Well ive been really into the music writing and stuff, with everything thats been going on in my life i have alot of inspiration to write music. Im really new at it but i mean i have more than enough things to write about.
Well i wrote a couple songs, but ill just post my favorite one. I already have the tune and rythmn and everything figured out for this one, all i need is a band and i could play it.
This song is called the “The Angel I Used To Know”
Its basically talking about the pain that goes on when someone you loved, cheats on you, lies to you, leaves you, and stabs you in the back.
The Angel I Used To Know
You’re gone, im left behind by myself
You left me in this darkness,
You left me in this hell,
Why did you do it? [echoes]
Where did you go? [echoes]
You can’t just leave me dying, lying here
Lost, broken, and alone
Oh angel I loved you
You were my love, my life, my air
I needed you precious angel
But you didnt even care
And now im suffocating
Smothered by bitter dispair
And I called out your sweet, sweet name
[drums kick in]
[screams]
But oh you just don’t fucking care!!!!!!!
[instruments kick in]
[screams]
[chorus: repeat 4x]
Oh why did you hurt me, beat me, leave me?
What happened to the lovely, angel I used to know?
Oh why did you forsake me, take me, and break me?
Why did you leave me? Where did you go?
[instruments play through the chorus another 4 times but with no vocals and conclude the song]
Last edited 27 Mar 2007 06:02 pm by Deathspartan117
Deathspartan117 wrote:
Well ive been really into the music writing and stuff, with everything thats been going on in my life i have alot of inspiration to write music. Im really new at it but i mean i have more than enough things to write about.
Well i wrote a couple songs, but ill just post my favorite one. I already have the tune and rythmn and everything figured out for this one, all i need is a band and i could play it.
This song is called the “The Angel I Used To Know”
Its basically talking about the pain that goes on when someone you loved, cheats on you, lies to you, leaves you, and stabs you in the back.
The Angel I Used To Know
You’re gone, im left behind by myself
You left me in this darkness,
You left me in this hell,
Why did you do it? [echoes]
Where did you go? [echoes]
You can’t just leave me dying, lying here
Lost, broken, and alone
Oh angel I loved you
You were my love, my life, my air
I needed you precious angel
But you didnt even care
And now im suffocating
Smothered by bitter dispair
And I called out your sweet, sweet name
[screams]
But oh you just don’t fucking care!!!!!!!
[instruments kick in]
[screams]
[chorus: repeat 4x]
Oh why did you hurt me, beat me, leave me?
What happened to the lovely, angel I used to know?
Oh why did you forsake me, take me, and break me?
Why did you leave me? Where did you go?
[instruments play through the chorus another 4 times but with no vocals and conclude the song]
im not sure if i like this one anymore, i wrote it almost a year ago.
When my soul feels a serious threat,
Any pain that is present subsides,
And having no sense of regret,
Awakens a forceful demon inside,
The vengeful spirit of three,
That thirsts for annihilation,
Knowing hate to a limitless degree,
With a stubborn determination,
(Chorus)
I don’t care how much I have to fight,
I don’t mind how much I bleed,
This battle only fuels my excite,
Whatever you accomplish I’ll exceed,
A painful soul that isn’t afraid to die,
Pushing my body to the extreme,
Just pray that I’m your ally,
As I’m being supreme,
Unstoppable once my mind is set,
Always finding a way and never giving in,
What I want I will get,
I don’t lose I only win.
livingdeadgirl wrote:
im not sure if i like this one anymore, i wrote it almost a year ago.
When my soul feels a serious threat,
Any pain that is present subsides,
And having no sense of regret,
Awakens a forceful demon inside,
The vengeful spirit of three,
That thirsts for annihilation,
Knowing hate to a limitless degree,
With a stubborn determination,
(Chorus)
I don’t care how much I have to fight,
I don’t mind how much I bleed,
This battle only fuels my excite,
Whatever you accomplish I’ll exceed,
A painful soul that isn’t afraid to die,
Pushing my body to the extreme,
Just pray that I’m your ally,
As I’m being supreme,
Unstoppable once my mind is set,
Always finding a way and never giving in,
What I want I will get,
I don’t lose I only win.
end of life its here, enter hell im done
nothing left to fear, demon on the run
fade away to black, memory in place
a faded photograph, a long forgotten face
letters so thin, written in love
thought by him, given by shove
fuck this pain, its all I got
leave a stain, with a gunshot
DEADMANS ANTHEM
you agrivate me
for the very same reason
you ask me again
and I show you the meanin
(why they) call me the demon
you come back for more
now I get the feelin
see you run away screamin
misunderstood is how I seem
cuz the cuts on my arms
are put there to bleed
you say im fucked up
and I make you believe
I got the mask made of flesh
sewed together at the seam
LAST SECONDS
the minds overflowing, no room for another issue
only way to go is outward, splattering brain tissue
the body shudders and falls, to you its a sick view
out of the wounded soul, another loss rips through
the last thing you ask, no one will behold
feelings you waited to share, never will they be known
leave one last gift behind, sit back enjoy the show
your finger pulls the trigger, as blood and bone explode
ASLEEP
life has a way of doing this
driving me to madness
to a place I can be alone
and hide deep in the blackness
I try to scream
I try to shout
the blood fills my throat
and no sound comes out
PASSIVE AGRESSIVE
theres no sunshine
an instance of rain
smile once sometime
witness the change
left adrift in dust
sad words unto me
taken faith in trust
my hate thundering
a monster underneath
formed from fuck
a weapon unsheathed
im set to destruct
---
im an angry changeling with rabies that sprang free from hades
livingdeadgirl wrote:
im not sure if i like this one anymore, i wrote it almost a year ago.
