| 25 Jul 2007 03:50 pm |
Addict (beyond 1337) Rep: 40  Joined: 16 Mar 2007 Posts: 11,980 OFFLINE | not bad mate, not bad at all | | | | 25 Jul 2007 09:56 pm |
Original Fruit Rep: 112 Joined: 02 Dec 2006 Posts: 31,485 OFFLINE | o.o ---
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The Magnificent Bastard Rep: 69 Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 19,601 | Can you smell it, the fear; you reek of its sweet perfume. It permeates from every pore, the air thick with the musky odor. What are you scared of little one? Why do you tremble so? It will all be ok, I promise. Trust me; I don’t want to hurt you, not like the others. Those men with their pointing fingers and harsh words. Those woman with their cruel smiles and judging eyes. No I will never judge you. I will never hate you. I will never speak ill of you. You and I were meant to be together. Separated at birth were you and I, stolen from my house by unseen hands and taken to another home far away. So how have you been treated by life? Did you have all the love you deserved? All the happiness? None of the pain? NO? See there is not a thing that she can offer you that I can not give you in abundance. Take my hand, let us go off together. Lets leave this life behind and make our own journey. Don’t be scared my child for I am here. I have always been here, always searching, watching, waiting till you were ready, waiting till you decided to come home. Yes. You are ready. Very good. Its for the best. You and I belong together. Do you want to say goodbye to the ones that caused you so much pain. Yes you do. Ok. Don’t worry, they can’t hurt you anymore. Look there is mother. Do you think she will notice that you are going? Oh look, she just nods at you. Isn’t that nice. So where is father. Oh that’s right, he is never around is he. Ok. So shall we go then. No point prolonging this agony, best to just go quickly and then we can be together again. A bath? Yes, a lovely warm bath sounds wonderful. I will keep watch for you. There will be no one to hurt you anymore. I won’t let them hurt you anymore. It feels cold, doesn’t it. The steel. Just like your existence among this family of uncaring and undeserving people. DO you feel it. The release. Yes its warm now, the steel blade is warm. That’s it, just a little deeper. There you go. Very good. Now the other one. Now now, don’t cry. Yes I know it hurts but they hurt you more. Look at all the pretty colors. Isn’t it wonderful? No more tears little one. For I am here. There we go. What, you are cold? Here, let me hold you. Feel my warmth, feel my love. That’s better. See, you just relax. We will be together very soon. Let us leave this place together, hand in hand. Oh, you are here now. Is it as wonderful as I said. No more pain, no more fear. See my dear. Life is but a burden, it is only death that can release you from this horrid existence. Come oh fair child of mine, o let us depart for it is death is a joy when life’s lost its heart. ---
 
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UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 5 Joined: 04 Jun 2007 Posts: 2,633 OFFLINE | firewolf81 wrote:
Can you smell it, the fear; you reek of its sweet perfume. It permeates from every pore, the air thick with the musky odor. What are you scared of little one? Why do you tremble so? It will all be ok, I promise. Trust me; I don’t want to hurt you, not like the others. Those men with their pointing fingers and harsh words. Those woman with their cruel smiles and judging eyes. No I will never judge you. I will never hate you. I will never speak ill of you. You and I were meant to be together. Separated at birth were you and I, stolen from my house by unseen hands and taken to another home far away. So how have you been treated by life? Did you have all the love you deserved? All the happiness? None of the pain? NO? See there is not a thing that she can offer you that I can not give you in abundance. Take my hand, let us go off together. Lets leave this life behind and make our own journey. Don’t be scared my child for I am here. I have always been here, always searching, watching, waiting till you were ready, waiting till you decided to come home. Yes. You are ready. Very good. Its for the best. You and I belong together. Do you want to say goodbye to the ones that caused you so much pain. Yes you do. Ok. Don’t worry, they can’t hurt you anymore. Look there is mother. Do you think she will notice that you are going? Oh look, she just nods at you. Isn’t that nice. So where is father. Oh that’s right, he is never around is he. Ok. So shall we go then. No point prolonging this agony, best to just go quickly and then we can be together again. A bath? Yes, a lovely warm bath sounds wonderful. I will keep watch for you. There will be no one to hurt you anymore. I won’t let them hurt you anymore. It feels cold, doesn’t it. The steel. Just like your existence among this family of uncaring and undeserving people. DO you feel it. The release. Yes its warm now, the steel blade is warm. That’s it, just a little deeper. There you go. Very good. Now the other one. Now now, don’t cry. Yes I know it hurts but they hurt you more. Look at all the pretty colors. Isn’t it wonderful? No more tears little one. For I am here. There we go. What, you are cold? Here, let me hold you. Feel my warmth, feel my love. That’s better. See, you just relax. We will be together very soon. Let us leave this place together, hand in hand. Oh, you are here now. Is it as wonderful as I said. No more pain, no more fear. See my dear. Life is but a burden, it is only death that can release you from this horrid existence. Come oh fair child of mine, o let us depart for it is death is a joy when life’s lost its heart.
