| 28 Jan 2007 10:16 am |
Ima sexy bitch! Rep: 38  Joined: 28 Dec 2006 Posts: 18,155 | Hi all. i would appreciate it if anyone who has read or is going to read my short story, THE RECRUIT, could give any imput into what they thought. it would be greatly apreciated in determining whether i continue on the adventures of Douglas Brady and publish a mini series/ collection of similar themed stories or whether i call it quits on that particular universe.
Thanks guys, i realy appreciate it
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| 29 Jan 2007 04:10 am |
Happy to help Rep: 29 Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | I’ll read it later and tell you what i think ok.
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| 29 Jan 2007 08:10 am |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | firewolf: I will be honist i’m no critic but the story seemed to flow well sometimes a bit to discriptive but other than that not bad at all i enjoyed it.
More please.
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| 29 Jan 2007 08:13 am |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | Red spartan 226: Seems your making a play or evern a dare i say it film script keep working on it i like sh*t like that.
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| 29 Jan 2007 08:15 am |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | Mr 1 2 i hate you: i think its going some where good keep it up.
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| 29 Jan 2007 06:13 pm |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21 Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | well all i can say is:
Tuscan: Good keep it coming
Firewolf: a bit discusting but still very good(remember this comment comes from a woman)
James leclerc: i liked yours too, hope to reed more
the others havent read yet, but i will, just need a bit of quiet time to really get in the stories.....
thanks all of you its interesting to reed all your stories
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| 29 Jan 2007 06:17 pm |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | mimi merci your so kind.
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| 29 Jan 2007 06:24 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 9 Joined: 27 Nov 2005 Posts: 3,250 OFFLINE | hey guys ive been too lazy to finish my next chapter, so i will just review
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| 29 Jan 2007 06:29 pm |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | Loca-Maca wrote:
hey guys ive been too lazy to finish my next chapter, so i will just review
O K be gentle im very sencitive.
only jking it’s good to have somone elses opinion.
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| 29 Jan 2007 06:55 pm |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | ok just read yours Loca-Maca,fiction is good, but its good to see that some write about actual things that do happend too,,
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| 30 Jan 2007 02:25 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 4 Joined: 26 Oct 2006 Posts: 1,037 OFFLINE | Hi readers & writers
This 'complete story' idea has been a brilliant idea. Firewolf, thank you for starting this.
I’ve been so busy lately (like many of us) and look forward to sitting and reading in the correct 'frame of mind'. As Mimi said, i need to 'get into' the stories. I don’t like to read by rushing through. yuck.
I have a couple of things to write myself, so that will be fun.
I like the idea of the 'reviewing' of stories, but at first i was afraid it may cause 'writers agression'. It’s not happened, so im pleased about that.
Well done to you all, for taking the time to contribute. Don’t waste any writing tallent, show us anything you have 'hidden' away it’s great fun.
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| 30 Jan 2007 02:51 pm |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | philbert wrote:
Hi readers & writers
This 'complete story' idea has been a brilliant idea. Firewolf, thank you for starting this.
I’ve been so busy lately (like many of us) and look forward to sitting and reading in the correct 'frame of mind'. As Mimi said, i need to 'get into' the stories. I don’t like to read by rushing through. yuck.
I have a couple of things to write myself, so that will be fun.
I like the idea of the 'reviewing' of stories, but at first i was afraid it may cause 'writers agression'. It’s not happened, so im pleased about that.
Well done to you all, for taking the time to contribute. Don’t waste any writing tallent, show us anything you have 'hidden' away it’s great fun.
all coments welcome.
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| 30 Jan 2007 09:40 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 9Joined: 27 Nov 2005 Posts: 3,250 OFFLINE | mimi38 wrote:
ok just read yours Loca-Maca,fiction is good, but its good to see that some write about actual things that do happend too,,
thanks. Would you be willing to see the end
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| 30 Jan 2007 09:57 pm |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | Loca-Maca wrote:
mimi38 wrote:
ok just read yours Loca-Maca,fiction is good, but its good to see that some write about actual things that do happend too,,
thanks. Would you be willing to see the end
yes defanatly
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| 30 Jan 2007 10:00 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 9Joined: 27 Nov 2005 Posts: 3,250 OFFLINE | sweet, thanks!!
BTW I saw your pic, damn your hot.
hey u wanna give me your number sometime? lol jk
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| 31 Jan 2007 08:08 am |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | Loca-Maca wrote:
sweet, thanks!!
BTW I saw your pic, damn your hot.
hey u wanna give me your number sometime? lol jk
i guess youd wast money on long distance, cause i am quite far away from you
go ahead and post a continuance to that story,,,we are all waiting to see what happends nex...
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| 31 Jan 2007 07:26 pm |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | comme on everybody keep it comming we want to read
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| 02 Feb 2007 10:21 am |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | yayyy tuscan, well i was starting to dispare here,,,all of you just stop posting storys at the same time i though it was somthing i had said........
well keep it up its good
ahhhh and i mean it for all of you...
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| 02 Feb 2007 10:37 am |
Happy to help Rep: 29Joined: 05 Jan 2007 Posts: 9,322 OFFLINE | mimi38 wrote:
yayyy tuscan, well i was starting to dispare here,,,all of you just stop posting storys at the same time i though it was somthing i had said........
well keep it up its good
ahhhh and i mean it for all of you...
Thanks mimi it’s always good to hear from you.
sorry it takes so long but Rome wasnt biult in a day, My story is all in my head and i’v got to sort what to wright down and what not to.
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| 02 Feb 2007 10:45 am |
a cheer for froggys Rep: 21Joined: 13 Jun 2006 Posts: 11,784 ONLINE | its ok as long as you write.....
it is getting at a point where i can hardly wait to reed more....i am sure am not the only one thinking this, sorry!lol
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