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wtf? Why am I BANNED?

AznSkillz NLI

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I tried posting something and it said..
I need to log in and stuff.. or this user is already
taken.. so I logged out and tried logging back in and it
says im banned? what for?

Nihilus

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Green Ninja is going on a banning spree

AznSkillz NLI

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damnit man..

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I kno, dats y i said it >.>

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Get ready for the lyrical massacre/
Waste a whole clip on you cause I got gats to burns/
And I don’t really care if it’s fully or semi/
As long as it’s automatic I don’t need my crew to run with me/
I hate these niggas that always want to fight like Bobby and Whitney
But my punch backs more power than an engine that’s hemi/
So I suggest you take it slow and lay low/
And if you fuck with me you better have on more armor than that dude from Halo/
Cause if don’t spray slow/
You don’t have to go to church but I suggest you pray though/
Cause I aint an angel
Those are horns it aint a halo/
Like on your mark get set ready go/
100 bars and running niggas now you know/
I’ll pepper your block have you doing more than sneezing/
I’m the King bitch just ask Stephen/
Or I’ll rearrange your face like Extreme Makeover/
This aint Jay Hova but it is the Take Over/
I come fully equipped just like the Range Rover/
I’ll just tell you like Flip that this is your game over, now/
So I suggest you bow down and give me the crown/
Or I’ll introduce you to the trey pound and make you frown/
Be like Roy Jones JR. best pound for pound/
Do it like Cannibus but knock you out in the first round/
It won’t even make it to the second/
I can see fucking with me is making your life hectic/
Just listen to me kid and heed my advice/
Don’t use my name in vain if you cherish your life/
Don’t bite off more than you can chew control your portions/
Or I’ll murk you and your boa and turn your kids to orphans/
But I don’t want to do that cause I’m just the new cat/
So for now I’ll relax and put down my twin gats/
But if you push me I’ll react and you’ll end up with a smack/
My rhymes are addictive I got you fiending like crack/
Shoot you once in the shoulder and really make you lean back/
I aint got a cause and you know I’m a rebel/
Making a deal with me is like selling your soul to the devil/
Not quite Illmatic but on Nas’s level/
If hip hop was my ride I keep my foot on the pedal/
Stay with my foot on the gas keep on burning that rubber/
I stay with the twin gats so now you in double trouble/
My rhymes are like crack so I’ll just let the shit bubble
I’ll reload and explode you to outer space like the Hubble/
I got my little friend with me I don’t need security/
I’ll treat you like Alec Trubec and put your life in Jeopardy/
Aint got to get my hands dirty I got niggas that will blast for me/
And you’re spitting against a god so your lyrics are blasphemy/
I see you’re envious getting more green than a tree/
And the rocks on my wrists are worth at least half a key/
I just put an end to 50 bars now nigga lets see/
What I got in store for the next 50/
I can see yall are wanksters niggas got me quoting fifty/
Cause you know If I can’t do it it can’t be done/
They say you live by the gun you die by the gun/
So if that’s true I suggest you get a second one/
It don’t matter Christian Buddhist Islamic or Hindu/
You can pray all you want but death’s gonna get you/
But until that day I’m gonna play and get my pay/
Just call me a pit-bull cause every dog has its day/
So when my opportunity comes I’m gonna grab it/
And if you get in my way I’m gonna ravage and damage/
Your whole fucking crew/
They’ll think you’re a crip the way I’ll make your face turn blue/
The heater will heat you up then make your body turn cold/
Leave you looking like one of the back up dancers in the Thriller video/
Anything to get that money live it up like a baller/
Like 50 I’m Infatuated by the power of a dollar/
But you don’t need 50 I’ll teach you how to rob just ask/
Cause it aint got to be Halloween for me to put on a mask/
Aint not trick or treat nigga just give me your cash/
When it comes to a shoot outs I react like the flash/
I’m the best so don’t test me/
Cause the only way you surviving is if the police arrest me/
And when they come make sure they bring back up/
And don’t run cause the shots out of an AK will tear your back up/
Always stay with a vendetta if you bust I bust back/
Whether on the road alone or at home I stay strapped/
Cause niggas won’t hesitate to put a bullet in your ass/
So I just meditate and wait for the time to break their face like glass/
I don’t even break a sweat when I rhyme this shit come easy/
Like ABC 123/
I’m just a natural like my last name Redford/
I got these rap niggas following me like a flock to a shepherd/
You aint ahead of me nigga get to the back of the line/
My rhymes paralyze niggas like a shot to the spine/
And in no time/
I’m gonna be on the top of the rap game/
Sipping champagne/
And popping the bubbly/
Making hits like rugby/
Always stay cool even when shit get ugly/
When the shot pop off it’ll get you jumping like a kangaroo/
The difference between life and death is up to you/
But if you’ll end up dead if you make the wrong choice/
They’ll have to burry you in a hole deeper than Mutombo’s voice/
I’m the only MVP these other niggas aint important/
They getting out of jail early for being police informants/
And scary to think that most of talent remains dormant/
Just like an infant I’m waiting for my rap mind to keep forming/
But when my mind fully develops/
I’m not gonna just concentrate on my state the whole game I’m gonna envelop/
I’m tired of these other rappers their lines got me dieing of boredom/
But even after I’m dead I’m be rhyming postmortem/
Spit a hot 16 while I’m laying in the hearse/
The MVP on my block an all-star like Converse/
I don’t know what’s worse/
Your verse or the car you ride/
All my money is dirty like it come from the south side/
Nigga I’ll come to you house and bust through your door/
Shots ring out so hit the floor/
Leaving bullets holes in the windows and the walls/
My flow got more bite than Jaws/
My talent’s untapped like meat it’s raw/
I’m gonna give the rap game a taste of my pimp hand/
Sell out tours and go in the stands to see my fans/
I’ll go into the crowd like the Malice in the Palace/
If you drop the rocks I’ll rebound them like Wallace/
Sign I deal like he did with the Bulls/
Seven figures guaranteed just for killing you fools/
Now that’s an offer I can’t refuse/
Coming out the club with bitches two by two/
If you need help then nigga get a clue/
People keep on quoting my lines I hear them over and over like I’m having de cha vu/
Roses are reds and crips are blue/
If I see you on the block alone your brains is going to be on your shoe/
So I suggest you lay low if you aint with your crew/
My flow’s like weed it will get you high/
Aint nobody as fly as I/
I do math with my money and multiply/
Any rappers better than me? No reply/
If you said yes I hope you know it’s a sin to lie/