What an emo
THE CARTER III OUT MARCH 18, 2008! | | | 28 Jul 2007 03:28 am |
The Magnificent Bastard Rep: 69Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 19,601 | The Phenom wrote:
firewolf81 wrote:
Can you smell it, the fear; you reek of its sweet perfume. It permeates from every pore, the air thick with the musky odor. What are you scared of little one? Why do you tremble so? It will all be ok, I promise. Trust me; I don’t want to hurt you, not like the others. Those men with their pointing fingers and harsh words. Those woman with their cruel smiles and judging eyes. No I will never judge you. I will never hate you. I will never speak ill of you. You and I were meant to be together. Separated at birth were you and I, stolen from my house by unseen hands and taken to another home far away. So how have you been treated by life? Did you have all the love you deserved? All the happiness? None of the pain? NO? See there is not a thing that she can offer you that I can not give you in abundance. Take my hand, let us go off together. Lets leave this life behind and make our own journey. Don’t be scared my child for I am here. I have always been here, always searching, watching, waiting till you were ready, waiting till you decided to come home. Yes. You are ready. Very good. Its for the best. You and I belong together. Do you want to say goodbye to the ones that caused you so much pain. Yes you do. Ok. Don’t worry, they can’t hurt you anymore. Look there is mother. Do you think she will notice that you are going? Oh look, she just nods at you. Isn’t that nice. So where is father. Oh that’s right, he is never around is he. Ok. So shall we go then. No point prolonging this agony, best to just go quickly and then we can be together again. A bath? Yes, a lovely warm bath sounds wonderful. I will keep watch for you. There will be no one to hurt you anymore. I won’t let them hurt you anymore. It feels cold, doesn’t it. The steel. Just like your existence among this family of uncaring and undeserving people. DO you feel it. The release. Yes its warm now, the steel blade is warm. That’s it, just a little deeper. There you go. Very good. Now the other one. Now now, don’t cry. Yes I know it hurts but they hurt you more. Look at all the pretty colors. Isn’t it wonderful? No more tears little one. For I am here. There we go. What, you are cold? Here, let me hold you. Feel my warmth, feel my love. That’s better. See, you just relax. We will be together very soon. Let us leave this place together, hand in hand. Oh, you are here now. Is it as wonderful as I said. No more pain, no more fear. See my dear. Life is but a burden, it is only death that can release you from this horrid existence. Come oh fair child of mine, o let us depart for it is death is a joy when life’s lost its heart.
What an emo
What.. so now a piece of creative writing is a emo. Whats next john...a emo tree?
I think all of those accounts you hide behind have finally done your head in.
| | | 28 Jul 2007 03:46 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 5Joined: 04 Jun 2007 Posts: 2,633 OFFLINE | firewolf81 wrote:
The Phenom wrote:
firewolf81 wrote:
Can you smell it, the fear; you reek of its sweet perfume. It permeates from every pore, the air thick with the musky odor. What are you scared of little one? Why do you tremble so? It will all be ok, I promise. Trust me; I don’t want to hurt you, not like the others. Those men with their pointing fingers and harsh words. Those woman with their cruel smiles and judging eyes. No I will never judge you. I will never hate you. I will never speak ill of you. You and I were meant to be together. Separated at birth were you and I, stolen from my house by unseen hands and taken to another home far away. So how have you been treated by life? Did you have all the love you deserved? All the happiness? None of the pain? NO? See there is not a thing that she can offer you that I can not give you in abundance. Take my hand, let us go off together. Lets leave this life behind and make our own journey. Don’t be scared my child for I am here. I have always been here, always searching, watching, waiting till you were ready, waiting till you decided to come home. Yes. You are ready. Very good. Its for the best. You and I belong together. Do you want to say goodbye to the ones that caused you so much pain. Yes you do. Ok. Don’t worry, they can’t hurt you anymore. Look there is mother. Do you think she will notice that you are going? Oh look, she just nods at you. Isn’t that nice. So where is father. Oh that’s right, he is never around is he. Ok. So shall we go then. No point prolonging this agony, best to just go quickly and then we can be together again. A bath? Yes, a lovely warm bath sounds wonderful. I will keep watch for you. There will be no one to hurt you anymore. I won’t let them hurt you anymore. It feels cold, doesn’t it. The steel. Just like your existence among this family of uncaring and undeserving people. DO you feel it. The release. Yes its warm now, the steel blade is warm. That’s it, just a little deeper. There you go. Very good. Now the other one. Now now, don’t cry. Yes I know it hurts but they hurt you more. Look at all the pretty colors. Isn’t it wonderful? No more tears little one. For I am here. There we go. What, you are cold? Here, let me hold you. Feel my warmth, feel my love. That’s better. See, you just relax. We will be together very soon. Let us leave this place together, hand in hand. Oh, you are here now. Is it as wonderful as I said. No more pain, no more fear. See my dear. Life is but a burden, it is only death that can release you from this horrid existence. Come oh fair child of mine, o let us depart for it is death is a joy when life’s lost its heart.
