same piece as last time but I made the verse longer and I got a title... still thinkin of the hook
In A Heartbeat
shock-and-rile-ears with less sympathy than crocodile-tears/
my-style’s-fear; if you gonna call it off-the-dial’s-here//
defiled-peers for years; child-reared half you kids-in-rap/
with similac; kickin-facts that end cats and they smidgeon-acts//
ain’t given-craps 'bout pidgeon-rats; all y’all can go-to-hell/
lotta foes-to-fell; stop talkin 'bout ya bling like show-n-tell//
“Years of Prayers” won’t keep me from dolin'-hell with “Golden-Shells”/
tried to hide in “Allie” but that wack shit ya “Holden”-spells//
death-and-destruction; debt-and-deductions'-what-the-industry/
breeds n succeeds at doing as long as you suckas let-em-be-fuckin-//
up-the-similes; like Timothy I’ll be bombin-gs/
on-the-free sonically; honestly my logic-be//
chronically demolishing opposition with compositions/
that stomp-a-written; in my league there’s no competition//
stop-the-bitchin; I topped-ya-spittin when I first started/
still the smartest artist; I’ll leave wack acts departed//
(4x)
in a heartbeat, I Starsky ya copied larceny/
with verbal arsony; dischargin-gs from varsity...//
^that’s why I said name 'em. I’ll acknowledge them if they are... but I mean people who are on right now. Godzfavourite is long gone. And King John’s a different kind of rapper... he goes for punchlines, I go for flow. Same with 226 & babyee chronic. I haven’t really seen much of anything from Reality besides the shit on the last page so I can’t say...
lookin from “watch-towers in “dark hours” my “heart showers”
“rain” that “frames” the “shame” I “gain” as a “part coward”
thru the “sharp plower” rolled “over like grass”
I stayed “slow in my tracks” as I was “froze by my past”
“half my time” is makin “allibies” I “laughed n cried” “half my life”
before I “grasp the light” n “gasp in fright” of seein “blastin nines”
we “blastin like nasa” how we “crashin so fasta”
like a war up in our starz as we “blastin our blastaz”
“lights flyin by” my “life that I could die”
era of tribulation as all the “fights of war collide”
who knew we “clashed n thrashed” as the “aftermath”
of “laughin back” “at the past” but “after that”
we see, lights that “flash once” like G’s that “flash guns”
we shocked like unattractives when they “flash none”
one life of “lifetimes” one punished for “my crimes”
questionz asked, never answered, no single “life lines”
I’m “perplex in battlin off” keep my “vest n strappin on”
whos the “best in trackin rough” tires with nails that “tack ya tough”
I go away, with the A, then spray “two of K’s”
go back one step, before my shots clock, like “shootin J’s"
Godzfavourite, KlNG JOHN, Reality, Baybee Chronic and 226
Hehe there’s my name but I disagree that Weird Guy isn’t a good rapper it’s just the shit he raps doesn’t really translate to text that well but if it was audio it would sound hot
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Cause the nigga wear a kufi, it don’t mean that he bright/ Cause you don’t understand him it don’t mean that he nice/
It just means you don’t understand all the bullshit that he write/Is it “Oochie Wally Wally” or is it “One Mic”?
lookin from “watch-towers in “dark hours” my “heart showers”
“rain” that “frames” the “shame” I “gain” as a “part coward”
thru the “sharp plower” rolled “over like grass”
I stayed “slow in my tracks” as I was “froze by my past”
“half my time” is makin “allibies” I “laughed n cried” “half my life”
before I “grasp the light” n “gasp in fright” of seein “blastin nines”
we “blastin like nasa” how we “crashin so fasta”
like a war up in our starz as we “blastin our blastaz”
“lights flyin by” my “life that I could die”
era of tribulation as all the “fights of war collide”
who knew we “clashed n thrashed” as the “aftermath”
of “laughin back” “at the past” but “after that”
we see, lights that “flash once” like G’s that “flash guns”
we shocked like unattractives when they “flash none”
one life of “lifetimes” one punished for “my crimes”
questionz asked, never answered, no single “life lines”
I’m “perplex in battlin off” keep my “vest n strappin on”
whos the “best in trackin rough” tires with nails that “tack ya tough”
I go away, with the A, then spray “two of K’s”
go back one step, before my shots clock, like “shootin J’s”
lmfao you used the exact same beat I did
this was some real good shit though... keep up the good work
Weird____Guy wrote:
^that’s why I said name 'em. I’ll acknowledge them if they are... but I mean people who are on right now. Godzfavourite is long gone. And King John’s a different kind of rapper... he goes for punchlines, I go for flow. Same with 226 & babyee chronic. I haven’t really seen much of anything from Reality besides the shit on the last page so I can’t say...
