| 07 Sep 2008 04:04 am |
sensfan Guest | I wrote it myself and I dont battle. | |
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| 07 Sep 2008 04:10 am |
sensfan Guest | my fists are tight
like i’m ready to fight
maybe i’ll give you my version of good night
that was an intro to something else i’m starting btw writing raps are great to get things out of your mind. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 04:14 am |
FUCK SUPRA Rep: 72  Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 16,748 ONLINE | lol, ok, good night ---
I’ll smack a bitch | |
| 07 Sep 2008 04:14 am |
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| 07 Sep 2008 09:52 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 25  Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 1,111 OFFLINE | Vintage wrote:
GoDzMaRiNe wrote:
226 vs Vintage -
It is currently 12:00AM
You both get 24 hours to spit, none of this 1 week shit.
Umm..This is my tournament haha..I make the rules,judges vote..stay in your place
Speakerzzz vs Rogue
Vintage vs 226
Verses are due Wednesday..cuz im not sure what schedules r like for u guys,i personally got no more time on weekdays...BTW,for now on,its double elimination..Once these battles are over,I’ll explain the new stipulation
It should take 10minutes tops? Your giving everyone 72hours to spit 10minutes?
Okkie dokkie dude. --- I train myself to fight an army, so no man can break meDMX wrote:
Made me a leader before I was ready to lead, Took away my hunger but didn’t give me greed.
 Last edited 07 Sep 2008 09:53 am by .x.X.GoDzMaRiNe.X.x. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 10:46 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 25  Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 1,111 OFFLINE | My name is Godzmarine,
Hottest Game ever seen, fuck it - ever been- Styles fresh like an “april scene”- I cut paper like how a “staple lean” - Im sweet’ness I spit maple all over the screen- Im the unmistakable been - untraceable teen- Only cat to spit -Hawt flows with cold words- and hit thirds -inbetween- while rippin up “back spleens”- dayum / I “chop minds” and “drop finds” when I “stop time”, I spit colours into words to “top blinds” - have rainbows appearing in lines -shiit!/ I cant take it! I get verbals clogging in my brain - I blow hurdles when im jogging in my lane! -i Open my mouth and groan when I glow in pain- I spit flows which are nothin less then insane- I ripple clouds and spit holy water when im rolling n flowing in game- like im rolling in iced out chain- I eat rappers- that includes Lil wayne- haha --- I train myself to fight an army, so no man can break meDMX wrote:
Made me a leader before I was ready to lead, Took away my hunger but didn’t give me greed.
 Last edited 07 Sep 2008 10:48 am by .x.X.GoDzMaRiNe.X.x. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 10:48 am |
Oderint Dum Metuant Rep: 105  Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 37,501 ONLINE | Man, stop. Seriously. That was killer. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 11:23 am |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 20  Joined: 30 Nov 2007 Posts: 1,273 OFFLINE | can you quote the posts with the votes in them? cause i dont see godzmarine’s. --- "Death is inevitable... Welcome it as a friend, and it can’t be your enemy”
What I wouldn’t give to start over... | |
| 07 Sep 2008 12:07 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 25  Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 1,111 OFFLINE | Darth Nihilus wrote:
Man, stop. Seriously. That was killer.
Haha
Rogue wrote:
can you quote the posts with the votes in them? cause i dont see godzmarine’s.
GoDzMaRiNe wrote:
.2.2.6. wrote:
Sum real shit homie, you “try to be smart”
i crowbar, ya locked doors, n “pry you apart”
he claim he a God? but “in his position”
no one worships him, no one’s “in his religion”
you a pussy, claimin dog, cant “write for shit”
u keep barkin lika dog, I play “Micheal Vick”
50’s ya favorite rapper, you “ridin his meat”
lickin his snicker bar, till you “swallow his skeet”
must be too dark in the closet, think you “shinin on me”
guess you n 50 alike, both ya “styles are cheap”
he from queens? think he king? dont “hope for the throne”
Ima king, you a jester cuz ya “flow is a joke”
ya spit lika “whiny kid” but you cant “play with shiners”
too much doo-doo in ya stench, someone “change his diapers!"
who he kiddin? virgin rookie! you “think you a playa?"
ya lil worm cant fit in girls, it cant “fit in a crater!"
only time he “stroked” was when he had a “heart attack”
fearin me, with ya corny voice makin “retarded tracks”
you not ghetto, you aint “higher in game”
when I said 9 milimeter, he thought it was the “size of his thang!"