What an emo
What.. so now a piece of creative writing is a emo. Whats next john...a emo tree?
I think all of those accounts you hide behind have finally done your head in.
lol I was just kidding I’m not even 100% sure what emo means
THE CARTER III OUT MARCH 18, 2008!Last edited 28 Jul 2007 03:47 am by The Phenom | | | 28 Jul 2007 03:57 am |
Addict (beyond 1337) Rep: 40Joined: 16 Mar 2007 Posts: 11,980 OFFLINE | An emo is just some thing that describes someone that gets emotional about things | | | 28 Jul 2007 03:59 am |
The Magnificent Bastard Rep: 69Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 19,601 | The Phenom wrote:
firewolf81 wrote:
The Phenom wrote:
firewolf81 wrote:
Can you smell it, the fear; you reek of its sweet perfume. It permeates from every pore, the air thick with the musky odor. What are you scared of little one? Why do you tremble so? It will all be ok, I promise. Trust me; I don’t want to hurt you, not like the others. Those men with their pointing fingers and harsh words. Those woman with their cruel smiles and judging eyes. No I will never judge you. I will never hate you. I will never speak ill of you. You and I were meant to be together. Separated at birth were you and I, stolen from my house by unseen hands and taken to another home far away. So how have you been treated by life? Did you have all the love you deserved? All the happiness? None of the pain? NO? See there is not a thing that she can offer you that I can not give you in abundance. Take my hand, let us go off together. Lets leave this life behind and make our own journey. Don’t be scared my child for I am here. I have always been here, always searching, watching, waiting till you were ready, waiting till you decided to come home. Yes. You are ready. Very good. Its for the best. You and I belong together. Do you want to say goodbye to the ones that caused you so much pain. Yes you do. Ok. Don’t worry, they can’t hurt you anymore. Look there is mother. Do you think she will notice that you are going? Oh look, she just nods at you. Isn’t that nice. So where is father. Oh that’s right, he is never around is he. Ok. So shall we go then. No point prolonging this agony, best to just go quickly and then we can be together again. A bath? Yes, a lovely warm bath sounds wonderful. I will keep watch for you. There will be no one to hurt you anymore. I won’t let them hurt you anymore. It feels cold, doesn’t it. The steel. Just like your existence among this family of uncaring and undeserving people. DO you feel it. The release. Yes its warm now, the steel blade is warm. That’s it, just a little deeper. There you go. Very good. Now the other one. Now now, don’t cry. Yes I know it hurts but they hurt you more. Look at all the pretty colors. Isn’t it wonderful? No more tears little one. For I am here. There we go. What, you are cold? Here, let me hold you. Feel my warmth, feel my love. That’s better. See, you just relax. We will be together very soon. Let us leave this place together, hand in hand. Oh, you are here now. Is it as wonderful as I said. No more pain, no more fear. See my dear. Life is but a burden, it is only death that can release you from this horrid existence. Come oh fair child of mine, o let us depart for it is death is a joy when life’s lost its heart.
What an emo
What.. so now a piece of creative writing is a emo. Whats next john...a emo tree?
I think all of those accounts you hide behind have finally done your head in.
lol I was just kidding I’m not even 100% sure what emo means
Ok. I thought you had finally lost it 
| | | 28 Jul 2007 04:22 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 5Joined: 04 Jun 2007 Posts: 2,633 OFFLINE | Naw I lost it a long time ago ---
THE CARTER III OUT MARCH 18, 2008! | | | 30 Jul 2007 07:05 pm |
Regular Rep: 0  Joined: 24 Jul 2007 Posts: 360 OFFLINE | does it have to be fanfiction? ---
Don’t hate
Masturbate! | | | 31 Jul 2007 02:05 am |
The Magnificent Bastard Rep: 69Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 19,601 | Purple_Ninja wrote:
does it have to be fanfiction?
No. Any sort of litature, fiction, non fiction, stories, poems....anything that you have written that is some sort of writing but not random conversation or spam. basicly anything that may be published in some sort of book, magazine ect is suitable.
| | | 31 Jul 2007 06:29 am |
Damn you Thatcher, damn you tory bitch! Rep: 7 Joined: 28 Oct 2006 Posts: 5,458 OFFLINE | Chapter 4: A plan gone wrong.
As Nick and Dan walked inside, they looked around and were fascinated. It was impossible to believe that all these guards worked for one man. How did Darren get the money to pay for them? They walked up into the elavator and went straight up to Darren office. Two guards stood outside The door, one on the left side one on the right side. The left guard stopped them.
