--- why Did my soldierz have to die/told ya that my soldierz were born to die/krayzie bone ask what you gone do wen judgement comes for u/why must da yung die yung/why must da surviuors turn in2 killers/shoot wrong it culd be an innocent child next time/all im sayin is put down ur nine/
New Tricks wrote:
cool man what you think of my raps
I like them
alot.
Rogue be bitching saying ima noob
oh an thanks man at least someone likes them
your raps are nice to
--- why Did my soldierz have to die/told ya that my soldierz were born to die/krayzie bone ask what you gone do wen judgement comes for u/why must da yung die yung/why must da surviuors turn in2 killers/shoot wrong it culd be an innocent child next time/all im sayin is put down ur nine/
ban us for what writing raps damn thats low i thought thats what ya did on this site right. thats all ive done is write ryhmes ive started nothing im playing it smooth man.
--- why Did my soldierz have to die/told ya that my soldierz were born to die/krayzie bone ask what you gone do wen judgement comes for u/why must da yung die yung/why must da surviuors turn in2 killers/shoot wrong it culd be an innocent child next time/all im sayin is put down ur nine/
--- "Met a blind rapper, said he my number one fan/ his fingers was blinkin like he could see through his hands/ when he’s as old as me, he’ll probably be a better man/ only 13, and just as nice as I am/ everything I can see, he can’t/ goddamn/ maybe everything I can’t see he can/" — Papoose
Your flow is off. Don’t be pissed, you asked for a fair vote. Your punches are ok, but your flow is really weird.
--- "Met a blind rapper, said he my number one fan/ his fingers was blinkin like he could see through his hands/ when he’s as old as me, he’ll probably be a better man/ only 13, and just as nice as I am/ everything I can see, he can’t/ goddamn/ maybe everything I can’t see he can/" — Papoose
I still dont get how people know how it flows just by reading it. In my mind and the way Im sayin it, it flows. Read half of eminems shit and it doesn’t seem like it would flow but when u listen to it it flows great.
This rap let it unfurl
I get it on ma nerve let it unfurl
Try as u grow old down dude
I battle as much as I can
U know ma life is insane sometimes
I try to get that shit outtta ma mind at times
u can neva revert or set a burb
Like a loose cannon firing from ur back standing
I ain’ got no skills ma friends sometimes say
As I walk wastin’ ma time to make way till its day fame
Dis’ rap gotta lot into ma mind yes I ain’t gonna deny it
So freak am gone to the fan of Eminem I take bravery
To stand and rap to do some freestyle crap
That’s insane I say may be one day I’ll make ma day to fame
Let’s take dis a short for dis is jus a rap concert to fun ‘em out
I take one glance to dis neva ending crowd
Make ma mouth glitter wid fear to stand behind fo’ a freestyle match
But one last stab I get to make ma catch
All u mutha’fucker’s gonna get some push back when am goin’ to the stage of ma ransome gateway
I take dis opportunity to rap ma game to fame
Let me hold it dis life gave no sad or hurtin’ memory
Until that bitch came on a hurdle rivalry
I couldn’t get it out but yes am tryin’ to yo
Sometimes I feel dis life ain’t got no shit as its comin’ from a bomb of bitch
As u all know dese bitch come n go
Who care who fuck’d who
Dis is less rappin from ma life itself comin’ out like a freesytle quad
Whenever they aske’d fo shit I gav’ ma whole dam stud
Try to open d bottle to have a fist down her head
Am a rapper to d core doin fuckin’ hate shit on her face!
But u go find there yo find no trace
I make ma place get an embrace to face a game chase
I don hesitate to take them big ride
Cheatin’ those bitch is a big time game fo’ tem’
I spit shit on those bitch to change ace
Like a loose lace gonna get a trip on the stud’ face bitch wont get at yo taste
Let take dis fuck’in shit outta d rap game
Man I need a break fo dis muthafuckin’ bitch
Dey all need shit on der face all means necessary right
Get a created muthaass for ‘er shoot straight at ‘er head to taste blood fight
I gave everything wat I had to dat bitch who worked wid another guy in n out psych
I wont approach shit these bitches has no option to show there ass
Kiss fucked up day everyway I ain’t gonna be happy nothing’ big enough fo’ dem
These bitchs played around ma life making me psychic am been cursed to
why don’t those bitch take a pimp juice for a killa’ stew’
As there parents have no stud to work fo another bitch?