I play Jesus in this funeral n “come back to life”
I drop bombs bitch! who you think you “come at with a knife?"
you still beatin to magazines, he “likes seein thongs”
what you takin to the “cleaners” is ya “white stained draws”
That was hawt
I gotta admit that was one of the hotter drops Ive seen on this thread lately.
My votes for 226.
Rogue has a nice flow and pretty good punchlines but overall 226 beat him just by an inch or two.
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Rogue you had some nice punchlines and a nice flow but the whole spit was a bit choppy. The appearance says “rushed” instead of “professional” (lower caps, spaced lines etc..).
If you made the whole spit come together you would of had a better chance but 226 had better punchlines, a better flow and appearance.
Though 226 only rhymed in every two lines and then switched the ending verbal.
Anyways good battle;
226 : “8”
Rogue: “6" --- I train myself to fight an army, so no man can break meDMX wrote:
Made me a leader before I was ready to lead, Took away my hunger but didn’t give me greed.
 Last edited 07 Sep 2008 12:29 pm by .x.X.GoDzMaRiNe.X.x. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 12:19 pm |
Oderint Dum Metuant Rep: 105  Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 37,501 ONLINE | Hah, I think I got another one I might add later on today. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:09 pm |
Entree Rep: 0 Joined: 07 Sep 2008 Posts: 1 OFFLINE | listen, broke the 'rubber'
busted a nut up in ur 'mother'
so how do you feel about havin another little 'brother',
one shot to your 'face' and your structure is 'erased'
leavin you in your 'place'
undo my 'shoelace'
and tie it around your 'face',
hook it to a treebranch 10 feet up and spray your facade with 'mace'.
Light a match at your feet and watch your carcuss burn into 'ashes',
cops pull me over but can’t find where the 'stash is'.
hidden in the trunk is the 'sticky icky',
golden shrooms that i eat up 'quickly'.
I ask for a 'T' and then for a 'L'?
What does that 'spell'
Acura 'TL'
where i roll my 'L'
and start feelin 'swell'
then spray some febreeze inside so no one can 'tell'?
i smoke sour diesel like its 'shwag',
then call you a 'fag'
when you try to steal from my 'bag'.
pour gasoline on a 'rag'
and put it in a bottle of 'whiskey'
watch you catch 'flame' 'swiftly'
but the 5-0 don’t know who to 'blame' Last edited 07 Sep 2008 02:19 pm by iBeatBoxAllDay | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:31 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 20  Joined: 30 Nov 2007 Posts: 1,273 OFFLINE | ima do a song on the mixtape about this
http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9D0CEEDC1530F935A35752C0A967958260 --- "Death is inevitable... Welcome it as a friend, and it can’t be your enemy”
What I wouldn’t give to start over... | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:39 pm |
FUCK SUPRA Rep: 72  Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 16,748 ONLINE | iBeatBoxAllDay wrote:
listen, broke the 'rubber'
busted a nut up in ur 'mother'
so how do you feel about havin another little 'brother',
one shot to your 'face' and your structure is 'erased'
leavin you in your 'place'
undo my 'shoelace'
and tie it around your 'face',
hook it to a treebranch 10 feet up and spray your facade with 'mace'.
Light a match at your feet and watch your carcuss burn into 'ashes',
cops pull me over but can’t find where the 'stash is'.
hidden in the trunk is the 'sticky icky',
golden shrooms that i eat up 'quickly'.
I ask for a 'T' and then for a 'L'?
What does that 'spell'
Acura 'TL'
where i roll my 'L'
and start feelin 'swell'
then spray some febreeze inside so no one can 'tell'?
i smoke sour diesel like its 'shwag',
then call you a 'fag'
when you try to steal from my 'bag'.
pour gasoline on a 'rag'
and put it in a bottle of 'whiskey'
watch you catch 'flame' 'swiftly'
but the 5-0 don’t know who to 'blame'
LMAO...............
One of My fav Eminem Freestyles ---
I’ll smack a bitch | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:46 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 14  Joined: 15 Aug 2008 Posts: 1,082 OFFLINE | 98supra wrote:
iBeatBoxAllDay wrote:
listen, broke the 'rubber'
busted a nut up in ur 'mother'
so how do you feel about havin another little 'brother',
one shot to your 'face' and your structure is 'erased'
leavin you in your 'place'
undo my 'shoelace'
and tie it around your 'face',
hook it to a treebranch 10 feet up and spray your facade with 'mace'.
