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[Quote] #421
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does it have to actually be a story or can it be a description of someone doing something?
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Purple_Ninja wrote: does it have to actually be a story or can it be a description of someone doing something?


..Oh god..
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you know you wanna read it..
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I’ve read it, thanks.

XD
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read it again!
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NO!
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YES!
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RAWRGEAGLE!

-Plays with a ducky.- ^^
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I want a duck.. -pouts-
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-Stares.-

What duck?

-Pets her duck.-
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-cries-
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-Watches.-
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-beats with a stick-
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Purple_Ninja wrote: does it have to actually be a story or can it be a description of someone doing something?

Any sort of fiction/non fiction is suitable.

No porn though as thats a breach of the rules and if it contains some sort of adult orientated substance, just slap a warning at the top so people can judge whether they wish to read it or not.
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..Andy?
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Chapter 3: Simple as it looks?

They drove home. As Nick and Dan got out the car, Nick spotted a shifty, suspicious looking man.
“That guy looks suspicious. Like he’s watching somebody."
“What guy?"
“That man over there."
“Yeah, he does a bit. Just leave him, we got more important things to do.

As Nick and Dan walked inside, the shifty man made a phone call.
“Darren, it’s Rafferty. I got the right house. 21 Terrace street. That’s where they live. I’m gonna see if I can hear what they’re saying.
“Give it a try, but I don’t think you’ll get anything without getting caught. That Nick has brilliant hearing and sight."
“Sir, I’ve been doing this for years. I know exactly what I’m doing."
“I wont be suprised when you don’t come back."

Nick sat down. Dan got a glass of cola and quickly drank it. He turned to Nick.
“We’ll get some uniforms, go up to his mansion, ask to speak to him and kill him. Simple as that."
“No. It’s not that simple. When we kill him, they will see us and kill us. Besides, how are we gonna get two uniforms?
“Simple. I know a guy. He can sniper two guards. And he’ll do much of a better job than you did."
“I warned you, I hadn’t used a rifle before!"

The spy was making notes of everything being said. He knew all about their plan, and started to sneak away.

Dan thought something was going on, but ignored it. He took out his cell phone and called his friend.
“Hey, Tom, I got a job for you.
“Who is this?"
“It’s Dan. I just need a couple of guys dead."
“Ah, Dan, nice to see, I mean, hear you again. How are things?"
“Not too bad. We’re going to kill Darren."
“Let me guess, you’re going to fail like the other 50 times before?"
“No, we’ve got it all worked out. For the beginning of it, however, we’ll need your *Services*."
“Ah, so, who are the two guys you want me to kill?"
“Just two of Darrens guards will do. Bring us their uniforms."
“Hmm, try it that way huh? Alright, will it be cash or cash?"
“I don’t have a lot of money on me these days, I’ll find some other way to pay you.
“Since you are a valued customer and a good friend to my family, I will do this for free this time. I’ll have the job done by tommorow night."
“Tommorow? Last time you could do the job in an hour!"
“I know, but ever since I started using other methods of advertisments, I’ve been getting a lot of customers. I’ll get back to you ASAP.
“Thanks, I’ll see you later."

Next day, as promised, Tom gave them the uniforms. He left a package by the door. Inside the package were two uniforms and a brand new pistol. There was a card under the gun. The card had a message.
“I remember I owed you a long time ago, so take this pistol. Never been used before. Five ammunition cartridges included. And remeber, you want somebody killed but can’t be bothered to do it yourself, call me!
Dan gave the new pistol to Nick, he’d need a pistol for this job. They put on the uniforms, on started to make their way to Darren’s mansion. Darren’s mansion was huge, and has guards surrounding it. Either Darren really cared about security, or he gets attacked by other people that much. Each guard had a bullet-proof vest, and carried at least one gun. They had a supply belt with ropes, knives, and other tools of survival. They looked like a newly deisgned army outfit.
“Dan, I think this is gonna be harder than you said."
“Yeah, I was kinda thinking the same thing."
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25 Jul 2007 01:37 pm
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Am goner have to look back for the other 2 chapters coz that story sounds interesting mate
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pluto wrote: Am goner have to look back for the other 2 chapters coz that story sounds interesting mate



Both of them on page 21 I think.
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