| 23 Sep 2007 11:16 pm |
Regular Rep: 8  Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 573 OFFLINE | Untitled
- inspired by Natalie Wright’s Nightly Wonderland
My room is damp and oozes shadows down the walls
The shadows form cobwebs over my eyes
The spiders who sleep on my lashes make my skin crawl and turn red
I jump out of my bed to open the door
a blue shaft of light
and in my haste
I break my fingers
If ya like it u can add me as a friend.
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Does any one like my poem? It's on my profile 2. It's okay. ********** 40% (votes so far 4) HELL TO THE NAH! ******** 30% (votes so far 3) I could do much better. (me: I luv ur blunt honesty. send me some) ***** 20% (votes so far 2) HELL YA! *** 10% (votes so far 1) Only registered users may vote. | |
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| 23 Sep 2007 11:18 pm |
Coco Chanel - My Queen Rep: 48 Joined: 08 Sep 2007 Posts: 9,750 OFFLINE | awesome
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Anonymousface. wrote:
To Mr. samus suks my balls:
Learn to spell. And she can’t suck anything that isn’t there.
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| 27 Sep 2007 03:08 pm |
Damn you Thatcher, damn you tory bitch! Rep: 7 Joined: 28 Oct 2006 Posts: 5,458 OFFLINE | When will it be out?
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| 23 Oct 2007 07:58 pm |
Shhh!!! They'll see you Rep: 19 Joined: 01 Oct 2007 Posts: 5,959 OFFLINE | mr 1 2 i dont like you wrote:
When will it be out?
When shit flies.
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| 12 Jan 2008 11:33 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 15 Joined: 19 Dec 2007 Posts: 2,060 OFFLINE | ITS EMO!!!!!1111111oneoneone
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| 20 Feb 2008 10:23 am |
Regular Rep: 8Joined: 23 Sep 2007 Posts: 573 OFFLINE | dang i didn’t think so but i luv criticism. Thanks everyone and this poem is not in my profile anymore.
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