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another its called theres no other its not new but i added a few lines so check it and send feedback




There aint no other MC that can rap like me

And its just bout time that everyone sees

Im the illest freestyler so u must remember me

My rhymes are like jesus theyll set u free

Ya souls trapped in a cage

Ya hearts full of rage

Wanting revenge

Breakin the joints of hinge

Its not pretend

This is the real thing

Kasanova is here

You better start to fear

Im the new kid in tha city

Showin nobody pity

your rhymes so shity

Im the king of rap

Like lebron in basketball

Battle me and forsure ull fall

U gotta make that call

To step up or back down

I run this shit like a circus runs clowns

Viscious words runnin up tha spot

I ran the streets until i got caught

I got one life to live one life to give

Im gunna give it my all

im here and i stand 6 feet tall

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ay yall i need help on recording a mixtape can u all give me pointers on how to record music like wat shud i use to record it iight

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TIME 2 CHANGE UP AGAIN,THIS IS ONE 4 THE LADIES.(PiMpIn).......................Let me talk 2u 4 a minute/Startin off sayin R u WIT IT/My intentions i wanna know can i HIT IT/Standin over there lookin like a movie star i’ve 2 ADMIT IT/Had 2 get yo 7 digits 4 some HOT CONVERSATION/That a have yo heart RACEIN/that got me PACEIN/Thinkin about our late night SEXUAL RELATIONS/Exchangin some FUCC FACES/Like neo i’m caught in THE MATRIX/I refuse 2 lose let’s FACE IT/U want it like i WANT IT/So let’s DO what it DO/Bacc 2 my room where i’m UNDRESSIN U/Lookin at that pretty BUTTERFLY TATTOO/Jus call me DR.FEEL GOOD/Wit that GROWN MAN WOOD/That a make U FEEL GOOD// THAT SUM SLICC SHIT....FROM THA NU KING KONG............................

Last edited 28 Jul 2008 12:59 pm by J REMYBREED

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lookin for feedback so lets hear it hit up the PM

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yo visualize this.. if you could live in a palace, and every housekeeper, nurse, and chef was a bad bitch, but you always had ya wifey to fall back with, and cabinets full of spliffs and fountans of cris,

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ay yall i need some feedbacc on ma raps hit me up on tht PM iight?

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Ever since i was hot dem thugs and gangstas been quick to hit up my spot.
now every week its a miracle people like me cuz im magically lyrical.
in the past they said i was delerious.
now they wanna shake my hand cuz im gettin money serious.

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in the past they said i had no chance.
now them hoes is quick to rip off my pants.

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wow that was surprisingly weak lol

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hypocrite

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hypocrite????? just tellin him that his raps aint tht good he needs some work thts all im sayin

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ha wow.. what’s been going on in here? people callin each other hypocrite and shit.. psh..

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i no man i mean its rap ur either good or not and tht^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ was definitly not lol

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so many people in this world tryin 2 rap/ im sitting here and startin to tap/ a beat 2 myself 2 get myself goin/ yeah im a girl but i ain into sewin/ theres 2 much crap they say i cant do/ but once i get started im gonna impress u/ i try never to doubt what im capable of/ if u get in my way im willing to shove/ i aint here 2 play/ so if u got somethin 2 say/ say it 2 my face/ or ill go get the mace/ cause im not gonna let u get in my way/ of somethin im tryin 2 do today


tell me what u think its my first freestyle

Last edited 24 Jul 2008 03:19 pm by Ductape23

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Hey Everyone theres a YOUTUBE CYPHER! check this shit out
this is me spitting for the youtube cypher if ya’ll wanna get in this you gotta get called out by someone but check this shit yo.

Last edited 24 Jul 2008 03:25 pm by AznSkillz

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Ya’ll should check out this Cypher on youtube heres the Rules and shit..

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aye lookin for some feedbac lets hear it ppl

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garbage.
im not hatin but you gotta do better than that. its already better than most n00bs.

Aznskillz nli

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rogue you talkin to me?

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no. well yes but that was at kasanova.

yo chekc my facebook loser thread lolol zucas fails