Damn..i leave for a week or two and people already forgettin me...smh..and i already used that format beat in one of my tracks...called “Special Program”..but Weird Guy...i think u focus way too much on multies..they’re good for text but when your writing a song,u just need to flow and tell the story...multies make it harder to follow..I dont mean multies in general though,I’m talkin about using multie after multie..
--- My Fanbase Spans From Vans to Timbalands..- Lupe..the Illest
Weird____Guy wrote:
^that’s why I said name 'em. I’ll acknowledge them if they are... but I mean people who are on right now. Godzfavourite is long gone. And King John’s a different kind of rapper... he goes for punchlines, I go for flow. Same with 226 & babyee chronic. I haven’t really seen much of anything from Reality besides the shit on the last page so I can’t say...
Damn..i leave for a week or two and people already forgettin me...smh..and i already used that format beat in one of my tracks...called “Special Program”..but Weird Guy...i think u focus way too much on multies..they’re good for text but when your writing a song,u just need to flow and tell the story...multies make it harder to follow..I dont mean multies in general though,I’m talkin about using multie after multie..
lol I didn’t forget you I’m just talkin bout the people he mentioned
and yeah, I’d agree with you but when you not tellin a story (I wasn’t) then it’s fine to use a shitload of internals... whatever keeps the reader’s/listener’s interest. I don’t do that four multis per line shit when I’m tellin a story, though... don’t get me wrong.
Weird____Guy wrote:
^that’s why I said name 'em. I’ll acknowledge them if they are... but I mean people who are on right now. Godzfavourite is long gone. And King John’s a different kind of rapper... he goes for punchlines, I go for flow. Same with 226 & babyee chronic. I haven’t really seen much of anything from Reality besides the shit on the last page so I can’t say...
Damn..i leave for a week or two and people already forgettin me...smh..and i already used that format beat in one of my tracks...called “Special Program”..but Weird Guy...i think u focus way too much on multies..they’re good for text but when your writing a song,u just need to flow and tell the story...multies make it harder to follow..I dont mean multies in general though,I’m talkin about using multie after multie..
lol I didn’t forget you I’m just talkin bout the people he mentioned
and yeah, I’d agree with you but when you not tellin a story (I wasn’t) then it’s fine to use a shitload of internals... whatever keeps the reader’s/listener’s interest. I don’t do that four multis per line shit when I’m tellin a story, though... don’t get me wrong.
You dont keep my interest, your spits are annoying
Weird____Guy wrote:
^that’s why I said name 'em. I’ll acknowledge them if they are... but I mean people who are on right now. Godzfavourite is long gone. And King John’s a different kind of rapper... he goes for punchlines, I go for flow. Same with 226 & babyee chronic. I haven’t really seen much of anything from Reality besides the shit on the last page so I can’t say...
Damn..i leave for a week or two and people already forgettin me...smh..and i already used that format beat in one of my tracks...called “Special Program”..but Weird Guy...i think u focus way too much on multies..they’re good for text but when your writing a song,u just need to flow and tell the story...multies make it harder to follow..I dont mean multies in general though,I’m talkin about using multie after multie..
lol I didn’t forget you I’m just talkin bout the people he mentioned
and yeah, I’d agree with you but when you not tellin a story (I wasn’t) then it’s fine to use a shitload of internals... whatever keeps the reader’s/listener’s interest. I don’t do that four multis per line shit when I’m tellin a story, though... don’t get me wrong.
You dont keep my interest, your spits are annoying
And I really care because...? I’ll start listening when you elevate from rhyming “lard” with “hard” and not making much sense.
And I didn’t forget about you vintage.. if I was here before I wouldve mentioned me you and speakerzz
also i agree with vintage. you focus waay too much on multies.
Other shit I need to say:
Hazer shut the fuck up.
98 Supra .. umm.. you’re a n00b?
speakerzz thanks for the support.
We should make a n00b rap thread and put a password on this one. but its probably not possible.