When my soul feels a serious threat,
Any pain that is present subsides,
And having no sense of regret,
Awakens a forceful demon inside,
The vengeful spirit of three,
That thirsts for annihilation,
Knowing hate to a limitless degree,
With a stubborn determination,
(Chorus)
I don’t care how much I have to fight,
I don’t mind how much I bleed,
This battle only fuels my excite,
Whatever you accomplish I’ll exceed,
A painful soul that isn’t afraid to die,
Pushing my body to the extreme,
Just pray that I’m your ally,
As I’m being supreme,
Unstoppable once my mind is set,
Always finding a way and never giving in,
What I want I will get,
I don’t lose I only win.
wow yours is alot more structured than mine, nice.
end of life its here, enter hell im done
nothing left to fear, demon on the run
fade away to black, memory in place
a faded photograph, a long forgotten face
letters so thin, written in love
thought by him, given by shove
fuck this pain, its all I got
leave a stain, with a gunshot
DEADMANS ANTHEM
you agrivate me
for the very same reason
you ask me again
and I show you the meanin
(why they) call me the demon
you come back for more
now I get the feelin
see you run away screamin
misunderstood is how I seem
cuz the cuts on my arms
are put there to bleed
you say im fucked up
and I make you believe
I got the mask made of flesh
sewed together at the seam
LAST SECONDS
the minds overflowing, no room for another issue
only way to go is outward, splattering brain tissue
the body shudders and falls, to you its a sick view
out of the wounded soul, another loss rips through
the last thing you ask, no one will behold
feelings you waited to share, never will they be known
leave one last gift behind, sit back enjoy the show
your finger pulls the trigger, as blood and bone explode
ASLEEP
life has a way of doing this
driving me to madness
to a place I can be alone
and hide deep in the blackness
I try to scream
I try to shout
the blood fills my throat
and no sound comes out
PASSIVE AGRESSIVE
theres no sunshine
an instance of rain
smile once sometime
witness the change
left adrift in dust
sad words unto me
taken faith in trust
my hate thundering
a monster underneath
formed from fuck
a weapon unsheathed
im set to destruct
dude thats fucking awesome
Last edited 27 Mar 2007 06:06 pm by Deathspartan117
livingdeadgirl wrote:
im not sure if i like this one anymore, i wrote it almost a year ago.
When my soul feels a serious threat,
Any pain that is present subsides,
And having no sense of regret,
Awakens a forceful demon inside,
The vengeful spirit of three,
That thirsts for annihilation,
Knowing hate to a limitless degree,
With a stubborn determination,
(Chorus)
I don’t care how much I have to fight,
I don’t mind how much I bleed,
This battle only fuels my excite,
Whatever you accomplish I’ll exceed,
A painful soul that isn’t afraid to die,
Pushing my body to the extreme,
Just pray that I’m your ally,
As I’m being supreme,
Unstoppable once my mind is set,
Always finding a way and never giving in,
What I want I will get,
I don’t lose I only win.
wow yours is alot more structured than mine, nice.
i wrote a poem. my friend pressured me to it, he needed it for his class. “hey man write me a poem” “k man, let me think”. then he starts sayin all kinds of stuff an he says “my heart bleeds for one like u”. and thas what got me into it.
my heart bleeds for one like you
my heart bleeds, i wish you knew
my heart bleeds when you’re not near
i fear for you when you’re not here
my heart bleeds, for you, i live
to you only, my heart, i’ll give
my heart bleeds, when you are hurt
you are everything, all else is dirt
my heart bleeds when you’re not well
with you, in love, i deeply fell
my heart bleeds for your sake
for you only, my hear will break
my heart bleeds for one like you
my heart bleeds, i wish you knew
my hear bleeds, for only you
to you only, my love is true
hehehehe. of course he got all tha credit for it. all tha chicks fell for him. but is allryt, that poem sucks, i can make a better one.
heres like tha second poem i wrote. i jus wrote whatever came to my mind. i think its called flushing. its not final. i barely edited it. its kinda like rap.
you cant measure the pressure that im feeling
the signs that youre reading are wrong
because im concealing
the pain that is driving me over the brink
God is the reason why my heart shrinks
at the thought of trying hard, in the end we all die hard
we were torn apart, disunity brought to all humanity
death and disease overrun us
we pray everyday but still God hides his face from us
so we do without him
our need to feed is hampered by those with greed
i strive to stay alive under rainy clouds
but its not easy to find destiny
i cant see past the shroud
so i sigh and my thoughts focus on those who die spiritually
our problems persist perpetually but at times
i resist sinning even though the devil is devouring
i stopped there. i m thinking of makin the last part of this song about hope but i cant get there yet.
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