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woah that is way too long for my attention span... i read the first 4 lines and it wasnt spectacular so i didnt finish.
I got little time so ima keep this short
itll be a shitty rhyme so come back with a retort
I got regents to study for, past chem, now spanish
My sympathy goes out far, for Skillz that got banished
I have to read up on flamenco and Seville
I fucking hate Spanish on the 10th grade level
Screw notes, textbooks, I’m just gonna wing it
Fuck the teacher, this test “fucking BRING IT”

ARGGGGGGGGGH SPANISH my most hated subject….
wish me luck on this shitty regents exam

AznSkillz NLI

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Jee.. now I gotta post like this lol..

I wonder what happened to that guy that was pretending to
be Big Red.. lol.. ever since I responded to him he never
said anything back.

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shit is dead haha

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My version of the recent Nas song... (only 1 verse)

yo,

as Nas be preachin on black zombies, kaffir’s moms be/
pawning belongings for stamps while dafta blonds be//
flaunting to the nearest ambercrombies, long we’ve/
been subjugated to inequity, now wait a second g//
y’all been ages free from slavery, savor the/
fragrance of fresh baked igorance from Your Black Muslim Bakery//
hangin free in the air from an oak tree; yet only/
when you’ve choked the black press is when you’ve choked me//
don’t be countin ya chickens; I’ve been out in the buisness/
one month, now that sun’s up; what you doin now//
pigeons surroundin the benches; crumbsnatchas/
run afta some stray cracka like we do//
see who’s the animal? killin our own like cannibals/
guzzlin Sams in full 40s while baggin fish like salmon rolls//
damn it’s bullshit, this whole shtick bout don’t be scared to pull it/
it ain’t like the bullet identifies the culprit//
hold it steady, empty the full clip, be ready/
to disappear, gs won’t care; their conscious muddled by hits of beer//
gs don’t fear repercussions, already in deeper dumb shit/
somethin ain’t right; thugs jumpin late nights, gunmen lay tykes//
on the streets like common niggas, they ma made ramen dinners/
and ain’t had the heart to dump em out, young men doubt//
the power of one action; some black men even say we have been/
bred and tamed; how else would we let human dogfights happen//

speakerzz nli

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^^^^^^

i can tell you worked hard on that considering you almost mimicked nas’s style to the t. its pretty good but i feel like something’s off with the rhythm considering nas’s lines are short and succinct. his rhyming style is unique. most of the time, the last word of one line will immediately rhyme with a word in the middle of the next line..but he flows so smoothly, that you cant really hear the rhyme until you listen to his tracks again. good shit nevertheless.

and what song is this to. several have leaked already. just curious cuz im a nas fan

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let me give this a try
let me spit somethin' and just give a reply
so fresh and so clean i spit listerine
downin' mickeys till i’m gone, thinkin' i’m the king
like burger king, i’ll always have it my way
wanna find me, i’m off the 805 freeway
i’m done... gtg, sorry

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It’s based on “N.I.G.G.E.R. (The Slave And The Master)" but the beat is “Starwars” (another Nas track). just search it in youtube.

thanks for the feed

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Damn...You’re a really good writer...seems like you’re trying to be Nas though or sounding a little bit like Lupe when he raps about something dark...This part was the best though

while dafta blonds be//
flaunting to the nearest ambercrombies, long we’ve/
been subjugated to inequity, now wait a second g//
y’all been ages free from slavery, savor the/
fragrance of fresh baked igorance from Your Black Muslim Bakery//
hangin free in the air from an oak tree; yet only/
when you’ve choked the black press is when you’ve choked me//

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its da truth, i’m the light in the booth
bring the mic in cause im excitin the youth
like a titan im incitin the feud
who am i to reply wit the cold fo five
it aint no lie, wit my sly remarks, i throw those lines
sometimes i find it blindin, the game hard like a diamond
every time i try 2 climb it, someone comes from behind meh
im stuck in my path, strapped wit the mac
constantly rhyming 2 relax my cats

heyyohey

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http://forums.hiphopave.net/showthread.php?p=513279

i found that rap by weird guy there

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Look in my profile, then read the about section... see what interesting piece of information you find.

Last edited 26 Jun 2008 06:21 pm by Weird____Guy

heyyohey

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my bad man

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lol its fine... its good that theres people lookin out for biters... but I aint one of 'em

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Here’s the 2nd verse which I’m still working on:

Stable income’s a fable in slums, able in/
capacitated it don’t matter, just spin some fabricated//
horse shit and you’ve just dodged affirmative action/
like afghan women to learn to live maskin displeasure’s//
the black man’s burden, spurred into crime afta crime/
cause thats where the money is; what’s funny is how as the time//
passes by I’ve come to realize that once you steal pride/
from a community the unity is stretched thin, this lesson//
vital to black survival, more important than the B.I.B.L.E./
fuck rivalries; why kill me when you could be killin the racists//
that place us in shitty places n jaces; aint this the point of/
resistance?