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yea leave some feedbacc on that shit yall

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Yo wuddup???wheere u been??

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Aye2 face is back~!

Now all we need is skillz101, Godzfav and haze.

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WUT UP^ YALL

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Verse to Art of Storytelling Pt 1 (keystyle)

“The Tragedy”
sometimes i think back,reminisce bout the times//
that we used to spend,just thinkin bout our lives//
arguing over who would live longer//
constant fights about whose dad was stronger//
im on the go like green lights,but it seems like,//
my show jus cant flow to these heights//
or these depths, see the thing about steps//
is they go either way,but it never is direct//
quite complex,even if u asked a genius//
most likely he wouldnt know how to get the task completed//
it comes down to the ground that you plant your feet in//
the foundation that you found,or that you’re seekin//
see life’s about dreamin,nightmares too//
cuz it aint all butterflies when the sky’s blue//
i dont care if you think im really “out there”//
cuz you probably want what I have,but you’re just too scared//
to admit it,might lose your status//
as a cool guy or girl,but the thing about the world,//
is if you just mix in,you’ll be no more than average//

Hook:
actually,it saddens me..//
another teen lost to the tragedy//

Last edited 30 Jul 2008 10:28 pm by Vintage

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breathin some fuckin life back to this thread

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I ride my bike wherever I go
When I’m on the sidewalk I put on a show
Cause u know i be doin' bunny hops
and when i do 'um i do 'um in front of the shops
and when i do 'um i do 'um in front of the cops
and then im prayin' i dont get stopped
cause i ride my bike wherever i go
and when i ride I’m on the red dyno

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^^^^^wack ass line^^^^^ hahahahahaha ridin ya bike niiiiiiice line i do um when i do um when i do um when i do um shit wack ass artist stfu iight u dont need to be rappin wit wack lines like that

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haha bike rap was too gay

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lookin for feedback on the duos so u all needa get to it

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A little bit beyond terrible...

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nova and kyreee duo hit up the feedback



nova-

kyree and nova back on tha streets
takin control of tha crazy mad beats
us lyrical assassins we sho no mercy
we go so hard we make hershey black whiter than rice
if you step up theres gunna be a price
we takin heads bounty raisin
i just cant help it we assassins amazin
our microphones be blazin
sparks of fire



kyree-

all eyes on me
the ill emcee known as kyree
puttin all rappers behind me
lyrical assassins out day and night
youll never find us cuz were always outta sight
we runnin from the cops theyll never find us
so to all you pussy rappers betta not try us
call us the outshinas cuz we outshine the competition


nova

to all these lil haters yhou must call me sier
cuz im makin it higher than youll ever dream to be
dont step on my hood cuz you wont ever be free dont you see
my flow is too hot im tearin up the spot
takin shots to the heart will surley tear you apart
dont stand up to me youll get knocked down
no matter how wack this shit sounds
ill run you like mayors run towns


kyree

Last seen at the scene of the crime
i got all wack rappers and theyll never be found
bound and gagged on my basement floor
my raps are hotter than the earth’s core
leavin the scene wit gore and blood
dragged the body through the mud
makin em feel the thud when the body drops
lyrical assassin and my flow cant be topped

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nova and kyree duo hit up the feedback



were the rap kings everything we make is marquee
your raps are stale like that of a smartee
smartees are wack were commin with the attack
so just face the fact that were back
with this metephorical lyrical smack
on the attack
find us in the shrubs
holdin up that c showin luv for tha cuz
and all the otha fuckas can get hit by the buzz
we do it for our cuz
were the kings for this now
bringin the lyrical smackdown
motha fuckas betta bring us our crowns
we on tha scene now
there aint no one betta
kyree and nova yea we make that chedda
call us chester the cheeta
cuz we hold them stacks and we be fast to beatcha
were here and we bring the golden featchas
youl find us on the block cuz u kno where to meet us
this is the name of the game aint no other rappers tha same
we bring every lil ni**a fortune and fame
or hurtin in pain dependin on tha attitude that you bring
fuck with us youll wake up next morning in a sling
cuz we lyrical assassins stoppin miracles from happenin
best watch ya necks cuz we lookin to snap em
we ride with tha 24 inch rim
we fuck hoes that give betta head than lil kim
makin so much money we get 24K gems
this is why we hotter than mims
we shine why your light dims
blastin lyrics in this cypher till this shit blends
we puttin rappers in submission
put em in hospital beds needing tubes for nutrition
you kno we on this mission
fuckin errbodies vision
livin like an outlaw makin bitches fall
im standin tall full of might
lyrical haunted house givin rappers tha fright
like mayweather in a fight we undefeted
best not mess with us now cuz our guns they heated
step up to us and youll get yo ass seated
itl feel like a dream like yo ass was weeded
wakin up from ya dream so it may seem
our flow is mad crazy
it makes ya brain hazy
not able to think straight
cuz our rhymes to heavy
buy tented chevys and dont forget them gmc’s
we doin drive bys on all wack mc’s
goin hard all tha time
so sit back and enjoy the rhyme
got heads turnin like they just commited a crime
fuck you up worse than bein frontline

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Seriously...drop feed on something that’s worth it

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yea that wasnt our best one but we have a better one up btw

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love the hook. nice lyrics too.

who’s kyree and kasanova?

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No idea..I’m thinking its either the same person or they know each other offline...check our collab out..I posted it up

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JUS LIKE MICKEY D’S I KEEP IT 100 PROOF/IT’S JUS WHAT I DO/I’MMA A DAMN FOOL&I KNOW HOW 2 KEEP IT COOL 2/A ALBAMA ALIEN FROM THE PLANET PLUTO/BIG LIKE BLUTO/THAT’S WHY I’M SO COLD ON THE MIC/U KNOW,THEY KNOW CUS I DO SO/EVERYDAY I SEE MOE IN THA NYC ON THE CORNER PLAYIN CE-LO/GETTIN MY DOE UP/WHETHER IT BE DICE OR THA M.I.C. JREMY IS MY NAME/DIS ME I’MMA GET AT YO DAME/BE HAVIN HER SCREAMIN MY NAME/I DON’T PLAY NO GAME JUS WANT THE FAME/I REALLY DON’T CARE IF THESE LYRICS ARE LAME/I’M SPEAKIN THE TRUTH IF U DON’T FEEL IT THAN U SHOULDN’T BE IN THE BOOTH/U SHOULD BE SHOT,THIS SHIT RIGHT HERE IS HOT OFF THE TOP/IN THE SPOT WHEN ITS ROCCS/WHEN THE BASS DROPS/BITCHES FLOCC WHEN MY CHAIN SPARKS/HALF OF NIGGAS WANNA LIVE THE BOSSES LIFE BUT JUS AS POE AS ME/SO POUR IT UP 4 MY NIGGA PIMP C/ALL I GOT IS THIS MONEY ON MY MIND BEST BELIEVE I’M SHINE/IT AIN’T GOTTA RHYME ALL THE TIME/DECODE MY MUSIK OR LOSE IT//

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we no each other offline lol we were jus chyperin up in ohio and came up wit those 2 things the first wasnt our best but the second was

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Your First was Shit And Your Second Is Worse//
Looks Like You Two Nigga’s Will End Up In A Hearse!//
Im Spraying Clips And Representing A Curse//
And I Had Your Mums Screamin Like They Givin Birth!//
Had My Trainer Screamin 'Give 'em All There Worth'//
As I Pounded Both There Heads Into The 'EARTH!'//


Really Bored..Free to Kyree and Nova.

Last edited 02 Aug 2008 02:40 am by Rap Superstar