--- "Met a blind rapper, said he my number one fan/ his fingers was blinkin like he could see through his hands/ when he’s as old as me, he’ll probably be a better man/ only 13, and just as nice as I am/ everything I can see, he can’t/ goddamn/ maybe everything I can’t see he can/" — Papoose
lookin from “watch-towers in “dark hours” my “heart showers”
“rain” that “frames” the “shame” I “gain” as a “part coward”
thru the “sharp plower” rolled “over like grass”
I stayed “slow in my tracks” as I was “froze by my past”
“half my time” is makin “allibies” I “laughed n cried” “half my life”
before I “grasp the light” n “gasp in fright” of seein “blastin nines”
we “blastin like nasa” how we “crashin so fasta”
like a war up in our starz as we “blastin our blastaz”
“lights flyin by” my “life that I could die”
era of tribulation as all the “fights of war collide”
who knew we “clashed n thrashed” as the “aftermath”
of “laughin back” “at the past” but “after that”
we see, lights that “flash once” like G’s that “flash guns”
we shocked like unattractives when they “flash none”
one life of “lifetimes” one punished for “my crimes”
questionz asked, never answered, no single “life lines”
I’m “perplex in battlin off” keep my “vest n strappin on”
whos the “best in trackin rough” tires with nails that “tack ya tough”
I go away, with the A, then spray “two of K’s”
go back one step, before my shots clock, like “shootin J’s”
lmfao you used the exact same beat I did
this was some real good shit though... keep up the good work
lol itz a hot beat, so I couldnt resist but to drop to it
i was all the way up at the front. i have mad good pics of him too. he played his hottest shit: the world is yours, one mic, street dreams, hate me now, ny state of mind, hustlers, made you look, oochie wally, if i ruled the world etc. during the concert, he said some shit like “if i ruled the world, i’d serve george bush’s head on a silver platter” hahaha
--- "Met a blind rapper, said he my number one fan/ his fingers was blinkin like he could see through his hands/ when he’s as old as me, he’ll probably be a better man/ only 13, and just as nice as I am/ everything I can see, he can’t/ goddamn/ maybe everything I can’t see he can/" — Papoose
.R.E.A.L.l.T.Y. wrote:
Aight, If I do resond this week/month il be under “shhhh”.
Pce.
Aight I guess I’ll go first hear a quick something
I can’t believe “WHAT YOU’RE TELLING ME” “HOW CAN YOU BE” a great “MC” /// You could chase the law book and never “CATCH A FELONY” /// I’ll {ENGRAVE} {MY NAME} on my bullets that’ll *BLOW TILL YOU’RE DEAD*///“BLOW TILL YOU’RE RED”///Blast your (CRANIUM) (WITH ONE) so my name will be the last thing that"ll *GOES THREW YOUR HEAD*///And if you still don’t"REMEMBER ME”/// I’ll run laps in your mind TO JOG YOU’RE MEMORY///I’m a rapper eater so I’ll devour you from your head “TO YOUR HIPS” “SPIT OUT YOUR LIPS”/// And even after I digest your body you still “WON’T BE SHIT!!!"///{LOOKY} I’ll “jet” with your jewelry and watch if you want to see *TIME FLY*///And just because you’re a {PUSSY} doesn’t mean you got *NINE LIVES*/// I ride with the “RUGGER AND MAGNUM” “SHOOT WITH THE HAND GUN” I aint got to “GRAM EM” “THE UZI HAS EM”///I’ll slam your head into the sidewalk to curb your “ENTHUSIASM”///
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Cause the nigga wear a kufi, it don’t mean that he bright/ Cause you don’t understand him it don’t mean that he nice/
It just means you don’t understand all the bullshit that he write/Is it “Oochie Wally Wally” or is it “One Mic”?
On The Page Im Street Smart/
I dont write..SILLY...i leak art/
If there where to be one... this would be the weak Part/
But you kno there aint so the rest gon be the sweet part/
I thought backwards..that thought ran a mile..and leaped back/
My profile stature is a upward direction like a steap stack/Deploid the shoulder arsenal to seek wack/
fix yourself a quick snack and please make it quick smart...
cause im nearin the sick part/
You kno when it was said that curiousity killed the cat/ the last i checked that wasnt neccessarily a correct fact/
cause it was you curious of my lifes acts/ and since im the cat who killed YOU... in essence it aint TRUE/
I asked you to get across your point of view, you refused and met the wrong end of snapped cue/ ha i guess i should have said i dont like pool??/
I bent the rules with a strip heater tongue and a mind that screws/ my vision with precision the thread grinds until your head wooze/ and blood cruise beyond you.. ending with red and white polka-dot shoes/
like the mailman im in a continous groove/
over and over returns to your letter box/
You claim control stepping in the “bigger shoes”..how come i own the better socks??/
My blind folds off so you better watch/
My concrete hood jewels outline my timepiece.. you would also claim the better watch/
but hood jewels stop time.. seconds in the right hand/
we work in perfect coalition like dog and man/
i hustle bitch you jus flog and scam/
a fake man with fake hands and fake tan/
god sake man... lords name in vein.. the needle in your palm/
you see the connection..neglect your body on the intersection/
and leave on the windscreen your reflection//////
ITs Mac i aint be on this shit for a real long time... R.E.A.L.I.T.Y and others should remember me from tha old forum lol
anyways holla at me!
--- "I Steam Roll Your Whole Crew...Fuck Your Fashion Shoot.. You Couldnt See Me If You Drank A Tank Of Carrot Juice"
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