I try to question those muthafuckas’ aint got no pimp fo her daughter bitch that she is
It ‘s mean and unfair to work out wid thse as they have no ass strip shit
yeh i agree, Read Eminem’s lyrics, and they sound wack, but listen to the song, and he flows it sweet.
Rogue, we were all shit at some time. wether it was when you started on this site, or it was when u were 5.
--- My Heads Full Of Ideas, My Aim Is Divine//
Soon To Be High As Fuck, As Cocaine And Weed Combine//
Your 'Flows' are as 'tight' as my Dick in the “OCEAN”// When i 'Write' all 'night' my head gets in the “MOTION”// The threat of gunning you down wasnt a 'Preconceived Notion”// It was just an attempt to show my “Love and Devotion'// haha...naaa...im 'Just Jokin'// I guess my 'Brain' must be “BROKEN!"// From all the 'Cocaine' ive been “SMOKIN”// The only thing that 'Remains' is this big bag of 'POT!'// Blow out your 'BRAINS' and leave you there to “ROT!"// 'BLOOD STAINS' on the wall, That nigga 'Spread'// One Bullet through the 'head', That nigga 'dead'// You can tell by the 'Red', That nigga 'Bled'// And im ending this spit with the words...'I Never Fled'//
--- My Heads Full Of Ideas, My Aim Is Divine//
Soon To Be High As Fuck, As Cocaine And Weed Combine//
--- "Met a blind rapper, said he my number one fan/ his fingers was blinkin like he could see through his hands/ when he’s as old as me, he’ll probably be a better man/ only 13, and just as nice as I am/ everything I can see, he can’t/ goddamn/ maybe everything I can’t see he can/" — Papoose
This rap let it unfurl
I get it on ma nerve let it unfurl
Try as u grow old down dude
I battle as much as I can
U know ma life is insane sometimes
I try to get that shit outtta ma mind at times
u can neva revert or set a burb
Like a loose cannon firing from ur back standing
I ain’ got no skills ma friends sometimes say
As I walk wastin’ ma time to make way till its day fame
Dis’ rap gotta lot into ma mind yes I ain’t gonna deny it
So freak am gone to the fan of Eminem I take bravery
To stand and rap to do some freestyle crap
That’s insane I say may be one day I’ll make ma day to fame
Let’s take dis a short for dis is jus a rap concert to fun ‘em out
I take one glance to dis neva ending crowd
Make ma mouth glitter wid fear to stand behind fo’ a freestyle match
But one last stab I get to make ma catch
All u mutha’fucker’s gonna get some push back when am goin’ to the stage of ma ransome gateway
I take dis opportunity to rap ma game to fame
Let me hold it dis life gave no sad or hurtin’ memory
Until that bitch came on a hurdle rivalry
I couldn’t get it out but yes am tryin’ to yo
Sometimes I feel dis life ain’t got no shit as its comin’ from a bomb of bitch
As u all know dese bitch come n go
Who care who fuck’d who
Dis is less rappin from ma life itself comin’ out like a freesytle quad
Whenever they aske’d fo shit I gav’ ma whole dam stud
Try to open d bottle to have a fist down her head
Am a rapper to d core doin fuckin’ hate shit on her face!
But u go find there yo find no trace
I make ma place get an embrace to face a game chase
I don hesitate to take them big ride
Cheatin’ those bitch is a big time game fo’ tem’
I spit shit on those bitch to change ace
Like a loose lace gonna get a trip on the stud’ face bitch wont get at yo taste
Let take dis fuck’in shit outta d rap game
Man I need a break fo dis muthafuckin’ bitch
Dey all need shit on der face all means necessary right
Get a created muthaass for ‘er shoot straight at ‘er head to taste blood fight
I gave everything wat I had to dat bitch who worked wid another guy in n out psych
I wont approach shit these bitches has no option to show there ass
Kiss fucked up day everyway I ain’t gonna be happy nothing’ big enough fo’ dem
These bitchs played around ma life making me psychic am been cursed to
why don’t those bitch take a pimp juice for a killa’ stew’
As there parents have no stud to work fo another bitch?
I try to question those muthafuckas’ aint got no pimp fo her daughter bitch that she is
It ‘s mean and unfair to work out wid thse as they have no ass strip shit
Shit AS still hasn’t responded to the audio diss I sent him
man i’m about to delete that video... shoo..
this cat challenged me but he doesn’t even respond..