Light a match at your feet and watch your carcuss burn into 'ashes',
cops pull me over but can’t find where the 'stash is'.
hidden in the trunk is the 'sticky icky',
golden shrooms that i eat up 'quickly'.
I ask for a 'T' and then for a 'L'?
What does that 'spell'
Acura 'TL'
where i roll my 'L'
and start feelin 'swell'
then spray some febreeze inside so no one can 'tell'?
i smoke sour diesel like its 'shwag',
then call you a 'fag'
when you try to steal from my 'bag'.
pour gasoline on a 'rag'
and put it in a bottle of 'whiskey'
watch you catch 'flame' 'swiftly'
but the 5-0 don’t know who to 'blame'
LMAO...............
One of My fav Eminem Freestyles
thats em?? i h0pe he was qu0ting & n0t biting this thread d0esnt respect BITING ---
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| 07 Sep 2008 02:47 pm |
FUCK SUPRA Rep: 72  Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 16,748 ONLINE | ligytt wrote:
98supra wrote:
iBeatBoxAllDay wrote:
listen, broke the 'rubber'
busted a nut up in ur 'mother'
so how do you feel about havin another little 'brother',
one shot to your 'face' and your structure is 'erased'
leavin you in your 'place'
undo my 'shoelace'
and tie it around your 'face',
hook it to a treebranch 10 feet up and spray your facade with 'mace'.
Light a match at your feet and watch your carcuss burn into 'ashes',
cops pull me over but can’t find where the 'stash is'.
hidden in the trunk is the 'sticky icky',
golden shrooms that i eat up 'quickly'.
I ask for a 'T' and then for a 'L'?
What does that 'spell'
Acura 'TL'
where i roll my 'L'
and start feelin 'swell'
then spray some febreeze inside so no one can 'tell'?
i smoke sour diesel like its 'shwag',
then call you a 'fag'
when you try to steal from my 'bag'.
pour gasoline on a 'rag'
and put it in a bottle of 'whiskey'
watch you catch 'flame' 'swiftly'
but the 5-0 don’t know who to 'blame'
LMAO...............
One of My fav Eminem Freestyles
thats em?? i h0pe he was qu0ting & n0t biting this thread d0esnt respect BITING
yea, most of that is Eminem.
I gots it on my Zune ---
I’ll smack a bitch | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:49 pm |
Oderint Dum Metuant Rep: 105  Joined: 07 Jan 2008 Posts: 37,501 ONLINE | I think I smell a fake in our midst. | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:55 pm |
FUCK SUPRA Rep: 72  Joined: 04 Mar 2008 Posts: 16,748 ONLINE | or maybe he just realy admires Emienem ---
I’ll smack a bitch | |
| 07 Sep 2008 02:56 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 20  Joined: 30 Nov 2007 Posts: 1,273 OFFLINE | btw, i give speakerzzz the win. id rather write tracks than battle. --- "Death is inevitable... Welcome it as a friend, and it can’t be your enemy”
What I wouldn’t give to start over... | |
| 07 Sep 2008 03:13 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 25  Joined: 29 May 2008 Posts: 1,111 OFFLINE | Rogue wrote:
btw, i give speakerzzz the win. id rather write tracks than battle.
Lol dawg dont puss out bro, we came to hear a show son!
Ill battle speakz then. --- I train myself to fight an army, so no man can break meDMX wrote:
Made me a leader before I was ready to lead, Took away my hunger but didn’t give me greed.
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| 07 Sep 2008 03:25 pm |
UBER 1337 Poster Rep: 24  Joined: 13 May 2007 Posts: 1,949 OFFLINE | GoDzMaRiNe wrote:
Vintage wrote:
GoDzMaRiNe wrote:
226 vs Vintage -
It is currently 12:00AM
You both get 24 hours to spit, none of this 1 week shit.
Umm..This is my tournament haha..I make the rules,judges vote..stay in your place
Speakerzzz vs Rogue
Vintage vs 226
Verses are due Wednesday..cuz im not sure what schedules r like for u guys,i personally got no more time on weekdays...BTW,for now on,its double elimination..Once these battles are over,I’ll explain the new stipulation
It should take 10minutes tops? Your giving everyone 72hours to spit 10minutes?
Okkie dokkie dude.
K,now that thats over,youve taken Rogue’s spot..
GodzMarine vs Speakerzzz
Vintage vs 226
Double Elimination --- In a sense, I’ve lost my innocence | |
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