“Where do you think you’re going? And where’s your supply belt?" Asked the guard.
“Err, We’re new guards and have a very important message for Darren." Dan stammered.
“I’ll deliver the message to him. What is this *urgent news*?"
“We can’t tell you. We have to speak to him personally."
“Very well, enter. But I’m coming in with you."
“Umm... Ok..."
They walked in. Darren was still injured from Dan trying to kill him at the docks, but was looking quite a bit better.
“What is it now?" Asked Darren impatiently.
“Sir, these two claim to be new guards and say that they have urgent news." Replied the guard.
“Well, you see we have some very important imformation on err, umm... Barry." Started Nick
“Barry? I don’t know anybody called Barry!" Shouted Darren.
“Yeah, you see-"
“No! Enough! Face it Nick, Dan, I knew all about this set-up! I’ve been watching you all along!"
“But how did you find out?"
“Remeber the suspicious man outside your house? That was one of my personal spies!"
“But that was straight after we tried to-"
“Tried to sniper me? Yes, I knew you were the assasins."
“So, let me guess, your’re gonna kill us both now?"
“No, I’m putting your skills to good use."
Darren’s guard took Cary’s and Nick’s pistols. He pushed them onto the floor, and Darren stood up, looking down on them giving an evil grin.
“You two are going to be guards for my army."
“Oh yeah, smart idea, make us guards, give us guns when wer’e the one’s that want to kill you!
“You will be the guards of my factory."
“Factory?"
“Yes, I have slaves work away creating cars and ships secretly. You will be transported to the factory and will guard there, the slaves are starting to rebel against me. Kurt, take these two to Alan. Tell Alan that they are two new guards for the factory.
“With pleasure, boss!" Replied Kurt, while
dragging Nick and Dan out of the door and down the stairs. ---
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UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 12 Joined: 02 May 2007 Posts: 4,094 OFFLINE | who thinks i should make another one of my stories! | | | 03 Aug 2007 10:41 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 11 Joined: 01 Jun 2007 Posts: 2,552 OFFLINE | Didus wrote:
who thinks i should make another one of my stories!
not me!
Join the itty bitty kitty comitee in my User Page. | | | 04 Aug 2007 12:43 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 12Joined: 02 May 2007 Posts: 4,094 OFFLINE | itty_bitty_kitty wrote:
Didus wrote:
who thinks i should make another one of my stories!
not me!
stuff you! | | | 05 Aug 2007 05:00 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 3 Joined: 27 Sep 2006 Posts: 2,055 OFFLINE | Emo is such an Overused word >.< ---
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http://www.prizerebel.com/index.php?r=115371 | | | 08 Aug 2007 12:49 am |
Regular Rep: 1 Joined: 25 Jul 2007 Posts: 444 OFFLINE | How you uh, how you comin' on that novel you’re working on? Huh? Gotta a big, uh, big stack of papers there? Gotta, gotta nice litte story you’re working on there? Your big novel you’ve been working on for 3 years? Huh? Gotta, gotta compelling protaganist? Yeah? Gotta obstacle for him to overcome? Huh? Gotta story brewing there? Working on, working on that for quite some time? Huh? (voice getting higher pitched) Yea, talking about that 3 years ago. Been working on that the whole time? Nice little narrative? Beginning, middle, and end? Some friends become enemies, some enemies become friends? At the end your main character is richer from the experience? Yeah? Yeah? (voice returns to normal) No, no, you deserve some time off. ---
you cant see me | | | 11 Aug 2007 06:15 am |
OWNED BY SA-X Rep: 64 Joined: 24 Apr 2007 Posts: 13,669 OFFLINE | Chris G. Moodie wrote:
How you uh, how you comin' on that novel you’re working on? Huh? Gotta a big, uh, big stack of papers there? Gotta, gotta nice litte story you’re working on there? Your big novel you’ve been working on for 3 years? Huh? Gotta, gotta compelling protaganist? Yeah? Gotta obstacle for him to overcome? Huh? Gotta story brewing there? Working on, working on that for quite some time? Huh? (voice getting higher pitched) Yea, talking about that 3 years ago. Been working on that the whole time? Nice little narrative? Beginning, middle, and end? Some friends become enemies, some enemies become friends? At the end your main character is richer from the experience? Yeah? Yeah? (voice returns to normal) No, no, you deserve some time off.
Family Guy?
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UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 12Joined: 02 May 2007 Posts: 4,094 OFFLINE | who wants one of my stories! | | | 11 Aug 2007 06:38 am |
OWNED BY SA-X Rep: 64Joined: 24 Apr 2007 Posts: 13,669 OFFLINE | Just get it over with.
I need to get to 5,000 tonight and no one’s talking to me..
So I need all the posts I can get. ---
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