
Ghostface killin these MC’s, Brawlin and Writin.
From the heavenely sky’s,hit ya’ll with a flash of lightening.
These dudes is frightening, Solo will put them all in perpective.
I’m the wrong little nicca to mess with.
I cannot be tamed, i’m on top of my game.
Leave my name on your Tombstone so remember the name.
Can’t stop because my mouth shot with excellent aim.
I bust rhymes all day so I will remain.
I’m the Best from the east, so don’t let this best out.
Holla back at me, front and i’ll knock your teeth out. =)
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